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Posted: 13 years ago
hey pushpi give me half hour or so i will update
still have to write the part😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

hey pushpi give me half hour or so i will update
still have to write the part😆

eagerly waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me too waiting, yesterday i was crazily refreshing the page twice per minute... now am ready to do it 3 time per minute ! 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
yippie youre online
pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

Here is the next part...first of all I want to wish each and everyone of you guys a VERY VERY VERY HAPPY DIWALI!!!!!!!!! I wish I was in India right now to enjoy this wonderful event..Diwali is my best memories that I have 😭😭

"Maa Laxmi will come to your house and will shower her blessings upon you, remember to keep your doors open and decorate them with lots of lights and flowers."




😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 22

Maan came home after two days. He was shocked to see her still here. He expected her to leave. Yes, he knows marrying her without her consent was bad..he shouldn't have done that..but now when he wants to free her from this marriage she chooses to stay? Why? What does she want...but if she wants to stay here with a Shetan then so be it...He closes his eyes as he remembers him telling her of his past. He didn't know why...he never told or even spoke about his past to anyone..it was something he kept to himself. What was she? What power does she have to make him break the barrier that he spent years to built...the wall that no one dared to break...

Doesn't matter anymore...he has some other things to take care of before he can get to Geet...he sits on the chair...he had to rebuilt himself again..that one phone call two days ago reminded him what is more important...he can't forget it...he can't let her break him..no he can't...he had promised himself that he won't let anyone affect him anymore. He had built up this wall from every emotion possible and he can't let anyone break that wall. No..not even Geet. He smacks his hand on the table..if only..if only he was quick enough he would've saved his mom and Pari...if only...its his fault..he should've known what his father is doing to his mother. He should've protected them. He had promised to take care of Pari and he failed at it. He killed her. He doesn't deserve any happiness...no not after after he had failed at his most important task...He goes and makes a drink for himself...he drowns himself in guilt...he was about to pour another drink when his phone rings. He smirks seeing the call...

"Hello...good...give me report every minute, every hour, every second...I want details of EVERYTHING! You understand?..." He smirks hearing the other person on the line talk in fear...he was back to himself again..as the Shetan, that everyone knew..even Geet..he loved it when people feared him..."good...keep me updated and have the report sent to my office ASAP!" He hangs up the phone before the person could say anything else...He takes another drink and gulps it down..."start counting your days..."

Geet stayed outside the study room as she listened to him talking on the phone to someone. Who was he talking to? She hid behind the pillar as she saw him coming toward the door. He stopped at the top of the stairs and looked back. She held her breath. Maan went down the stairs. After few seconds, she comes out from behind the pillar. She goes downstairs thinking he may have left. As soon as she was downstairs, he came and stood in front of her. She was shocked. She tried backing up but she found herself stuck between the rail of the stairs to him. He stands very close to her looking at her.

Maan smacks his lips on her. She opens her eyes and looks at him in shock. She was expecting him to yell or something but she never expected a kiss from him. He bites and licks her lips..."If you want to listen to my conversation then just ask me." He squeezes her waist..."DON'T need to play these games with me Geet..." He lets her go and turns to leave..when Geet comes in front of him...with anger and holds his collar...

Geet: you are the one that played the game with me..not me...you started this dirty game...(he looks at her hands and then at her with spitting fire eyes..)

Maan: You can end it by leaving...Am not stopping you...(he holds her hands tightly telling her to let go but she didn't budge)

Geet; Of course why would you stop me after you used my body. You want me to leave, isn't that right, so that you can bring someone else here. The person that you want someone to keep an eye out is some other girl right? You will do the same you did to me right? (She shakes him after getting no respond) Answer me!

Maan (he removes her hands) if that's what you think then fine.

Geet: I am YOUR wife...you have to answer me

Maan (gets mad) WIFE...WIFE..WIFE! Is that the only thing you know.

Geet: I want rights...

Maan: Ohh yeah I forgot...okay then...(he calls someone on the phone...) I want someone here right now! within next 10 minutes...(he hangs up the phone...within 10 minutes a guy comes in barley holding papers in his hands as he looked at Maan with fear) I want to make Geet, my wife, half owner of all of my properties. (She looks at him shocked) Have the papers ready. (he looks back to Geet) There you got your rights...you can take all your rights and leave if you want...(he was about to leave) and don't even dare bring up these rights drama again. I have other things to worry about. (he leaves)

Geet looked at the papers that the guy presents to her and rips it..."If you think by making me owner of half of your propertoes is giving me my rights than you are highly mistaken Mr. Khruana..."

Precap: GGGEEETTT

Note: So you guys will notice a change in Maan as well...I will build more on his character as well as Geet's character..it is not the right time for now to have Maan change his behavior and his character nor have Geet try to change him...so I hope you guys continue to love this Shetan as you guys did in the beginning...

Also, I hate to bear bad news on Diwali but I have to get it out...I might do these updates every other day instead of everyday...I am not getting likes/comments I should be getting for this thread...I am not asking for you guys to spam or anything..its just that I have been adding people on buddy list for this fan fic and for me not to see the comments/likes that I should be seeing is very disheartening...and I HATE asking for you guys again and again to like/comment because I know that each and everyone one of you guys have your own personal life and is busy with other things as I am...but it would be nice to know that I am not wasting my time in updating this daily..I know the updates have been shorter..I am getting quiet busy at work since end of the month is approaching meaning more last minute things I have to do and I do write these updates at the last minute just so I can keep my promise of updating at the last minute...

I really do appreciate those who do comment everyday...I really do but those who can't (ie.silent readers) please do press the like button to give me a hint if I should continue this daily updates or not...
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first
lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update... precap sounds interesting😊 so are you really gonna stop updating daily???😭
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
happy diwali...
loved the update...
seems like maan cannot b cheated...
i think he is trying to keep an eye on his father who was in jail and might have got released...
he is affected by her but y he doesnt want her to b with him then...
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
Outstanding simi I love this shetan
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mast hai...its really not easy for Maan to change just like this..
nice part...
cont soon

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