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Hi dear Old and New Friends!!
Our Beloved Human After All has decided to move from the RBO forum to this site!!
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I hope our Shanak will receive as much love here as they have in the past!!!😳😳😳😳

Human After All is a phrase that I picked up from a favorite song of mine by Level 42. It struck me as being so basic yet poignant to the Human condition that I had to make it the underlying theme of my story with Shanak as the protagonists! So while reading it and pondering about the goings on I'd ask all of you to keep it in my mind, that we are all Human After All, liable to make mistakes, jump to conclusions, have misunderstandings, be generally crazy!!!

Khanak Agarwal is a young, sincere, hardworking doctor who truly believes in the essential goodness of mankind.

Shantanu Khandelwal is a Harward educated architect who is ambitious and leary of developing lasting relationships with women, but Khanak comes by and changes his mind and he falls head over heels in love with her.

And so the story goes😳😉😃

I welcome all my old readers who have become my dear friends and all my readers who may want to check this story out!!!
I wish to thank all my dear friends..esp..Ramzz and Poo for helping me create this thread!!
Thanks!!!!😃

Prologue

Why did it always have to happen this way! Why did she have to always be last in line for the loo!!? Why did they discriminate between economy and other classes? Did they think that we have better bladder control?

No ma'am you can't come in here, this is Business Class!

Khanak couldn't control the urge any more and had started hopping from one leg to the other.

You don't have to tell me that, I know it very well that this is Business Class and that's the reason I'm here! Please can I use the rest room here? Back there, its a zoo!

No ma'am, you have to wait. Those are the rules!!

Who are you to tell me the rules?? When nature calls..you have to obey or there will be accidents! If you don't let me in here, I may have an accident and you'd be held responsible, not me!!

The German stewardess was clearly flustered and decided to give in and let Khanak use the rest room, after all it was empty with only a few passengers seated there. Khanak nodded her thanks and breathed a sigh of relief, thankful that her ruse had worked, or else...she'd very well have been embarassed.

Oh! They have just announced that we'll be landing in 40 minutes! I better finish these pooris. Though they are more like cardboard in consistency but we shouldn't waste anything, should we son? After all they charge us an arm and a leg for each seat!

Shaan nodded relieved that he had to tolerate Mr Gupta's company for less than an hour longer! He had found the New York to Germany segment reasonably amusing with no one in the adjacent seat and a very beautiful blonde stewardess at his beck and call. The only sore point had been that his favorite magazine The Economist had decided to dedicate its latest issue to women! Women in business, politics and other professions! He hadn't found a single article which matched his POV, that is women were a weaker sex and good for only a couple of things!Hmmmph! What was the world coming to?..

Then plump Mr.Gupta had joined him in Frankfurt and had been so delighted to discover that he was Indian too, that he decided to enlighten him with his lifestory in not so few words. Despite Shaan's best efforts to show his disinterest, Mr.Gupta refused to be dissuaded until he fell asleep but then his snoring which was akin to a steam engine passing through a tunnel, kept everybody else awake.

Shaan wondered how could somebody talk and eat at the same time, and turned up the volume on his headphones, they were playing Beethoven's 9th, one of his favorite symphonies. As he began to lose himself in the final crescendo, he felt a rough shove on his shoulder. Knocked out of his reverie, he looked up angrily to see Mr Gupta clutching at his thick throat, indicating that he was choking.

Serve him right!

was Shaan's first reaction, but when he saw the poor man eyes start to bulge he panicked and hit the call button. The beautiful blonde rushed to their seats but when she saw Mr.Gupta she called for assistance. A big burly steward shook poor Mr Gupta by the shoulder and asked something unintelligible in German. The poor man had no clue as to what it was and panicked. He started making gurgling sounds and clawing at his throat.

He needs a doctor! Now!

Shaan shouted, as he watched with fascination Mr Gupta's face turn a bluish hue and beads sweat pour down his face.

MOVE OUT OF THE WAY! I'm A DOCTOR!

shouted a very authoritative female voice and a petite slim dark haired Indian girl pushed her way through. She had said The Magic Words and the burly German who dwarfed her, willingly stood aside.

Are you choking?

she asked, and when Mr Gupta nodded, she made him get up and positioned herself behind him. Shaan didn't know how she did it, but she encircled her arms around Mr Gupta's lower chest and gave made an inward thrusting motion with her fist. She repeated this three times before a large piece of brown stuff flew out of his mouth and he started coughing loudly, the color rapidly returning to his face.

Everyone smiled and breathed a collective sigh of relief as Mr Gupta indicated that he was fine. They all pumped the girl's hands and thanked her enthusiastically.

Dhanyawad beta, tumne aaj meri jaan bachayi! I don't know with what words to show my gratitude!!

Its alright sir! I was just doing my duty, that's all! I'm happy that I was around and I could be of help.

Help??! That's an understatement! That was a miracle!

Shaan chipped in, he was still staring at her in wonder.

She turned to look at him, noticing him for the first time. Shaan was surprised to see that she wasn't much older thanin the mid to late twenties, and had very beautiful large black eyes but now they were directed at him filled with scorn, Mister! If You wish to call it a miracle, you can, But its all in a Day's work for doctors like me!

Mr Gupta chimed in, Beta! At least tell me your name and address, so that I can send you a thankyou gift..

Dr. Khanak Agarwal, and Sir, your thanks is more than enough, there is no need for formalities!

She walked away with her head held high without giving Shaan a second glance. Women didn't do that when it came to Shantanu Khandelwal..he was intrigued

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Cravings-10
Humsafar A -18
Humsafar B- 29
Betaabi - 38
U Me Aur HUM -49
Love Endures -57
Eternally yours A -72
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Mad About You A -98.
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With or without You -125
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FAMILY PICTURES

OUR SHANAK






The Khandelwals




The Agarwals




MOST IMPORTANT PLAYER in HAA



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Thread 1:
He Knows What He Wants! (Page 5)
Another Kind of Love (Page 9)
Part 3 - Khanak (Page 14)
Title track VM Trailer 1 by Sonali (Page 18)
Chances are.. (Page 20)
The Man in Her Dreams... (Page 25)
Fate not Coincidence... (Page 32)
Title track VM Trailer 2 by Sonali (Page 36)
She can do magic... (Page 39)
Immune to Love? (Page 44)
H...ACHE (Page 48)
Stoking the Flames (Page 52)
Hide and seek (Page 56)
You're too good to be true (Page 59)
Serenade - A (Page 63)
Serenade - B (Page 66)
Title track VM Trailer 3 by Sonali (Page 69)
Hooked - A (Page 72)
Hooked - B (Page 75)
From Megha with Love (Page 84)
Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho VM Trailer 4 by Sonali (Page 89)
SEALED WITH A KISS (Page 92)
Of Muses and Such (Page 98)
Blow Hot, Blow Cold (Page 103)
Killing me softly (Page 106)
Shaan states his case (Page 110)
Love is... (Page 113)
The Wait (Page 118)
Baat Pakki! (Page 121)
Let's Spread the word! (Page 126)
Vampires and Encounters with Dr D! (Page 130)
Being Human (Page 135)
Thread 2:
Rebel with a cause (Page 11)
Monsoon Wedding Teaser#1 (Page 27)
Rimjhim (Page 57)
If Wishes Had Wings - A (Page 71)
If Wishes Had Wings - B (Page 101)
Special dil thaam report by Rafia (Page 126)
Just The Way You Are! (Page 132)
Thread 3:
Engaged - A (Page 19)
Engaged - B (Page 20)
Breakfast at Tiffany's (Page 75)
Delhi Chalo - A (Page 98)
Delhi Chalo - B (Page 112)
Thread 4:
Delhi Chalo - C (Page 16)
Delhi Chalo - D (Page 42)
Dilwaalon ki Dilli (Page 67)
Living - A (Page 89)
Living - B (Page 100)
Beqarar Dil - A (Page 121)
Beqarar Dil - B (Page 126)
Thread 5:
HM Preview #1: Rockstar (Page 14)
BeqararDil - C (Page 40)
Always and Forever (Page 50)
Sapnon se bhare naina - A (Page 65)
Sapnon se bhare naina - B (Page 72)
Brattie's POV (Page 77)
Conversations: Mads and Sunil (Page 82)
Thrill Me (Page 85)
Mujhse shaadi karogi?? (Page 106)
Yeh vada raha (Page 135)
Thread 6:
Yeh vada raha Reposted (Page 3)
Ek Ladki Bheegi Bhaagi Si (Page 16)
Lets celebrate Love - A (Page 29)
Lets celebrate Love - B (Page 42)
Lets celebrate Love - C (Page 60)
Brattie's POV (Page 66)
Monsoon Wedding #1 - A (Page 68)
Monsoon Wedding #1 - B (Page 78)
Love Notes (Page 86)
Pundu's POV (Page 87)
Monsoon Wedding #2 (Page 89)
Monsoon Wedding #3 - A (Page 95)
Monsoon Wedding #3 - B Mehendi (Page 100)
Monsoon Wedding #3 - C Sangeet!!! (Page 107)
Barely Breathing (Page 118)
Monsoon Wedding #4 - Haldi (Page 128)
Band Bajaa Baraat!!! - A (Page 133)
Thread 7:
Band Bajaa Baraat!!! - B (Page 3)
Shubh Vivaah sampann - Grand event (Page 7)
A new Life - A (Page 24)
A New Life - B (Page 29)
From Here to Eternity (Page 43)
She walks in Beauty... (Page 69)
Changing Colors of Life... (Page 102)
Fasten your Seatbelts - A She Draws Me In... (Page 119)
Fasten your Seatbelts - B Full Circle (Page 123)
She Drives Me Crazy! (Page 134)
Thread 8:
Just Call It Love (Page 3)
Wicked Games!!! (Page 23)
Wicked Games Deux - A & B (Page 49)
Closer to You (Page 60)
Coffee, Tea or Me (Page 93)
Nature and Nurture (Page 102)
A Human Heart... (Page 114)
I Fall As I Stand (Page 133)
Thread 9:
I Fall As I Stand Reposted (Page 2)
Pillow Talk (Page 32)
Road Trip (Page 62)
Reality Bites - A (Page 69)
Reality Bites - B (Page 97)
Title Track VM Trailer 5 by Sonali (Page 118)
Of Trials and Tenderness - A (Page 126)
Of Trials and Tenderness - B (Page 128)
Thread 10:
Of Trials and Tenderness - A & B Reposted (Page 3)
Dizzy and Dazed (Page 13)
Wonderland (Page 15)
Of Souls and Family Ties! (Page 32)
Surf, Sand and Sweet Memories! (Page 43)
Poem ~ A Joy Like No Other (Page 50)
A Night to Remember - A (Page 55)
Pyaar Manga Hai VM by Deepali (Page 62)
A Night to Remember - B (Page 69)
Truly Madly VM by Sonali (Page 84)
Stormy Vibes (Page 88)
Ground Zero - A (Page 110)
Ground Zero - B (Page 129)

Thread 11:
Close encounters (Page 2)
Cravings (Page 10)
Humsafar - A (Page 18)
Humsafar - B (Page 29)
Betaabi (Page 38)
U Me aur Hum (Page 49)
Love Endures (Page 57)
Eternally Urs - A (Page 72)
Eternally Urs - B (Page 83)
Eternally Urs - C (Page 87)
Mad about U (Page 98)
Tadap (Page 115)
With or Without U (Page 125)
Incognito (Page 131)



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OUR CREATIONS FOR HUMAN AFTER ALL... (SIGGIE CENTRAL 1)
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OUR CREATIONS FOR HUMAN AFTER ALL...(SIGGIE CENTRAL 2)
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SHANAK'S NEW APARTMENT

1) Balcony


2) Bedroom



3) Living room


4) Kitchen


5) Bathroom



( Most important space for Shanak's Romance 😉 )
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CONGRATS with the new thread n new platform..
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First of all A huge hug for Ramzz for putting up the links for all the updates here!! Its a huge task and I can't say how much I adore her for it!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

And to Poo, Kash, Ramzz for making the most awesome siggies in the world!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
And to Sonali, Priya and Deepali for making super duper VMs!!!😳😳😳😃😃😃😃⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
And to my Human gang..including Ramzz, Poo, Vatty, Purvi, Jyo, Rida, Sarah, Rafia, Angel, Jyo, Aysha, Rosh, Kari, Priya, Sonali for loving our Shanak more than me and making their dream wedding come true..we held the bestest wedding ever on IF!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😃😃😃😃
And for everybody who had constantly backed me up and encouraged me whenever I hv felt down and out..so they are the reason this FF still is going strong!!!!!👏 I don't hv to mention names here..you all knw who you are.
And A BIGGG Hugg to all my current, past and future readers!! Thanks to your encouragement Human After All has become HAA😉
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Here's the 1st Update on this new thread!!

Links for all the other threads coming up on intro post!!
Close Encounters!!😳
He came out of the shower, the bath towel wrapped casually around his waist and threw a glance around the bedroom; correction their bedroom. It felt a little strange but good too. They were off together on their own with a wonderful future to look forward to, full of love, and new experiences and perhaps some ups and downs as well just like today. But they had a lot of support and especially they had each other so nothing would be impossible, he was sure.
He sat on the bed with it's messed up sheets; clear evidence of their fiery all consuming relationship and very much a reason for her being upset today. He tried to fix it up the best he could; it was the least he could do for the sake of her sanity. He chuckled thinking about how she would react if she came back home and found the unmade bed; she would 'blow her top' in the words of Nurse D' Souza, maybe he should leave them undone, it would be a sight to behold.

He found a single pearl drop earring on her nightstand where he had placed it last night while hurriedly undressing her completely disregarding her protests; she had finally surrendered and they had made prolonged and impassioned love as if trying to quench an unslakeable thirst. He hadn't been able to help himself, she had looked so enticing and tempting in her hastily pulled on silk saree of orange and green, she hadn't even done her hair. They had gone over to the K- House directly from the airport on Dadi ma's insistence, who had expressly wished to spend some time with her doctor as she had said; actually she had wanted to make sure that he had been treating her well.

Sorry my darling, I will try to exercise better self control in the future, but it's your fault too, why do you have to look more and more bewitching with each and every passing day? He enquired of her picture which took the pride of place behind the bed; she was looking on as he put the engagement ring on her finger; the night when their relationship had taken a deeper turn. The picture meant a lot to him, he was glad that Palak had chosen to blow it up and frame it; it had been a welcome back gift from her.

She is a very insightful girl Khanak, this sister of yours, now my little sister too! He smiled.. I need to get to know her better, just like you are my brother.

Shaan sighed thinking, as he got dressed in crisp dark navy shirt and white linen slacks; a lot of things to get done, living alone also meant doing everything on your own. But he wasn't afraid of it'.college had honed his survival skills for him.
The pantry needed to be stocked and so did the refrigerator; mom had offered to help and so had Khanak's parents but he had gently refused their offer-. They had chosen to start their new lives on their own, so it might as well be from scratch!

As he waited for his 2nd cup of coffee to brew, he noticed another cup lying in the sink with a tea bag in it. Khanak had sipped from it in a hurry before leaving; he picked it up and saw a faint mark of dark plum on one edge, and gently touched it with his lips,

There darling, I love your cup too, now what will you do about that; smack me?
He also had to figure out the next step in his career, he had relegated it to the backburner till this time, but he couldn't do it anymore. Life was staring him in the face and he had to prove that he was up to the challenge. He powered up his laptop, and took a deep breath, he had to get organized, his secretary was no longer there to do it for him. Perhaps he should get hold of Rahul, he had always understood him as a friend and peer, he may be able to help him figure out how he was going to go about constructing the hospital on one side and get some additional work on the side to keep the hearth going and pay the bills. He would need a list of his old clients first, maybe Sheila could help get it for him, he was glad that Akki had kept her back.

He shook his head; most of all he had to figure out how he would make up to his darling, she was his top priority, everything else was secondary.

He heard a knock on the door;

Who could it be? Don't tell me..mom?

Oh Hello!

There stood the girl he had bumped into twice earlier in the day; she was smiling holding a box in her hand.

Damn! He didn't want any interruptions at this time, but again maybe she was a neighbor and it didn't hurt to be neighborly, and it looked like she had brought something to eat too!

He smiled and opened the door wider and saw her close her eyes for just a sec,was she okay? Come on in!

She walked in looking around, seeming to like what she saw (fortunately Mom had employed some housekeeping services to clean up the apartment while they had been gone,) though the walls were still bare and there were the minimum knick knacks, very utilitarian. He had to get Khanak to put in some personal touches of her choice soon.

And you are?

She didn't answer, so he went up in front of her and extending his hand greeted her with a smile;
Hi I am Shantanu Khandelwal and you are..

She smiled very wide and shook his hand with enthusiasm, a sweet smile; I am Anu..short for Anuraadha. I live downstairs with my Dad.. And here is a welcome neighbor gift!..she was slurring her words.

She handed him the box which seemed to contain freshly baked brownies, he could tell by their decadent aroma..

He took them with a big grin: Gosh I love brownies, how very nice of you Anuradha, did you bake them yourself?

She tapped his shoulder making him look up and indicated with a finger on her mouth'You see I cannot hear very well, I have been deaf since birth..but I can read lips; so you need to look at me when you speak, she said in good humor.

Shaan stared at her in shock, he had never really encountered anybody with a disability before and it came as a surprise to him that she looked very normal until she spoke but then too he wouldn't have realized it until she told him.

He repeated what he had said, this time slowly clearly enunciating each and every word.
She smiled and then laughed softly, you don't have to talk like you are to an idiot! I am not retarded you see.
Shaan blushed in embarrassment; he had been doing exactly that; he apologized.
She seemed used to it, for she waved it off as if it was no big deal.
Sorry I have nothing to offer you except black tea or coffee. Just got back yesterday and haven't had time to get my bearings yet.
Don't worry, tea will do fine.

As he put the kettle on the range to boil, he observed that she was exceptionally tall and thin though not awkwardly so, had a pretty pleasant face and manners, and didn't seem to care much about her appearance, dressed simply in a long plain frock.

So what do you do besides bake delicious things.
Actually I am a Sioux chef at the Trattoria but some day I dream of owning a restaurant myself! She declared with the happy enthusiasm of a child.

Wow a gourmet! So when can we come over for dinner? He enquired with a laugh as he checked his laptop for any signs of activity from Rahul.

We?

Uh huh..yes. So you thought I live in this place on my own? No such luck, he laughed again, sorry my mistake it came out wrong. Actually I share this place with my wife of barely 2 months, Khanak, Dr Khanak Agarwal. Here she is;

He pulled up Khanak's picture on his cell and showed it to Anuradha who initially appeared somewhat upset and disappointed but after staring at the pic for what seemed forever, handed it back with a wide grin;

She is very beautiful and kind, you are very lucky to have her as your wife Shaatanu!

She is indeed the most beautiful girl in the world and lovelier as a person but how can you tell? He was amazed at this girl's perception.

By her eyes, they tell me that she possesses a clear conscience and that her heart is pure!

Shantanu smiled and nodded, he had heard about people with disabilities being exceptionally intuitive.

After a few more minutes of chit chat Anuradha took her leave saying that she had to go to her restaurant which always remained open, no matter what disaster may strike.

A girl has to earn her keep, or so my father says! Her laugh was warm and good natured and made a deep impression on Shaan as he showed her out.

Her shoulders hurt; there was a hammer banging away inside her head wanting to break it open.

Khanak felt miserable, dizzy, nauseated, the bee still buzzed and the patients were not helping either. None of them had cancelled their appointments, rather today seemed to be the day when most of them had decided to pay a visit to the doctor for the first time with their laundry list of aches and pains which she had to sort out and prioritize.

Prioritizing was important as for Mrs Bandhoo ( Dr K's infamous hypochondriac,) was more focused on the extra wrinkles on her forehead than on the level of her blood pressure; Give me some medicine doc because I love my salt.

And there was Mr Macchar ( her name for him, he looked like one,) who despite going on 70 was worried about his chest pain limiting his performance in the bedroom and turned a deaf ear to all her warnings about him dropping dead during the act if he didn't get an angio!

Men! Creatures woven from a single thread! She couldn't help but laugh thinking about Shantanu and winced when she felt a jolt of pain shooting up from the base of her neck.

What she wouldn't give for a cool cocktail of Tiger balm and a masseuse! Oh where are you Shantanu when your wife needs you?

She groaned and dropped her head on the table, she still had to call up Shaan's mom and her own Mama who had left a message earlier with the secretary. But not now when her throat felt dry like sandpaper and a hot iron when she tried to swallow. Oh no!! She so did not want to get sick!

Ek aur cup kadak adrak wali chai please Vignesh! Khanak requested the peon as he came in to pick her other cups.

Doctor Agarwal what you need is a good solid lunch and not cup after cup of insipid tea!

Khanak moaned, the thought of food made her stomach churn! She placed her fingers on her temples and screwed her eyes shut.

How was your trip, did Mr Dhak Dhak take you around? Nurse D'Souza asked with a fond smile, she looked upon the young doctor as one would her own daughter.

Awful, just awful! Khanak muttered.

What are you saying Doctor..did Mr Shantanu..? her voice trailed off, Nurse D looked scandalized.

What? Khanak blinked and tried to focus on her favorite nurse:

No! Not at all that was not what I meant..it was an amazing trip and he is the most gentle, caring, kind, loving and all the other adjectives that the most wonderful husband in the whole world deserves to have! I couldn't have gotten a better person even if I had him custom built Nurse!

Nurse D smiled reassured, I thought so, my favorite doc only deserves the best and nothing else! She came around and gave a hug to Khanak who hugged her back.

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Beep! Beep! Beep! ..Chopin's nocturne..

She lifted her head from the desk, her hair a tangled mess, her tongue sticking to the roof of her mouth, her throat scratchy and her head; don't even mention it. She had finally fallen asleep after 6pm when the last patient had left after she had made sure he had got his lab work done, and had f/u set up for tomorrow with the Gastroenterologist. He was her old patient who had been ignoring indigestion for ages and finally had come to her saying that he couldn't eat without puking anymore and she was shocked when she saw that he was thin as a rail.

She found her phone blinking an SMS right next to her,,it didn't occur to her to wonder how it had gotten there!

Rise and shine my sleeping beauty its 7pm

Time to go home with your made to order dreamboat!

A smile lifted the corners of her mouth, by some miracle it didn't hurt as much as before; He was back to his tricks;

She ignored him and laid back down.

Beep! Beep! CN again

Oh my Venus! What sin did this poor slave commit?

That he is being treated with such malice?

She laughed and then almost cried out in pain at the effort;

Your sin is that you chose to slight a Goddess, no less!

Shaan:

Oh Goddess of my heart! Listen to my prayers

Have mercy on this poor starving soul

Who hasn't partaken of a single morsel since the dawn of this day!

If I die you'll be the one named!

She:

Fasting every now and then is good for health in general

If I were you I would fast for 7 days straight, then perhaps your mission

Has the slightest hope of bearing fruit!

She drew in a sharp breath when she felt his warm hands pressing with firm pressure into the back of her neck, slowly inch down to her shoulders bringing gradual relief to the pain and fatigue which had tied her muscles up in knots. She closed her eyes and leaned back in her swivel chair sighing with happiness and deeply inhaling his comforting scent. She shivered when his gentle breath tickled her ear sending a delicious tingle down her spine.

Two can play at this game honey

I know you better than you know yourself

We burn in the same flame

We live but for one desire

You cannot survive without me

And I will cease to exist without you

That is the only truth, and everything else is a lie.
A lump formed in her throat when she opened her eyes to find him kneeling down in front of her with a beseeching look in his eyes as he took hold of both her hands and stroking her wrists gently kissed her palms.
Now will you forgive your teddy bear and give him a kiss and a hug or will you make him beg?
I thought teddy bears don't beg, they demand or take by force!
Do they?
He raised his eyebrows in mock surprise as she slid down to kneel in front of him and putting her arms around his neck drew him up to her.
Now will you do it or or..
Or what? He whispered softly, coming closer his eyes sweeping over her beloved face.
Or will you make me cry?! She sniffed her eyes brimming with tears collapsing exhausted in his arms.
My poor little love, this human will not allow that to happen.
He said, gently bundling her up in his arms before kissing her deeply on the lips.
Let this burthal take you home!

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Edited by simiv - 14 years ago
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hai dear,
ok here i am penning my comments..
shaan coming out of the bathroom with just a towel..(reminded me of jab se tere naina..n i drooled over just imagining that..LOL!!!)
his self thought were wonderful..thinking of his angel's upset mood n correlating with what nurse D'souza said n he really want to see that..LOL!!! he wanted to see his fierce she dragon..
LOL!!! shaan u'll never get better self control..his talk with her photo on the side table n thaking palak for capturing that wonderful pic..he wants to know her better as a little sis like khanak is with akshay..so sweet of him..already his saali is on his side..she loves his jiju..not in a bad way though..
shaan planning abt setting up the kitchen..haaye..i so love this side of shaan too..who takes care abt household too..shaan loves her cup too..he is an absolute goner which we know very well..his question wat will u do abt that, smack me?? i so loved it..
planning abt his career..always love this side of shaan..he is trying to pull all the possible ropes..n there rings the door bell n thinks it should not be mom..LOL!!!
n there comes our new entry..anu..wow!! i never expected u to wove such character..ie,person with disability..but the way u portrayed her i loved her..head held high n least bothered abt her inability..n no one knows abt that unless they dont look at her while talking..coz she needs to lip read..she came with brownies to welcome shaan..her instant disappointment knowing he is married but seeing khanak's pic she too felt happy for the couple..thanks for clarifying the situation for anu at the start itself..
there is our poor darling..not at all feeling good after having a bad day in rain..but really simi y did u make her fall in the ditch..(a childhood thing..i was studying my 4th r 5th..once someone crossed by me unknowing pushed me into a ditch..😭😭😭😭 i feel bad for khanak..now i laugh thinking abt that..but that was really bad..thankfully that ditch was not too full r stinky r watever..but however ditch is a ditch..😭😭😭😭)
simi really do u name ur regular patients like this??😆😆😆😆(looks at simi innocently)
but here i love the names u give them..
khanak really did u do that??thought of ur hubby when u thought abt Mr.Macchar..but he is too much..😆😆
oh khanak when u needed a massage u thought of ur sweet darling shantanu..u just have to say him dear..he'll be at ur service..poor thing drowning too many adrak wali chai without having any other thing..nurse D'souza was too sweet to know abt her doc..she was happy knowing that Mr.Dhak Dhak took good care of her..
btw wat is f/u??😕😕 her last patient has serious problem but i feel it funny..
aaye..haaye..how does he know that she'll be sleeping that he msged rise n shine at 7 PM...their SMS was so cute like them..i so loved it..
wow!!! really was he there after her fasting SMS r it was her imagination..
n he was there..tht chotu poem was cute..especially "You cannot survive without me;and i'll cease to exist without u"..
he implied him as a teddy bear n gave her options n her reply for that was aaye..haaye..
teddy bears don't beg; they demand r take it by force..lovely simi..
ahhh..poor khanak collapsed in his arms all exhausted...
"Let this burthal take u home.."
sure sure she just needs a hot bath along with a soothing massage..hai na simi??😉😉😉
after that a good dinner...n peaceful sleep in her darling's arms...
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago

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