FF~:Human After All:~ Imp note Pg 150:) - Page 84

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

kill me !!!!!

Oh man !!!

What an update !!!

Cuteness !!!!

I loved the ear phone part and he mouthing the words !!! So romantic !!! And the way u described the funny guy listening to music !! I could actually picture it and was going ROFL !!!

Loved his pursuit !!! And her Sarcasm abt mature men !!!!

And whats with tha pampering !!! Lmao

I really enjoyed reading it !!!

Loved Khanak s turmoil initially... and how is she gonna explain to her parents !! The jitteriness is very natural at this part of the relationship !!!

Now jealous are we !!! I can so visualise the expression on his face !!!

He says they r gonna engage and wed in a week .. that fast !!!

He can't wait!!😆

I was wondering what book it could be ... I m happy it was Jane Eyre... I was too young when i actually read it in school syllabus.. lol...

Lovely update dear !!!

keep going !!!

Read Ramani s comments ... so is there a drama coming up... Human after All... does imply something else doesn it !!!

Well it implies human life and its variations, desperations, and the essence of being human!! Some drama yes but natural!

Huggs!!!!!!! Loved the loong comment!!!😊

simi i have no words to express wht i feel after i read the two parts .its just natural and real loved there first fight .shaaan is so jealous he will never change will remain the burthal he is .loved the way he made yup with her nothing ott but simple and sweet .i loved him for going on his knees to tell sry sighsss i wish i was there hmmm but lovely .love his bossing on her and she not giving to easily .i am in complete love with this new shaan and khanak .thanks simi for making me know and experience this new people something diff from the show love them so much falling in love with them again and again .waiting for ur update love u so much

Excellent and supperb update Simi
Shaan went down on his knees in front of her.looking awesome and
supperb sitution

He pulled her into a large shoe store, and before she knew it had seated her on a padded stool. looked very cute

It sees no boundaries

It flows like a river

And floods its banks!

very true😳😳

Originally posted by: deepa_01

Di..i luved it but the whole shoe thing i just cudn't relate to it!plz explain or is this overpossessiveness another aspect in his towering personality...i suspect trouble in Shanakland..*hugs*

Originally posted by: angel_9

Hey Doc 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

wow amazing update...loved it...

khanak was fuming at him & wondering where was he & shan he knows how to make a entry...thud

...awesome description...

wow very romantic way to ask for forgiveness...loved the description...

Thank you!!😳

i too love that song doc...o mere dil ke chain...its amazing...👏

khanak has forgiven him but was bought back by the crowd...lovely description...

shan he is something...his character is so possessive...he loves her...

Yes he does!!!😉😃

khanak wow she was lost in him...but he wants to pamper her...bought her shoes which was not her style...

their convo...😲...wonderful description

amazing description...

loved the update...

continue soon...

&

thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: Roshni_M

Simi... Hugs...

Loveeedd the update very much...

Im short of words... Sumone provide me a dictionary... I need words to describe how beautiful it was...

The way shaan manaod khanak was sooo cute... Only he can think of such ways... And u obviously...😉😉

loved his answer to whether he is single... Awww... He's such a sweetheart... I love him...

Continue sooonnn... Plz...

Originally posted by: jyothi1989

simi i have no words to express wht i feel after i read the two parts .its just natural and real loved there first fight .shaaan is so jealous he will never change will remain the burthal he is .loved the way he made yup with her nothing ott but simple and sweet .i loved him for going on his knees to tell sry sighsss i wish i was there hmmm but lovely .love his bossing on her and she not giving to easily .i am in complete love with this new shaan and khanak .thanks simi for making me know and experience this new people something diff from the show love them so much falling in love with them again and again .waiting for ur update love u so much

@ Red: I'm honored!! Love U so much too! My Shanak now are living for me and I can see them in my mind and I'm glad that you are relating to them too!! They are real but passionate ppl and I'm trying my best to weave a story abt them..😳😊😃

Originally posted by: rooj-i

r u trying to show if there is a glitch in their relationship? like shaan being mentally very possessive bout her and pretty much controlling her?

it seems to be headed that way...oooh not good...lol

PS: I loved it!

ur writing alwayz bring smile on my face..😊
need not to say any thing..
awesome..
each n every bit was superb..
god bless u dear..❤️

Simi just love your choice in songs! keep up the great writing!