Shetan Ka Ghar-Thread 3

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NEW THREAD!!!

Thanks so much guys for this new thread...it really means a lot to me..and keep commenting/likes and contineu to support me..I hope I don't disappoint you guys😳

Not much I can say about Shetan Ka Ghar or give you guys an overview of what happened so far. So new readers I guess you just have to read all the parts and let me know what you guys think!😳

Important note:All the new readers please if you want me to add you on the pm list please please please send me a buddy request so that it is easier for me to keep track of the list...
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 24

Geet sat in the room thinking about what said...she hugs her knees and cries...she hated him...he always tried to break her down..why? What was her fault...she kept asking the same questions in her head, in which there is no answer too...only he could answer them. Why is she so stubborn? Why? What does he want from life? From her? Why hide his emotions, the only thing that scared her was his anger...there was no control over it...she was in a loosing battle state..she couldn't win nor fight..not with him...he would always get what he wants...She gets up changing her dress...she walks down the stairs leaving...

Maan sat in his office...trying to control his emotions..he couldn't...he was angry at himself and not her...he ruined her life... because of his anger...and after today he couldn't even think of facing her...rape...its so easy to say rape..it was like a stab in my heart..is this how much she could understand me? Am I really become that much of a shetan that I can't even look into my own eyes? Its not his fault, that he can't control his anger nor know how to display his emotions. No one would understand..no one...his phone rings..

Maan: Hello...what is the status?...(he smirks) good...make sure he doesn't get a job anywhere...and foreclose his home as well...I want him on the streets...begging...good...keep me updated and follow his every move...(he hangs up the phone...he looks at the file...) pretty soon we will meet...pretty soon...you were hard to find but no worries...I got you now...(he burns the file...and throws it in the dustbin...)

It was night now, not once did he call home for Geet. He didn't want to go home...he couldn't talk to her or face her...so he decided to drown himself in work. To keep his mind busy. He returned home around 10 but couldn't find. He looks in the bedroom...it was empty...Pari's room was back to the way it was..he felt guilty now...for what he did...he goes down again...he saw Nakul in the kitchen...

Maan: Nakul where is your ma'am

Nakul: i don't know sir before leaving she just said that she is going to a darag...its been four hours now

Maan: Couldn't you guys call me?! Why do I pay you guys?

Nakul (looks down) sorry sir

Maan: You are lucky that Kaka is your grandfather or else I would have fired you (he leaves...Maan takes out his car to go to the darag..there were at least four drags in Delhi..he decided to check each and everyone of them to find her...he stops the car at the last darag..it has been one hour since he has been driving..he looked all over but he came up empty handed..he looked at the darag in front of him...he was getting this feeling as if she is inside..he steps out of the car..it has been a long time since he steeped into a temple...all his believes and everything ended that day...he never believed in God...what can he do after snatching everything away from him...he was about to step inside when a baba stopped him

Baba: you can't go inside with shoes...

Maan: I have to find someone

Baba: You came to the home of a God...I am sure you won't leave empty handed...

Maan (smirks) we will see about that...(he takes out his shoes and covers his head...as all the guys had a rumal on their heads..he steps inside...looking for her)
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Geet sat inside looking for her answers...she looked back feelings something new...as if Maan is nearby...she holds the chunni tightly in her hands...No he can't be here...she has been here for a while now and if he cared about her then he would've come long time ago...she didn't want to go back there anymore. She can't do that...no...it would be better if she leaves...but before she does.she has to tell her parents or see them one last time. He did say she can leave whenever she wants...he freed her...(she smiled at that..) free..it sounded so weird...how can he free her? By just letting her go? Is marriage a game to him that he can marry and decide to end it whenever he wants? What does he think of himself a God? He didn't care about her feelings of what she must be going through with this truth that she is married to a Shetan. He broke her dreams and instead of mending them he is breaking it more into tiny pieces. Just like him she had no hope anymore. She would rather leave then to live with his anger. She can't do it anymore. She can't fight with him anymore...she can't...(she gets up to leave but baba stops her)

Baba: beti you came to god's home and God won't disappoint you. He will give you all the answers that you desire in time

Geet: When Baba...I feel like I am getting more tangled and confused with my unanswered questions. I don't know what to do.

Baba: There is always time for answers...you need to understand as well...look at the situations in front of you and try to find solutions to them.

Geet:It is so hard to do that when the situations don't make it easier either

Baba: Its never easy to find the answers but one must learn to find against all odd situations. You have to fight...here beti (he hands her the thread) for one you came here for..tie this on his arm...

Geet (looks at him shocked) but Baba

Baba: You came here to find your answers but only he can give you answers...tie this on his arm...(he leaves)

Geet (looks at the thread in front of her...in the back Maan stands..she looks in front of her at Maan. He comes and stands in front of her..he holds her hand and brings her out of there...) let me go Maan.

Maan: Do you know I looked for you everywhere...

Geet (snatches her hand) why? You said that I can leave whenever I want...so now am leaving..(she tired to walk away but Maan holds her arm and brings her back)

Maan: you are not going anywhere...I take my words back

Geet: What am I your puppet? You can say and do whatever you want whenever you want?

Maan: just get in the car

Geet: No...I am going...you freed me so why are you stopping me now? (the tawiz that Baba gave to her falls on the floor...she looks at it...his words rang in her head..she picks up the tawiz...and holds it in front of him..) I will go in one condition

Maan: What?

Geet: Tie this

Maan (looks at it) no..I don't believe in this

Geet: But I do...(Maan looks at her and turns around...she comes and stands in behind him...she takes his arm and ties it on his arm...he was about to stop her but backed his hand away...after she tied the thread she sat in the car...Maan quietly gets in the car and drives away...none spoke)

Precap: Did you eat?

Note: I tired making this as long as possible because I don't think I will be able to update this tomorrow...😭 so do leave you comments/likes and I will respond back to everyone..

Also, a lot of you guys are confused about Maan and what he wants...all I can say is that he is a complex and a very confusing character...in due time I hope you guys understand him and where he is coming from as well as Geet.😳😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😈SHETAN KA GHAR😈
CHAPTERS:



Thread 1

Thread 2

Current: Thread 3
Chapter 24 (above)

Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dhink Chika.Me Me first to comment. Happy to see Maan doesn't want her to leave. Also in spite he is not believing in god he still allowed to tie thread. Maan is changing but slowly. Nice update.Congo for new thread.😊
Edited by CutieTeju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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liked the last paragraph- maan did not stop her from tying the taveez!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hope baba's words will come true and Maaneet will come closer...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on d new thread.. :):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new thread

wonderful part 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Did he have sex with her at pari's room after he got angry I didn't understand what happened?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on da new thread
it was amzing
cant wait for da nxt part
i will always comment on ere
loved dis ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS!!!!!! FOR NEW THREAD
nyc update dear finaly kuch chnge to hua shaitan me

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