Kumkum se judi Kundali PreeRan OS

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Kumkum se judi Kundali(A horoscope connected with vermilion)(Based on the PreeRan track in Kumkum bhagya)

This OS is an attempt to complete the PreeRan track in Kumkumbhagya which was left incomplete.

Preeta who was in coma was admitted in the hospital.But because of the spread of fire, all the patients were shifted to another place.Luthras who went abroad were shocked.Karan came back from abroad in search of Preeta.But he could not find her.Preeta who had lost memory was living as Priya Ahuja.During a function food poisoning issue took place and Preeta took Karan to the hospital.But Karan didn't realize that Priya who saved his life was Preeta.Preeta came to Luthra house as a cook.Though he felt that the food tasted like Preeta's,he didn't understand that the cook was Preeta.

Thanks to my friend Shesha for suggesting a title for this OS.



Karan got dressed up to go to his office.

The aroma from the kitchen brought a smile to his face.

Karan:When Preeta cooked also the same smell used to come.Surprisingly this lady cooks food like Preeta.Today I want to meet her and appreciate her.After a long time I had delicious food because of her.

Karan walked to the kitchen.

Preeta was cooking there.Karan could see only her back.

Karan:I am sorry for disturbing you.But I hadn't met you before when you joined here.So if I don't meet you now,because of my busy schedule I don't know when can I meet you.That's why I came here.The tiffin which you sent to my office was delicious. It reminded me of my wife's food.Thank you so much for making tasty food for me.I forgot to ask my assistant what your name is.May I know your name?

Preeta turned back and smiled.

Preeta:Priya Ahuja.I had seen you at the party Mr.Karan Luthra.

Karan was shocked to see her.

He remembered Priya taking him to the hospital.

He became emotional.

Karan:How can your name be Priya?

Preeta was stunned:Why do you ask like that?

Karan:It's not possible that your name is Priya.

Preeta became dull.

Preeta:I think you got to know about my past.

Karan:Past?

Preeta:I was in coma.When I opened my eyes I could not remember anything from my past.I didn't remember my own family.I forgot my own name too.So somebody in the hospital named me Priya. The hospital nurse helped me.She gave me shelter and food.But I can't depend on her always and be a burden for her.That's why I searched for a job and came here.

Karan thought:Preeta lost her memory again.She doesn't even remember her own sister Shrishti and her son Rajveer.What a fate!My own wife is working as a cook in my house.How pathetic!

Preeta:Who told you that Priya is not my original name?

Karan:Nobody told me anything.But I knew it.

Preeta was stunned.

Preeta:If nobody told you about it how did you about my name?

Karan:Not just your name,but I know everything about you.

Preeta was surprised.

Preeta:You knew me before?What is my name?Where is my family?

Karan:Your name is Preeta.You are not someone who should be living as a cook.You are a physiotherapist.

Preeta was surprised.

Preeta:I have a lovely name.And no job is small or big.So I am not ashamed to be a cook.

Karan:You are right.

Preeta:Well.. how do you know me and my family?

Karan:Because I am your family Preeta.

Preeta was surprised.

Preeta:You are my family?What relationship do you have with me?

Karan:I am your husband Karan.

Preeta was shocked.

Her lips shivered.

Preeta:What?

Karan went towards her and said emotionally:Yes Preeta.Don't you recognize your Karan?Since a long time I have been waiting for you to regain your memory.But your memory power has worsened.I am fed up of waiting.Please try to remember me atleast now Preeta Please....

Preeta was confused and did not know what to say.

Karan:When we were living as a couple my face was different.But I had plastic surgery and my face got changed.But after that also we had become friends.

Karan showed her the photographs they took together.

Karan:Now don't you remember me Preeta?Don't you remember Shrishti and Rajveer?

Preeta felt severe pain in her head and fainted.

Karan screamed:Preetaaaa!

Karan picked her up and rushed to the hospital.



After some time...

The restless Karan said to himself:Did I do a mistake by telling the truth to Preeta?I hope she doesn't go to coma again.

Suddenly Preeta woke up uttering a name:Karan!

The doctor came and told Karan:Preeta is alright now.He was calling out your name.

Karan was surprised:She called out my name?

Dr:Yes.You can meet her now.

Karan rushed to Preeta's room.

Preeta looked at him emotionally:Karan!

Karan cupped her face and asked her:Preeta,are you fine?

Preeta nodded.

Karan:Thank God!I got scared.Preeta...do you remember what I told you?

Preeta:Yes Karan. You told me that I am your wife.I remember our past too.

Karan was surprised.

Karan:What ?You remember our past?Do you remember our first meeting,wedding..our kids...?

Preeta:Yes Karan.I remember our kids.Our daughter Pihu,Kavya and our twins Shaurya and Rudraksh.After we had twins we had an accident.You told me that your face changed after that.

Karan smiled happily.

Preeta:I remember coming back to Luthra house after many years.Shrishti slipped into coma.Shrishti's son Rajveer and Palki got engaged.Kavya's marriage with that fraud Varun got cancelled.Then Shaurya....Kavya and Shaurya are our children.Right?But Rudraksh...

Karan:Do you know that Rajveer is Rudraksh?

Preeta looked at him in disbelief.

Karan:Shrishti named him Rajveer. He is actually our son.

Preeta became emotional:Rajveer is our son?

Karan:Yes Preeta.

Preeta smiled tearfully.

Suddenly she remembered Nidhi.

Preeta:You married Nidhi.Right?Shaurya considers Nidhi as his mother.

Karan:I never married Nidhi like you think.Since you didn't remember our relationship when you mistook Nidhi for my wife I didn't correct you.That's all.

Preeta was relieved.

Karan:Do you know who burnt Shrishti due to which she went to coma?Nidhi!

Preeta was shocked.

Preeta:What?Nidhi tried to kill my Shrishti?I will not leave her.

Preeta was very angry.

Karan:You don't worry about that.Nidhi is put behind bars.

Preeta was relieved.

Karan:Yes Preeta.Shrishti recovered from coma when you were in coma.She only revealed what Nidhi did to her.

Preeta became very happy.

Preeta:I can't be more happier than this.My Shrishti is fine now.

Karan:After that incident,we told Shaurya that you are his real mother.He considers you as his mother now.

Preeta became emotional.

Preeta:I always considered Shaurya as my real son.I can't wait to hug him as his mother in every way.

Karan:There is one more happy news.Sameer and Shrishti reunited.

Preeta was surprised:Really?

Karan:Yes.

Preeta:I am so happy.I want to meet all of them.

Karan:They all are staying abroad now.You take rest now.When you get well,I will surprise them by taking you to them.

Preeta smiled.

Karan:One more thing.Kavya's fiance Varun is Prithvi and Sherlyn's son who came to take revenge on us by using Kavya.

Preeta was shocked:What?

Karan:Yes.All the 3 are in jail now.

Preeta smiled.

Preeta:They deserved to be in the jail.

Karan:Yes.




After some days...

Karan took Preeta abroad.

Karan:See who is with me.

(The credit for the edit goes to the unknown editor).

All were surprised and happy to see Preeta with Karan.

Shrishti hugged Preeta:Di!

Preeta and Shrishti became very emotional.

Shrishti:Di,are you alright?

Preeta nodded emotionally.

Rajveer too hugged Preeta:Preeta Maa!

Preeta caressed his face.

Preeta:I realized that you are my Rudraksh.

Rajveer was stunned.

Rajveer:Maa...you know that I am your son?

Preeta:Yes beta.

Rajveer hugged her with a smile.

All were surprised.

Karan:Preeta got her memory back.

All were surprised.

Shrishti:Di...is it true?

Preeta:Yes.

Shrishti:I am so happy.

Everyone smiled.

Kavya walked towards Preeta emotionally.

Kavya:Preeta Maa!

Preeta kissed her forehead.

Kavya:I was longing to address you as Maa.

Preeta:I failed to recognize you.I am sorry.But now onwards I will be with you always.

Kavya and Preeta hugged each other.

Shaurya was standing still emotionally.He didn't know how to approach her.Preeta looked at him.

Preeta:Shaurya beta....

She extended her hands towards him.Shaurya ran towards tearfully and hugged her.

Shaurya:I am sorry Maa.I disrespected you a lot despite of living you a lot.

Preeta:It is not your fault.Nidhi had manipulated you against me.

Shaurya:But I promise that I will be a perfect son to you.

Preeta smiled.

Rajveer held Shaurya closer and said:Now we are not enemies Maa.We both are loving brothers who are like friends.

Preeta smiled happily.

Preeta:This is what I expected from both of you.As a mother I am lucky to see all my children loving each other.

They smiled.

Mahesh,Rakhi,Bani,Krithika,Kareena,Sameer and Rishabh too welcomed Preeta happily.


Rajveer-Palki and Shaurya-Shanaya got married.Kavya did arranged marriage with a nice guy named Krish.

The end

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