Shetan Ka Ghar-Thread 2

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Hey guys,!!!

Wow second thread already!

Thank you very much! (This is my second attempt in writing this speech...my computer failed while I was typing away...so I hope I remember what I wrote before 😆😆😆)

I love you guys...I am going into my SKG mode from Om Shanti Om while he was giving a speech to his friend when he would receive a reward on the street (I hope you guys know which scene I am talking about😆😆) Ahem *clears throat* Dostoon, behenoon aur behnoon (bahi toh nahi hai yaya par😆) I would like to thank you guys from the bottom of my heart for making me come this way as a writer. With you guys and this show I would've remained a silent reader...this show and your love for me gave me the courage and strength to keep writing again and again. I hope I will keep you guys entertained throughout with better and new stories. I, Simi, promise to keep you guys happy with my stories forever and ever or until you guys get bored of me😆

Thank you! (*taalia*)

I hope you guys enjoyed my SKG moment!😆❤️
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Not much I can say about Shetan Ka Ghar or give you guys an overview of what happened so far. So new readers I guess you just have to read all the parts and let me know what you guys think!😳

Important note:All the new readers please if you want me to add you on the pm list please please please send me a buddy request so that it is easier for me to keep track of the list...
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 14


Maan sat in his room in the dark. His room door slowly opened. He looked up and saw his Nanny with a smile. He looks at her hand, she was carrying a food tray. She turns on the light, Maan covers his eyes...she puts the tray on the table and sits next to Maan.

"Maan baba what are you doing sitting here in the dark?" Maan was 10 years old and the only son of Ranjvir Singh Khurana and Savitiri Khurana. He always has been a quiet kid. Really excellent in school, gets straight A's. Any parent would be happy to have him as their kid but when it comes to making friends..that is one area he lacks in. He never got the love that a kid should have from his parents. They were here at home every day but yet they seemed so far and distanced from him. As if whatever he does was not good enough. He loved the dark which seems to be his one and only friend. His Nanny Pammi, has taken care of him ever since he was little. She is the only person that he saw love in the eyes for him.

Maan: because I like it...

Pammi: Come and eat. I made your favorite. Its pasta

Maan: I am not hungry

Pammi: Maan baba if you don't eat then how will you grow up to be strong? Now come and eat...

Maan: Okay..where is mom?

Pammi (looks down) She is in her room...

Maan: ohh then I will eat with her...

Pammi: But

Maan: NO i will go see her right now...(He jumps out of the bed to meet his mom before Pammi could stop him. she sighs and quietly follows him...Maan knocks on his parents bedroom...) Mom...(he slightly opens the door and saw her lying on the bed. He jumps on the bed and gently pats her belly and kisses it. She was about seven months pregnant...he looks at his mother who was sleeping. Pammi comes and holds his hand...)

Pammi: I told you not to bother her...let her sleep

Maan: Okay..did mom eat?

Pammi: yeah she did...now sshhh and come with me...

Maan: wait..(he puts his head on her heart..listening to her heart beat)
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Maan comes out of his past and looks at Geet. She was moving a little. He sighs in relief. She slowly opens her eyes and saw Maan sitting next to her. She tried to get up but couldn't...she was emotionally and physically tired...tired of fighting...thinking...everything..she didn't have it in her anymore. She was sort of relieved to see him sitting next to her.

Maan: What happened to you? (He asks her in anger...Geet looks at him..unable to say anything..she didn't know if should tell him that he read his diary...what will be his reaction...) I am asking you something Geet...

Geet (looks away) woh umm I fainted

Maan: What do you remember last?

Geet: I just came up here after breakfast...then I don't know

Maan (shocked) You were here the whole day like this? (He gets up in anger...the doctor came in the house led by the security guards from outside...the doctor was in his 30's male...Maan looks at him with anger..)

Doctor: Hello my name is Dr. Armaan Malik

Maan: I called you here for a check up not to socialize. There is the patience on the bed.

Armaan (clears his throat) okay..(he goes near Geet and sits next to her on the bed...he holds her hand and feels her pulse...anger ran through his veins when Maan saw him touching her like that...he then proceeded to take out his stethoscope and placed it on her heart to listen to her heartbeat. Maan clenched his fists...Geet kept her eyes on Maan for his reaction..she could tell that he wanted to hit the doctor for being this close to her. He could do anything. She was kind of worried, not for herself, but for the doctor. She knew how possessive he was about her, he didn't even let the servants be home alone with her. What made him like this? What is he hiding...) So what is your name? (Maan looks at him talking to Geet..he then looked at Geet who gave Armaan uncomfortable smile..)

Geet: Geet...

Armaan: Geet..hmmm that is a beautiful name...(Maan took two steps toward the doctor..how dare he flirt with his wife in front of him..if she wasn't sick then he would've killed him right now...) Okay Geet..looks like you were just stressed out about something...I have prescribed you some medication that you might need to take for couple of weeks. (Maan comes and stands next to him...) Mr. Khruana can I speak with you outside...(Maan nodes his head and both go outside of the room...)

Maan: Yes

Armaan: Do you know what she keeps thinking or stressing about? She fainted because of the emotional stress she has on her brain and overtime that can't be good for her. Please keep that in mind.

Maan: hmmm anything else?

Armaan: No..just make sure she takes her medication and have her come to my office in two weeks for a check up. I will take your leave now.
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Geet turned her face away as soon as Maan entered the room. She couldn't look at his mad face and his eyes asking so many questions. The questions she didn't have any answers to. Maan stood by the window. He made a phone...

Maan: Starting tomorrow I want at least two people in the house keeping an eye on Geet. Also, send someone home right now! I don't care! I need someone here right now!

He hangs up the phone and leaves the room without once looking at Geet...he slams the door making her jump...she lies on her belly hiding her face in the pillow, crying. Few minutes later, Maan opens the door again. Geet didn't turn around to know who it was. She could sense him and smell him. Maan saw her lying down with her head buried in the pillow. He could tell that she has or is crying by her sniffling. He almost crushed the medicines in his hand listening to her cries. He took slow steps toward her. He stood there waiting for her to turn around. Her body stiffened as soon as Maan stood next to her, he knew that she knows he is standing there. He puts the medicines down and sits on the side of the bed. He puts his hand near the pillow and with his other hand he touches her shoulder. Geet just laid there stiff the moment she felt his weight on the bed, she was scared to look at him. She could feel him leaning closer to her...she tried so hard to not shake when he touched her shoulder. She held onto the pillow for support, as tight as she could. Maan slowly brought his hand to the pillow and removed it...Geet had no other option but to let go to the pillow. She kept her eyes closed with silent tears still rolling down from her eyes.

Maan: Geet you have to take your medication...(She doesn't reply back but just lays there...he makes her turn around..she slowly opens her eyes with tears..she looks at him and immediately hugs him. Maan was shocked at this total unexpected turn of events. He felt his shirt soak with her tears...he didn't know how to console her...so he just waited for her to finish...He heard something inaudible from Geet..he leaned closer to her...) What?

Geet: Love me...(Geet said without looking at him...Maan was shocked...did she just say what he think she said? Why all of a sudden? How is he suppose to react? She waited for him to say something or to make some move but when he didn't she looks at him with tears...) Love me...(She lies back on the bed pulling Maan...)

Okay guys!!! I am super busy today...so another part of SKG will be hmmm maybe by next week unless you guys convince me otherwise 😆😆 I have a lot on my plate today...
I have to catch up with Geet
Update BM and CYSF
Start writing HAHK part
ohh and maybe work 😆😆
So yeah very busy indeed today...So that is of my dukh bhari kahani!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😈SHETAN KA GHAR😈
CHAPTERS:



Thread 1

Current: Thread 2
Chapter 14 (above)

Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ossum dear
me first
great part dear
ohhh
so now they make love
waiting for that
hope maan does but he want to know moe
lets see
waiting for the next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls update soon dear
waiting more
dont do late pls dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow great update!

So geet is initiating it!! omg...i wonder what maan will do!

please please please update today if possible!!!! or i will throw a tantrum!!😡

😆
Edited by XXaquafireXX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So yeah very busy indeed today...So that is of my dukh bhari kahani!😆
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uuufff babaji dekho mere yaar ki dukh bhaari kahani full of so called dukh..
lvd d update
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yes congo on ur new thread...
continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new thread...
oh god i love it when maan gets jealous when some one gets closer to her...
his childhood seems a troubled one...
thought had riches it lacked the love...
if his mom was pregnant does he have a sibling...
pl pl do give another update on this bcoz u left us at cliff hanger...how can u but y maan asked him to love her...wats going on her mind and heart...dont torture us like this dear...pl give us the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for ur new thread...

But this is not done...such a mindblowing part...n you end it like this...no you cant do this...injustice...
Coming to the updt it was superb...amzing...but you have to updt soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update sorry double post
Edited by muraad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread yaar !!!!
i loved the update ...

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