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MystiqueDew thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Story is getting more interesting ...awesome
cont. soon
mrs.msk thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Waiting...
I wonder if pammi's skeleton is still in the closet and the phone call had to do something with that.
Don't mind me guessing... I do I alot whn I luv the story to core.



haha I don't mind you guessing but keep guessing 😆😆
yaar still have to write the udpater
been running aroudn like a horse all morning today at work😭😭
am loosing weight and getting hungry at the same time😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am writing..doing multi-tasking again 😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk




haha I don't mind you guessing but keep guessing😆😆
yaar still have to write the udpater
been running aroudn like a horse all morning today at work😭😭
am loosing weight and getting hungry at the same time😆😆😆



U still have to write the update :( but the good part is that u will b writing it soon.
U running around and getting tired... Evr thought of keeping some granola bars, dry cereal, apple
and small milk bottle handy?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1



U still have to write the update :( but the good part is that u will b writing it soon.
U running around and getting tired... Evr thought of keeping some granola bars, dry cereal, apple
and small milk bottle handy?


ahaha hmjm okay I have apple, cookies, rice, sandwhich, lassi, water bottle, and my cheetos chips as a back up 😆😆
I can pretend lassi is my milk bottle 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

I am writing..doing multi-tasking again 😆😆

matlab raat ko phone per read kerna paray ga😆per SKG ke liye sab chalay ga😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


Tahnk you Sana!
i know but it is so disheartening to see only 200+ likes out of 490+ ppl I have on my buddy list...and I am not gettin engh likes..it is putting my sprit down😭😭

yup yaar i understand but dont feel bad hum hai na🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

Sorry for the delay..in a hurry..

Edited:

So it might be time for another thread..so leave your comments/likes so that I can open up a new thread 2marow...after this week I will see if I should do this update everyday or not...its all up to you guys😳

I am sorry to those who do take your time out to comment/like but like I said before it is really putting down my spirit when I don't see enough likes that I should from 490+ ppl on my buddy list. I know not everyone can write a comment but please at least like to let me know😳
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 23

Maan sat in his office pissed off at Geet's reaction. How can she think that about him...doesn't she know how much he likes her..he opens his eyes and sits up straight and bangs his hand...someone enters his cabin intrupting his thoughts...Maan looks at her

Maan: you are fired! Get out

"But sir..what did I do?"

Maan: What did you do? You entered my cabin without knocking...get out.

"Sir please.."

Maan (calls the security guards and they come within 2 minutes..) take her out of this company and make sure she doesn't come anywhere near this property again. (they both shake their heads yes..and carries her outside..everyone in the office ignores what is happening as they didn't want to loose their job knowing his anger...a guy with glasses nervously knocked on his cabin door after seeing the girl getting fired over a small thing...) come in.

"Sir...these came for you.." (Maan brings out his hand without looking who it was. The guy nervously hands him the package and waits for him to say something. Maan looks at him expecting him to leave.) woh sss ss ssirr aaaj kkkiii meeeting

Maan (gets up) I know about the meeting for today just make sure everything is ready by then. You may leave Adi.

Adi: Yes sir. (He runs out of the office)

Maan sits on his desk and goes through the file. He smirks looking at the picture. He calls someone over the phone...he leans back crossing his leg and placing his arm behind his head..."Make sure the person is bankrupt and put him on the streets. Follow him for his every move afterwards...I will let you know what has to be done afterwards.. don't' mess it up..." He hangs up the phone and closes his eyes feeling content...he didn't care...it was his turn now to show who he is and what he is capable off...he looks at his watch and realizes its time for the meeting...everyone was scared and quiet as soon as Maan walked in. He smirked..he loved this fear in people. He sits down and realizes the clients are not here yet.

Maan: Where are the clients? (Everyone looked at him and waited for someone to speak up...) I am ASKING you guys something.

Adi (gets up scared) woh sir...they said they were going to be five minutes late

Maan (gets up) Tell the clients don't even bother coming...I don't have time for people who don't value my time.

Adi: but sir

Maan: Adi I pay you to listen to what I have to say not to argue. UNDERSTAND!

Adi: Yes sir (Maan leaves the conference room...)

Maan goes into his office slamming the door...nothing was going his way today...nothing..he hated that...he wanted to be in control but ever since with Geet in his life...it seems like that is not possible...why is she so hell bent on wanting her rights? Didn't he give all the rights that a wife should have? What else does she need? His eyes fall on the file again that Adi gave to him in the morning. He clutched the chair tightly in anger making his knuckles turn white. He spins the chair in anger and throws everything on the floor smashing it into million pieces. He leaves the office. He stops at the receptionist area...the girl gulps her food in fear looking at the boss. He turns around to look at her...

"Make sure everything in my office is back to the way I had left it yesterday"

"Yes sir..." Maan leaves without looking back again.

He comes home for lunch. He didn't find Geet anywhere in the kitchen nor the living room. He goes upstairs to his study room deciding to work from home when he heard some noise coming from Pari's room. He goes to check it out and gets angry..

"GEEETTT" She turns around looking at Maan scarming her name. All the workers leave in hurry dropping whatever was in their hands in fear...he slams the door shut and walks toward Geet as she takes steps back..."PUT EVERYTHING BACK TO THE WAY IT WAS!"

Geet: I am cleaning it...and plus you said I am half the owner of this property of yours so being half the owner I can do whatever I want.

Maan (jerks her towards him...holding her arm tightly...) DON'T MAKE ME DO WHAT YOU WILL REGRET LATER GEET! Put everything back! That is my last time telling you.

Geet: NO! I will not!

Maan (smirks) Okay then I will see how you leave this room without putting everything the way it was...you have one hour...(he lets go of her she stumbles back...he turns to leave the room...closing the door behind him..Geet tries to open the door but couldn't..)

Geet: Maan open the door! Maan!

Maan calls all the servants..."NO one is to open that door until I say so..you all can leave for the day..." They nodded their heads and leaves...Maan goes to his study room ignoring her screams and slams it shut...

After one hour, he opens the door and saw her sitting in one corner...leaving all the mess the way it was...she looks at him with anger...

Geet: I am not putting this back.

Maan: Okay...that is fine...(he takes off his tie, waist coat and his shirt..and throws it on the floor) You wanted some rights right...well let me give it to you...(he marches toward her...he scoops her up throwing her over his shoulder..while she screamed and yelled...)

Geet: Let me go...I HATE YOU...I HATE YOU!!

Maan (drops her on the bed) Its fine..I never asked you to love me either!

Edited:

He leans closer to her as she moves back...Maan smirks at her..

Maan: so got scared..when I am giving you the rights?

Geet: This is not the right...what you are doing is forcing me...

Maan: Really? I don't see it that way...you said that this house is half yours and whatever is mine is yours...and vice versa...(he lies on top of her...) so what I want you have...

Geet: What do you want? My hatred?

Maan: yeah if that is what you are able to give me.

Geet: Then why did you marry me? Why did you follow me around? Why?

Maan: because I wanted you

Geet: Why?

Maan (looks at her) You talk to much you know that? (he kisses her neck...he puts her hands up above her head...and kisses her on the lips...he starts placing angry kisses, biting her neck and shoulder making her gasp...he lets go of her hands as he moves to her sari pleats...he holds them together before taking them out...he kisses her stomach...moving up close to her chest...his one hand goes around her back to open her dori...she turns around to hide herself..he smirks) even better...(he bends down to give her kisses to her back and opening up her dori at the same time...he turns her around and looks into her eyes. She looks at him...)

Geet: you didn't answer me...why?

Maan: why do you need an answer? Isn't it enough that you are here?

Geet: No its not...

Maan: Well too bad...

Geet (pushes him off) I don't think so...(she grabs her sari to cover herself) I will not be used like this...you HEAR me! God knows how many times you are married and how many girls you tried to rape.

Maan (look at her with anger) What did you say? Rape? Do you want to know what rape is? Do you want me to show you? (She backs up against the wall...Maan comes and stands really close her...) ANSWER ME! (he bangs the wall with his fist...)

Geet (who was scared out of her mind..looks at him...) woh main...

Maan: kya? Its easy to blame someone right Geet? Rape..(he laughs) This is called rape...(he tears her blouse and her bra...making her top bear...she closes her eyes with tears...she tried to mvoe away but couldn't...he was angry,...she could tell from his voice..his voice had pain masked by anger...he presses his body on her against the wall while his hand goes to her legs..putting it on his waist...he roughly opens her skirt..she holds his hands)

Geet: Please...woh main

Maa: Kya hua? Daar gayi? (he lets go of her and watches her fall down as she tried to cover herself...he bends down and holds her hair..) next time think twice before blaming someone of rape...(he gets up and was about to leave) Ohh and I want the room back to the way it was, before I come home...

she looks at him...as he leaves...Maan smacks the wall in anger...as Geet cries inside the room...
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res 😃


me me me me me 1st ... dhinka chika dhinka chika ...

loved the update ... despite all his efforts ... things are changing around him and he is unable to do any thing ... i guess Geet Singh Khurana will take over soon 😃


cant wait to read the next part

love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yippieee...me 2nd to comment 😛
awsome prt,poor staff sufferng due to angryboss..
geet nt listening to him n fightng back gud going,hope she reciprocate to maan so he wont think forcng himself on her as aa punishmnt 4 her..
Luvd it 😊
Edited by mandymore - 13 years ago

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