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Posted: 13 years ago
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ooopss!!!!!! m late, sorry

update ws very long & cute...luvd the 1st part where shaan thinks abt their last night luv making ...very nice ...lol
hope shaan gets 2 work very soon
& anuradha ,,,, yeah, she is nice

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey czarina r u updating today ?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks guys for clicking the like button and all your lovely comments!!
Thanks to each and every one of you!!😃
Here's the next update!!!
This is dedicated to my dear darling sweet friend Ramzz!!😳
Midnight Dessert/Cravings!!😉

Here, get up have some freshly baked brownies, your doctor's orders!

Brownies, what a treat!? They look home made. Don't tell me that you can bake too!
She said sitting up looking at him astounded;
Uhmm!! They are good!
Great! They are a welcome gift from a very nice neighbor.
Khanak sat up straight, seeing red right away; Boy or girl? She asked suspiciously.

Uhhuh..do I smell something burning somewhere? What if I say it was a girl.

Pretty?
She moved up closer, glaring at him, accusing.
I guess, you could call her pretty.
He said his forehead furrowed, tapping a thoughtful finger on the side of his nose.
Shantanu, you think she is beautiful, nice and a good cook to boot!? Soon you'll be thinking of leaving me?! Khanak appeared almost ready to breakdown again.
There, there, my dear, what's up?!! Am I so fickle that I am going to run behind everything and anything in a skirt when I have the most beautiful creature in the world as my own wife? Do you really think that poorly of me?! He looked hurt and disappointed.

I, I'm so sorry! I get insecure sometimes, maybe because you are such a dish and so good to me that I'm not able to believe that you love me as much as you do. I have the fear that someday someone would steal you away then I won't be able to live anymore.

If you dare to say something like that again, I will kill you and then kill myself!! It is unthinkable for me to ever imagine having to live without you in my life. So shut up and eat the brownies or I will eat them myself.As for the girl, wait till you get to meet her, I think that you will like her..just trust me.

Her face screwed up as if she was going to cry;

Sweetheart!!!

Aachooo!!!
He laughed..Thank God, I was scared that you were going to cry...
!!
You are making fun of my cold??
Arre baba no!! C'mon I think you badly need to sleep!

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Beep! Beep! Beep! Beep!

The now familiar sound of the alarm followed by the ritual of hitting the snooze button again..the irritating instrument needed to be shifted to his side!!

She rolled over in the bed seeking his warmth but didn't find him there. Thinking him farther than usual she inched sideways her eyes still closed, her hands searching..not there.
Her eyes shot open; anxiety gripping her heart, for someone who never left her side. Where did he go? Was it a nightmare?
Shantanu..she called out softly,

Shantanu sweetheart ( she rarely used endearments, but perhaps this time she was desperate,) your Angel needs you, come to me please!

No response.
She put on her slippers and padded out into the living room which was dark except for the blinking light of the screensaver on Shaan's laptop. She watched as images of herself taken during their honeymoon flashed across the screen; beautiful pictures clicked when she had been unaware; that spoke of the precious times they had spent together, on the beach with Megha, at the Golden gate park, whale watching, at the temple.. a bank of lovely memories. He wasn't there either.
But he had been there earlier and busy it seemed, the coffee table was strewn with evidence of recent activity; text books on architecture, magazines, modern building design, pencils, notebooks with hastily jotted down entries which looked like a bunch of complicated mathematical formulae she couldn't make any sense of. He had been working hard.

Khanak hugged herself shivering from apprehension and also from the cold for she was clad only in a slip. She had fallen asleep in the jeep on the way back from the clinic after swallowing a hefty dose of nightime cold medicine and she didn't remember how she had landed in the bed. Perhaps he had carried her in and had also undressed her, she had been completely unaware of it, sleeping the sweet sleep of complete exhaustion...she blushed. Now there was no meaning of privacy between them anymore. They had crossed all frontiers in their marriage and that too in such a short time. She was his and he was hers.

But where was he now...he didn't appear to be at home.

She panicked and ran into the balcony, calling out his name, but he wasn't there. She ran back into the house and searched through the small place thoroughly and as she still didn't find him, the fear was slowly replaced by anger and hurt; how dare he leave her alone without informing her? Even if it had been an emergency he could just have woken her up!!

She opened the front door, dashed down the stairs almost falling; her eyes still to adjust to the dim light. She ran out into the parking lot; her brain efficiently working on all the possibilities despite her fragile nerves. Both the Jeep and Boxter were still parked in their places,meaning that he had gone somewhere on foot. Heaving a sigh of relief glad that she had not missed out on any family emergency, she scanned the empty street quickly and instinct made her run out onto the beach..there appeared to be something about sand and water which drew them both to it.

It was cold and still very dark, the moon barely visible behind the dense blanket of clouds.
There was silence except the eerie sound of the roaring waves which continued to lash relentlessly on the beach, like a huge invisible monster slowly sucking away the life of its prey. Amazing how the state of one's mind can drastically change their perception.
The anger gone, replaced now by helplessness; she stumbled on the sand, blinded by tears, the sharp glass like shards of sand biting at her bare feet. She was sure that it was a nightmare( what else could it be,) and crumpled down on her knees waiting for it to be over.

A very cold blast of spray hit her making her cry out loud;

Damn this is for real! Blast you Shantanu! Go to H...

The rest of the words failed to come out as a strong sudden force knocked the air out of her midriff. She coughed, croaking out a pathetic scream as her body was swooped of the ground and she was swung over someone's shoulder like a sack of potatoes.

Breathless but not paralysed by fear, she kicked out vigorously and banged hard on her assailant's back and punctuated her efforts with ineffective screams;

Badmaash! Goonde!! Mujhe abhi neeche utaar nahin toh naani yaad dila doongi! (When there was no effect to this pathetic threat, and her attacker continued on the path towards the apartments;) She tried using her fingers as talons and kicked harder screaming this time in English;

Hey you SOB! If you dare touch me, I,I will kill you and my husband will will eat you alive, he is always hungry..God! Help me Please!!

Ouch!!! She felt a resounding slap on her bottom..How dare you hit me??

Stop it!! Or I will kill you instead! This is Shantanu, your darling husband ,can't you tell you hell-cat! He said in a low growl pinching her thighs.

This made her renew her efforts with more anger and hurt;

Get me down you idiot! How dare you leave me alone in a strange place and run away and then carry me as if I was your keep? Some common possession?!

Damn you!! You are my possession, so there!! He dumped her down near the bottom if the staircase; Stop screaming now or our neighbors will think that we hate each other already and volunteer as witnesses in the divorce court! Do you want that? He threatened in a dangerously low voice while holding both her hands in a vice like grip.

She struggled continuing to cry aloud; I don't care who wakes up! Maybe your new girl friend will be thrilled to see us like this! Maybe this is all part of your plan to get me out of the way!! I won't leave you both in peace! I will...

She wasn't able to speak any more as he clamped her mouth shut with his and did not let go. Her hysterical movements gradually ceased as she closed her eyes and slumped against him allowing herself to be carried upstairs.

If this is the result of me going on a run then I will never do it again, understood?!! He said after they were safely inside the apartment.

I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself! I think it's the jet lag! Please forgive me, I really never behave like this before, maybe its being with you!

He chuckled; it was entertaining nevertheless, I could almost see you on the stage darling; thank God these apartments seem to have thick walls, good construction saved our reputation!

Please don't make fun of me, anyway why did you need to go on a run at this God forsaken time?

There you are back again! My Angel doesn't cry, she makes others cry! He laughed as she pummeled his chest.

Stop it and answer my question!

Okay, alright my doll! I had to think and I think best when I run! Come here, let me show you something!

He led her to the computer and turned it on.

She stared at the screen as it came to life revealing a virtual 3D image of a beautiful hospital complex, complete with a stunning exterior, a huge ER, main lobby, labs, OP clinics, ORs, angio suites, several floors with well planned patient rooms.; and underneath it said...My Angel's Dream.

Thats not all; he clicked the mouse and another screen came up which showed a carefully constructed floor plan of the entire building in great detail and he patiently answered each and every question she posed.
And have you also provided for wheelchair access for the disabled wherever needed?
She bright eyes sparkled with intelligence.
But of course my dearest! Its provided for at each and every entrance, the elevators, in the bathrooms, special lifts in the ambulances and transport vehicles. I want our hospital to adhere to the best international standards. He said with a proud smile.

Wow! It almost seems complete.

No this is just the beginning, a conceptual stage, there is still a lot to do. And that's the reason I went on the run, I wanted to clear my mind and get refreshed.

You seem so excited, why? Haven't you done something like this before which has made you feel proud? She asked with a smile, staring at him in wonder, he seemed to glow as if there by an inner light.

Yes there have been many times when my designs and my buildings have been praised, won awards and so on but this one is different. There is a different kind of happiness in doing something where the payment is not in the form of money but in bringing joy to others' lives, and in their smiles of relief, and its all thanks to your influence! He placed a gentle kiss on her forehead.

My influence? ( doubtfully.)
Yes, my innocent Angel! Do you differentiate between your patients' and give better care to someone who is willing to pay you more than somebody else who just seeks your help and is able to afford just a tiny sum?
She shook her head vigorously..of course not! The very idea is obnoxious! It is a stain on our profession!
Yes, and thats what I meant! Meeting you and being with you has taught me that true happiness comes from giving without expecting compensation.
She stood up on the chair where he had seated her and put her arms around his neck whispering softly in his right ear; But I don't treat everybody the same. Umm there is a tiny scar on your earlobe.
Shaan held his breath his hands holding her waist; Really? Why? That must be from the time when I had given a shot at wearing ear studs, thankfully I gave it up soon!
Good! It would've made you look odd! Hmm there is also a tiny little mole on your right eyebrow, how come I never noticed it before? She nibbled at his eyebrow, caressing his cheeks with the tips of her fingers, making him groan and jerk her body closer to his.
I don't think that I have a mole there! You were talking about being selfish? He grunted huskily, his lips grazing her cheeks.
Won't you ask me why I woke up at 4am? She gasped not knowing that she was holding her breath.

Why ? Was it time to look for your hubby? He said sweeping her up in his arms and walking into the bedroom as she wrapped her legs around his back.

Yes and talk! But he wasn't there! Damn him! She cried biting him on his cheek, then hugging him tightly kissing his neck, Sorry!
Hush! You are right! Damn him! How could he forget this precious appointment? He ran his fingers along her shoulders flicking down the thin straps of her slip while pulling off his sleeveless T.
No you don't! He held her hands in his as she blushed trying to cover herself and forced her back in bed.
Now thats much better, you were saying? As he admired her in the light of the early morn.
Blast you I forgot! She giggled then moaned as the tips of his fingers followed his eyes.
God has gifted you with such perfectly fluid planes and lines... He kissed and licked her throat and moved down.
And domes..and angles and curves! He beats me as an architect any day!
He mumbled huskily exploring her entire body with his mouth making her writhe and cry out in ecstacy.
Stop it! She gasped pulling herself on top of him and gently brushed her fingers over the scars on his stomach; causing a ripple to run over his skin.
They almost look silvery in this light, poor darling you suffered so much, she bent and ran a wet tongue over them.
He groaned; I treasure the day I got them because they brought me to you, my one and only addiction and vice!! He rolled over her again crushing her fragile body under his weight; she closed her eyes in bliss...
Vice??
Yes, my darling! I have realised that I can't work without working on you first.
She blushed a deep red and whispered; then shut up and get to work!
In the next moment she was lost in another world as their bodies interlocked magically like a perfectly solved jigsaw puzzle, and he took her back where she belonged; home.

xxx
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Edited by simiv - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes, my darling! I have realised that I can't work without working on you first.
She blushed a deep red and whispered; then shut up and get to work!
In the next moment she was lost in another world as their bodies interlocked magically like a perfectly solved jigsaw puzzle, and he took her back where she belonged; home.

czarina ji i love you

madam mera dil kitni baar churaogi...itna batado ? koi record bananay ka irada hay kya

ek ek line...ek ek word kano may music lag raha hay


janeman menay pehla part parliya tha...par ye waala kammal hay


tu har naya part ek naye jasbay say likhti hay...har part may ek naveen kahani jhallakti hay


thats ur usp girl...


love yaa


muah


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Posted: 13 years ago
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hei simi,
will leave comments later..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mystory

Yes, my darling! I have realised that I can't work without working on you first.
She blushed a deep red and whispered; then shut up and get to work!
In the next moment she was lost in another world as their bodies interlocked magically like a perfectly solved jigsaw puzzle, and he took her back where she belonged; home.

czarina ji i love you

madam mera dil kitni baar churaogi...itna batado ? koi record bananay ka irada hay kya

ek ek line...ek ek word kano may music lag raha hay


janeman menay pehla part parliya tha...par ye waala kammal hay


tu har naya part ek naye jasbay say likhti hay...har part may ek naveen kahani jhallakti hay


thats ur usp girl...


love yaa


muah


Dil churaane ka hi iraada tha, iraada hai, aur hamesha rahega!!!
After all I am yr czarina😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Yay you updated!! 😃
I absolutely loved the way he let her curse and hit him for some time when he picked her up from the beach and didn't tell her it was him. Both of them are too much in love. *sigh* Its so heart-warming to see how special the project of her hospital is to him.

Eagerly awaiting your next update! 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😳 i guess i have difficulty finding words to describe this update...wow mindblowing im jus loving this pair more and more...thnx for such a lovely update...dont they fight ever ??????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: simiv

Dil churaane ka hi iraada tha, iraada hai, aur hamesha rahega!!!
After all I am yr czarina😳



oye czarina

teray chakkar may wahan thread par mein aur pooja sautanay ban bethay 😆😆

usay bol de ki tu bas meri hay...uski nahi 😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Sonali: Thanks dear!!
@Priya: So sweet..keep fighting!!!LOL

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