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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update geet will sure know the truth abt his past coz she is stuborn just like him maybe kaka will tell her dont know cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


thanks Arzoo
I will see if I can upate today
Need to write the part😆😆


need to write the part...
don't worry i'm here... totally glued 😍. total chipko types 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1


need to write the part...
don't worry i'm here... totally glued 😍. total chipko types 😆


haha okay Arzoo
You stay glued over here and look after the thraed while I get my fingers moving to write the enxt part😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for update.😛




Edited by CutieTeju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hai

this is awesome and great

and update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago


ESHA😳
Edited by backy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yup yup...if not for me then for esha's sake...plz update.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sooo I just read your entire story in one go and I LOVE ITTT, it's so beautiful, painful and hot all at the same time😃!

You're awesome, I'll be waiting for your next update😉

Cheers,
-Marvee
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: itsreallyreal

Sooo I just read your entire story in one go and I LOVE ITTT, it's so beautiful, painful and hot all at the same time😃!

You're awesome, I'll be waiting for your next update😉

Cheers,
-Marvee


Thank you Marvee!!!

Will update soon!
Just adding some finishing touches😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

Finally a final update for this week...will send out pm's today!!!😳😳 Sorry if its short..but there has to be give and take here...if you guys want daily updates then updates have to be short if you guys want longer updates then I will have to update every other day or so...

Phir millenge agle haafte SKG ke thread par😆😆

😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 20

Geet sat in her room thinking about what Maan said. She was getting mad...day by day he is making her confused. Why can't he just say his past? Why is it so difficult? Why does he have to make everything so complicated? she lies on the bed cursing her fate for making her being here. She was free to leave but yet she didn't want to leave. Not without any answers. There was an invisible thread that is keeping her here. Maybe its his past? or Maybe its him that is keeping her here. Whatever it may be after ruining her life he cannot possibly think that she will leave without knowing anything. It is true she didn't love him but then why does she feel pain to see him in pain. His eyes they express so much..there is so much pain hidden behind that anger. She turns on her stomach and puts her hands above her head and closes her eyes. She looks at the clock in front of her it was now 12am...her day of leaving from here was over. Now she was bound here. She wondered what lies ahead now since she was stuck here to live with her Shetan. She closed her eyes dosing off. She opened her eyes when she felt some weight on her. She closed her eyes when she felt his breath near her ear...

"So you decided to stay..." (He puts his one hand on top of hers near her head. She stops breathing, when she felt his other hand on her waist. He gets up lightly and gets her around before crushing her with his weight...she opens her eyes to look at him...) "I told you if you stay you will have to pay." (he holds both of her hands...tightly...)

Geet: I am not leaving without my answers

Maan: The answers you are looking for is not here..

Geet; Yes it is. I can see my answers in your eyes.

Maan (looks at her...) What do you see in my eyes now?

Geet (Looks at his eyes...they were dark..almost desiring...she lowered her eyes realizing what he wants...she tried to free herself...but his hold only got tighter and tighter...)

Maan: what do you see? (he asks her again...)

Geet: I see...uhh...

Maan: Let me show you...(he bends down kissing her neck, he bites her shoulder making her scream..he looks at her...) Now its payback time. You made a mistake by staying here...

Geet: I am not scared...

Maan: Alright we will see. (he turns her around still holding her hands and kisses her back...he puts her hair on one side to give him the full view of her back...now holding her hands with one hand..with the other hand..he puts his finger under the blouse hook.) Are you scared now? (She shakes her head no...he opens her blouse hook and turns her around...he removes her hair from her face...he caresses her face..he presses his thumb on her lips...he kisses her lips...chewing on her bottom lip while his hand pushes her blouse strap down...he lets go of her hand while he puts his other on her waist...he removes her sari pallu from the stomach to kiss it. He bites her stomach making her scream in pain. He slowly rubs her stomach while moving his hands up. He was about to remove her blouse when he looked at her with anger.

"Pari kaun hai?" The pain, past memories, everything came back to again. Making him mad with anger and sorrow. He gets off of her and sits up...

Maan: What did you say?

Geet (sits up) Woh when I came home I saw you lying on the floor in Pari's room. (Maan stands up and goes to the window) Pari kaun hai? Kya rishta hai aapka usse? Woh kaha hai? (Maan closes his fists trying to control his anger and more over his emotions. Overtime, the best way for him to deal with emotions was by anger. Just the mention of his past makes him think of his father...his face pops in front of his eyes making him angrier and angrier...he steps away from the window to leave the room...Geet gets up and stops him) I am asking you something. Pari kaun hai? Kaha hai woh? Kya rishta hai aapka usse?

Maan (Looks at her and holds her hand tightly breaking her bangles. She screams in pain...her wrist started bleeding..he pulls her closer to himself..) Tum janna chahati ho woh kaun hai? Tum jaana chahati ho mera past kya hai? HAAN! (She looks at him with fear hearing him scream...he slams open the door and dragging her outside..dragging her down the stairs..he stops at the bottom...) here...this is where my Pari and my mom died..right here at the bottom of the stairs...I was 10 when I saw my father push her down the stairs...(he slams his fist on stair rail...) She was 7 months pregnant...(Geet looks at him with tears..) Is this enough for you? No...why would it? Let me show you Pari...(He drags her up the stairs into her room..he brings her to the crib...and takes out the shirt with blood hand printed on it..) HERE IS MY PARI!!! This blood is my Pari's...(he drags her to the corner of the room with teddy bears) i hand picked these toys for her. Now she is gone. (he shakes her...) Now you got your answer...YOU CAN LEAVE NOW!!! (She falls on the floor with tears...Maan leaves the room slamming the door...)

Maan went downstairs to the bar and started drinking...He slams the bottle on the table...Kaka comes and tries to stop him...Maan throws the bottle on the floor and leaves the house. Geet comes running down hearing noises and watches him leave. She runs downstairs to stop him but it was too late. Kaka looks at Geet..

Kaka: Let him go...he needs time alone. Its not easy to come out of his past. (She looks at him) He is trying you know. He needs time.

Saying that he left. Geet sits on the sofa looking at the door waiting for him to return. Maan sat in his car looking at a building. He clutches the steering wheel in anger. After few minute, he drove to the park. He sat in his car thinking about where his life has taken him. Geet...he closes his eyes thinking about her. He looks at his phone that was ringing. He picks up the phone.

"yeah..." He smashes the phone on the floor and leaves.

Okay guys...that is it for this week...😆😆
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago

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