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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

Simi kaha gayi tu?? Lumch break hua kya?

no am posting it now lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nt 2day bt our geet ending on 16th dec'11
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guys just because the show is over that doesn't mean so is our spirit...Maaneet are still alive in our hearts and always will be. The show made a special place in my heart and that place will always be reserved for them...

So lets just keep their journey continuing with fan fics
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 46

Maan stared at the pictures with anger..his blood boiled seeing his dad in the picture talking to Pammi...he still looked the same like he did years ago except with his face covered with wrinkles...he still remember the times when he used to beat him up for no reason...always angry...he hated himself for getting his traits..he hated the very blood that runs through his veins...he held the paper weight in his hand in anger and threw it against the window...everyone looks at him with shock and fear..Maan looks at all of them

Maan: I PAY YOU GUYS TO WORK NOT TO STARE AT ME!! (Everyone quickly scattered to their places..Maan looks at the photo and burns it with anger and throws it in a dustbin...he makes a call) Hello...I need xyz pills...DO WHAT I SAY! SEND IT TO MY OFFICE NOW!

he needed to calm down...he wanted to see Geet..his anger and pain was beyond his control now..he didn't know what he can do or what he is capable of now...
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Today I slapped Maan...it hurts me to see him in pain but I had no choice..if I hadn't slapped him then Ranjvir would've beaten him up..and I won't be able to see that...Maan already thought about the baby's name..its going to be a girl..Pari..what a wonderful name...

I can just can't wait for this little angle to come and shine in our lives..maybe she is the only thing we need to bring back happiness that Maan needs...I could see it in his eyes the longiness he has for her...He always wanted to be a big brother...and I can tell he is going to be the best big brother to Pari..his angle...as he calls her...hopefully Pari can change Ranjvir too...maybe she can bring a smile on his face when he holds her in his arms for the first time...maybe...

Geet looks at the diary with tears..there was so much pain written in here...she could imagine herself being there along with his mom...seeing her face..hoping that things would get better...it pained her to know that his father used to beat Maan..how can anyone do that to a kid? Was he even human?

She closes her eyes remembering Maan and his anger..but somewhere deep down she knew..he will not do that to their kid...if they have one...the love that she saw in his eyes for her...the pain in his eyes whenever she is hurt or cries..she knew that he won't be like his father...

She was curious to meet his father..she wanted to see him...and talk to him..question him for changing a sweet little kid to this shetan...why?

She gets up to go downstairs to get water...she saw Pammi sitting down with Dev...Geet always had bad feelings about Pammi...she could tell she wasn't a good person..she could see the dark soul she has in her..the evil smile behind that smile...

Pammi: Geet..(Geet stops and looks at her) I wanted to ask you something...(She stands in front of Geet..) Where are your parents? I don't see them calling you or even visiting you here...(Geet looks at her with tears) Are they dead or something? (Dev smiles and stands real close to her...Geet moves back a little)

Dev: Yeah...Geet...where are they?

PammI: you know I would love to meet them..invite them here...(Geet runs back upstairs crying...Maan who was standing there for two minutes heard the whole conversation...he closed his hands in fists..seeing Geet in tears because of them...he had come home early to see Geet...he wanted to calm down.her one touch made him forget everything...)

Maan (comes inside and stands before them) HOW DARE YOU MAKE HER CRY? What rights do you have to ask her that?

Pammi: Maan I was just asking about her parents..and I am like your mother..

Maan: NO YOU ARE NOT! My mother is dead remember...(he goes up the stairs...)

Geet lies on the bed crying..thinking about her parents...she had no answer to their questions..what can she say? That she can't see them anymore? She looks up when Maan barges in the room...he holds her hand and makes her stand up...without saying anything...he drags her down the stairs...and out to the door...

Geet: Where are we going?

Maan: just sit in the car!!! (She does what he says and Maan just started to drive...he stops the car in front of a house...Geet looks at the house shocked...)

Geet: Why did you bring me here...

Maan: To see your parents...lets go

Geet: NO I don't want to go...I want to go back home..(Maan gets out of the car and makes her get out..he holds her hand to walk to the door but Geet protested) Let go Maan...I don't want to see them...

Maan: Why you don't want to see them? Are you scared of their reaction? Are you ashamed of our marriage?

Geet (looks at him in tears) No, Yes and no...I am scared what they are going to say or do after they see me...I don't think I can face them...

Maan: you have me. Nothing will happen I wont allow anyone to say or do anything to you..that is my promise...

he holds her hand tightly and walks to the house together...the door slowly opened and Geet looked at her parents..while they looked at her shocked...

Guys I know it is short and there was no Maaneet moments...but please bare with me..I will have Maaneet moments later..😳 Thank you Smriti for your wonderful idea😳
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yuppie me 1st who comment.
Arey aaj show mai maaneet ki 1st weddin aniversary bhi dikhayi.
Awesome part.
I loved it.
Me curious a knw abt maan's dad's truth behind his behaviour.
Acha hua maan ne us chudail pammi aur danav dev par chilaya. Un dono ki full on band bajana.
Hw wil geet's parents react wen they cum to knw whole truth?
Next part is gona to interesting.
Continue soon.
Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is chapter 46 correct it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part, I hate dev and pammi I feel like killing them with my bare hands, Love the way shetan takes his geet to her parents, waiting to see their reaction to this sudden visit.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...
Finally maan took geet to her parents...
Waiting for next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it. maan is so sweet he has taken geet home.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG what's going to happen?? What will their reaction???😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
what was the pills maan had asked for
the diary is full of pain
wonder what more is there
continue soon

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