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Posted: 13 years ago
i thinkk, geet should take revenge from pammi...and maan witness it...so maan will know that geet is at his side...and it will be easy for him to tell his past...

and dev should be punished by maan...

i want geet to be supporter of maan in his torture to this evils...

pammii...should get burned...while cooking or something...

dev...should be humiliated in office very badly...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

When are u updating...when will this soon come...

like in 10 minutes...just doing some last touches 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

like in 10 minutes...just doing some last touches 😆

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


thank you reni!
its okay..that stupid button is always having some kind of problems lo
maybe if needs to be more udpated lol
lets see what happens
how are you?



heya simi i am fyn dear...its so difficult to come via fone...got a lappy..now will be around...spammming...lol ahve to still read ur updates...running to read b4 u come behind me...love ya..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

Here is the last update for this week...guys please do leave your comments and press like...Thanks!
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 44

Geet stood in front of Maan as he looks at her with anger...she didn't know what to expect...his anger is beyond the limit..she tried to so hard to keep his anger in control and it worked too but now maybe all her efforts went to waist. She flinched when Maan grabbed her hand...he placed her hand on top of his heart..she looks at him with shock

Maan; Can you feel my heartbeat? How fast its going? I thought I lost you..

Geet: But I tried to call you

Maan (slams his palm against the wall making her flinch in fear) ITS NOT GOOD ENOUGH! Seeing those five missed calls from you made me so worry...it took me 10 minutes to find you but those 10 minutes were like hell for me. They felt like years...

Geet: Am sorry..(She looks down crying)

Maan (smirks) you are sorry...you are here enjoying yourself with your so called friends while I was hell worried about you. (he hold her arms) get this one thing straight Geet..you are only mine...if something happens to you then I will burn down everything and everyone around you.

Geet comes out of his grip and pushes him away. Maan looks at her shocked...

"I am done...I can't do this anymore...you are a Shetan...no matter what I say or do it is never good enough. What was wrong with me coming here to see my friends? Pari is like my sister...I missed her and wanted to see her..what wrong have I done? Is it my fault that your phone was turned off? I called again and again for you...but you never picked up the phone...if I wanted to leave you then I would've done that..."

Maan: You really think you could leave me?

Geet: Yes!! I could leave you...what is the point of me staying with you as your wife if you don't trust me? What is the existence of our relationship if you don't trust me? What am I then? Your mistress?

Maan: GEETT!

Geet: You turned my life upside down...you married me without my will, you kept me hostage in that house, I cannot see my parents anymore because I am afraid of their reaction when they find out the truth, my dreams of studying further have been tarnished...BUT I gave all that up happily..for you and what do I get in return...your anger? But not anymore...what is the point of me staying with you if you don't trust me?

She begins to leave but Maan holds her hand and pulls her toward him roughly...he corners her in the back of the changing room...he makes her stand against the wall while he presses his whole body on her to stop her from moving...she looks at Maan's face which was mere inches away..she could feel his breath on her face...he looks at her with anger

Maan: you think I don't trust you? (She turns her face away but Maan holds her cheeks and makes her face him..) If I didn't trust you Mrs.Geet Singh Khruana...then I wouldn't have told you my past...shared with you the pain, given you my mothers diary...which is very close to me...and if you think that I will ALLOW you to leave then you are wrong! YOU made a choice of staying with me AFTER I had freed you but you chose to come back...now you are stuck with this Shetan however he may be. You are stuck in that Shetan Ka Ghar forever..you cannot leave both..you can try but you won't succeed...you understand! (he says with a threatening voice...) And as you seeing your parents...well I will take care of that...but are you ready to see them? Face them?

Geet: I don't need your help...I will see them on my own and face any consequences they give me...

Maan: And you think I will let you go alone? They have the right to meet their son-in-law don't you think?

Geet: leave me...

Maan: Why can't you understand how much I love you!!!!! (He yells..Geet stops moving looking at him...he slams the hand against the wall) You are part of me...I cannot eat or breath without you anymore..I cannot live without you...Yes, I am Shetan, a very selfish one in fact..and I won't tolerate anyone that might be come between us...you are my love...my soul and my shadow...how can you think of going away from me...You have any idea when I received a call of you missing from home...how many different thoughts ran through my mind? I felt so helpless, for the first time..I didn't know what to do...I felt so weak and out of control of my mind when I considered the possibly of something happening to you...(he moves away from her showing his back to her...she stood there shocked and confused)

Geet: but Pammi Massi knew where I was going...

Maan (turns around to look at her..) What?

Geet: Yeah she was the one who asked me where I was going..and I told her...(Maan looks lost in thought) Anyway, what does it matter...you don't trust me enough...

She leaves the changing room...she tried opening the door of the store but it was locked..she looked outside of the door and no one was there..she was confused...she didn't see Pari or Yash or anyone around for that matter...

Maan: Its funny how people leave the place in a hurry over a mere bomb threat...

Geet; what do you mean? (She stands against the door...as Maan nears her...)

Maan: You think that I would allow anyone to come between us or see you in this dress (he looks at her from top to bottom)...I had to take care of that problem..especially your friends...

Geet; what happened to my friends? What happened to Pari and Yash?

Maan: Nothing...FOR NOW...(he comes near her face..with a smirk)

Geet: what do you mean?

Maan (touches her face) just know that they are safe...(he caresses her arm slowly moving his fingers down...while Geet tried to move her arm away due to tickling...) You know seeing you in this dress...(she looks at him...) makes me...(Geet blushes when she followed his eyes looking at her very closely...she tries to push him away but Maan holds her arms above her head) You really can't escape even if you try...so why bother...

Geet: I want to go home...

Maan: You will leave when I say..but for now...am not ready to let you go...

He lets go of her hands and places his hands on her waist..pulling her closer to him...she places her hands flat against his chest...to keep some distance but Maan pushes her more against himself...he fans his breath on her face...she closes her eyes..feeling him...he replaces his hot breath with slow kisses...starting at her eyes...licking away her tears...he gives her a peck on her lips, moving down to her neck..gently biting her making her gasp...he was gentle at first then his biting started getting harsher...

He was mad, in pain..she holds on to his shoulders for support...he moves his face from one side to another...making her scream in pain...he kisses her face..scratching her with his beard as he moved harshly...he kisses her lips trying to taste her..he makes her open her mouth, tasting everything..as if she would disappear any minute now...he looks at her...

"How can you think of leaving me?"
"I will die without you Geet..."
"This heart only beats for you...what is the purpose if you are not with me?"
"what is the point of my existence?"

Geet looks at him with tears and hugs him...

"am sorry..."
"I can't live without you either..."
"I love you..."

Maan hugs her back...and picks her up...she wraps her legs around his waist...his hands on her waist holding her...both kiss each other..Maan slowly moves back..his one hand slightly moves downward caressing her thighs...Geet eyes open...she realizes what kind of compromising position she is in...

She tries to get out of the kiss but Maan holds her head in place...while still kissing...he opens his eyes looking at her...he had mischievous glint in them...making Geet know what he intends to do...he goes to the changing room...closing the door with his foot...he places her against the wall...but not all the way back...as he hand move toward her dress zipper...he slowly slides the zipper down...he breaks off the kiss to get some breath...he starts kissing her neck in the areas where he bit her, slowly soothing her pain...she hugs him tighter...Maan hands went to her leg..slowly moving up...Geet places her hands on top of his to stop him... realizing where they are...

"You can't stop me Geet..."

She realized that is true..she can never stop him..even if she tried..she will not be successful...he took her hands and place them on his shoulder...she slowly hugs him...while his hands again roamed upwards...she hides her face in the nook of his neck...slowly kissing him..making him groan...she kisses his face...moving her head from one side to another...trying to kiss his pain away...Maan holds her hair, clutching them tightly in his hand...forcing her to look at him..

"You are making me crazy Geet...don't regret your actions..."

he kisses her harshly on her lips not letting her talk anymore...he puts her on the floor...as he removes his shirt and waist coat..he loosens his tie as he moves closer and closer to her..while Geet slides back...looking down...he sits on his knee...he holds her knee stopping her from moving...he pulls her toward himself...Geet puts her hands on the floor as Maan leans over her like a lion about to eat his pray

"Are you ready to pay for the 10 minutes of hell you gave me?"

He smirks...her dress was already opened from the back...he pulls her straps down...Geet tries to grab the shirt feeling shy...but Maan takes the shirt tying it around her hands...now she was trapped and locked...she knew her Shetan will not listen nor stop...Maan sees a hook on the wall to hang up the clothes...he makes her stand and places his shirt inside the hook...she stood there looking at him shocked...her hands were not only tied with the shirt but now tied to the hook...

She tried to release her hands from the shirt or to loosen the hold of the shirt from the hook but it was no use...she looks at Maan as he stands there looking at her with a smile..she was no longer bare from the top...Maan eyes look at her from top to bottom...he places both his hands on either side of her as he kisses her below the neck..moving down toward her curves..his one hand rests on her stomach...pushing the dress down until it is pooled around her feet...

She arches her back giving him more access as he bites her harshly around her curves...he takes both of her legs and wraps it around his waist...he kept kissing Geet..both lost in each other..Geet gasps as she felt Maan inside her...she wanted to hold him but couldn't...she felt helpless...Maan moved harshly..he wanted to show her how much he was in..what he felt like...she looks at him...and moves her face closer to his giving him a slight peck on his lips
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Dev is outside of the company...walking home...he was angry at Maan..for making him work all day with no break...he knew his weakness Geet...he smirks...he will regret his every action...as he walked..someone from the side pushed him down...Dev turns around to look at that person

"you made a very bad mistake..." Dev stands up before him...someone from behind..holds Dev...he manages to escape and run...as he was running someone hits him on his neck with a stick and runs away. Dev sat on his knees on the road gasping for breath...he held his neck..unable to speak or breath...the guys run to another corner and looks at him..."The job is done..." They smirk and leaves Dev all alone on the road...
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Pammi was home pacing back and forth...she waited for Maan..she knew that by now he wouldn't gotten her message...but now she awaited to see his pained face..she wanted to see him in pain..for the pain he caused her and her son. She heard the phone ring... smiling..thinking it might be Maan she picks up the phone...

"Hello..." She couldn't believe who was on the other end of the line...

Okay guys I tried making it long...so you guys better leave long comments😳
Ohh and keep guessing who was on the phone...😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey...me first..lovely update...love this shetan...Hope this Pammi & dev are out of SKG
Edited by reachsky2011 - 13 years ago
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Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: leverne



heya simi i am fyn dear...its so difficult to come via fone...got a lappy..now will be around...spammming...lol ahve to still read ur updates...running to read b4 u come behind me...love ya..


woohoo good to see you
omg you got a laptop yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
haha will wiat for you to comment on the updates😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update




making out in the trial room
























its now high time for dev nd pammi to suffer





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Posted: 13 years ago
wow simi...intense drama...pammi is such an evil i tell you...wow geet in a dress in front of maan...hope geet tells her parents the truth ...

love maan treatment to dev

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