FF~ HUMAN#10- Imp Note pg149..please read!!

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: candy84

i'll be back in an hour or so...*wants to join Candle March with friends*

Sorry Simi 😔

Wish I was there SKD!!! Don't get lost and get back in one piece!!!😃

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NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Very real update Di!!

You do research while writing so much or your memories, dunno, but it definitely makes reading so much more good. And amazing. And gives the feel of being there...though since I kept thinking you must have done all this in Disney Land, I kept imagining you instead of the usual!! LOL!!

Akki is, as usual, brilliant. Loved his line about being the staunchest well wisher of Shanak...Boo is also so cute with her trying to get Akki influenced by Shanak romance😆

Megha toh darling baccha. :D

Loved it when she said "Doctor Aunty" And then corrected to Chachi 😳

And this was toh total surprise waise, alongwith Shaan we too were stumped, nahi? Poo knew na! Did you make her swear secrecy too?😆

As far as the first update goes, well, it was actually scary to see Shaan so confident. Sorry! Kinda edgy. But then that's what makes him what you have made him...Stubborn, determined and a go-getter. Whether its Khanak or his job.
And yes, nature does wondrous things, doesn't it? Calm, soothing. Still and Silent.

Another thing, the way you wrote how Shaan was at a loss of words...the way you left that sentence midway at the apt moment..sheer brilliance. I was so in awe. Not that you had me all praises earlier for your writing, now toh I am total fida...and inspired, definitely.

Oh and I love how you describe clothes and all...did I tell you?

Love!

Vattie ❤️

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NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Hey Di!

Am good :))

Reading some earlier updates..from the first thread..

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: vatsalya
Hey Di!

Am good :))

Reading some earlier updates..from the first thread..

oh fine..enjoy..
i'm reading the latest one very slowly..

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NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: RB81

oh fine..enjoy..
i'm reading the latest one very slowly..

Savoring?😳

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: vatsalya
Very real update Di!!

You do research while writing so much or your memories, dunno, but it definitely makes reading so much more good. And amazing. And gives the feel of being there...though since I kept thinking you must have done all this in Disney Land, I kept imagining you instead of the usual!! LOL!!

Akki is, as usual, brilliant. Loved his line about being the staunchest well wisher of Shanak...Boo is also so cute with her trying to get Akki influenced by Shanak romance😆

Megha toh darling baccha. :D

Loved it when she said "Doctor Aunty" And then corrected to Chachi 😳

And this was toh total surprise waise, alongwith Shaan we too were stumped, nahi? Poo knew na! Did you make her swear secrecy too?😆

As far as the first update goes, well, it was actually scary to see Shaan so confident. Sorry! Kinda edgy. But then that's what makes him what you have made him...Stubborn, determined and a go-getter. Whether its Khanak or his job.
And yes, nature does wondrous things, doesn't it? Calm, soothing. Still and Silent.

Another thing, the way you wrote how Shaan was at a loss of words...the way you left that sentence midway at the apt moment..sheer brilliance. I was so in awe. Not that you had me all praises earlier for your writing, now toh I am total fida...and inspired, definitely.

Oh and I love how you describe clothes and all...did I tell you?

Love!

Vattie ❤️

Hey Vattie!!!

Wow itna lamba comment..and that too for this updt?? I didn't expect it dear..but I am floored!!! Loved it!!

Yes I told Poo..😆😆😆

LOL..yes I like to do some research and some of it is my own experience. Those trees..I saw them a long time ago..and I was simply struck in awe...and thats what I wanted to portray here...

When we see things like that we realise how small and insignificant we are..it has happened over and over with me, and it has helped me reorient myself to reality. And be less afraid I hope...

And don't praise me for how I write..I just write how I think thats all..

As for Shaan being determined and confident..well I thats what I wud hv felt if I was in his shoes at that moment..and he had been a little in doubt after he had talked to his Dad..but now nature helped him be sure...😃

Love you darling!!!

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Sim/Pundu

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: vatsalya

Savoring?😳

LOL..Vattie...

Does that mean that these updates don't measure up???

@Ramzz: I wish it doesn't make you think a lot...btw Shaan is a thinker..

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: simiv

LOL..Vattie...

Does that mean that these updates don't measure up???

@Ramzz: I wish it doesn't make you think a lot...btw Shaan is a thinker..😳

@vatty: yes i'm savouring it..
@simi: the update was so nice..will post comments for that 1st afterwards for the previous update..😃
waise where do u abscond??😕

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NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: simiv

LOL..Vattie...

Does that mean that these updates don't measure up???

@Ramzz: I wish it doesn't make you think a lot...btw Shaan is a thinker..😳

No di...just that how people fall in love..that part always makes you believe in this feeling. That is why I re-read the first thead a lot..

There is a kind of simplicity...of discovering each other, wooing someone, act all lovestruck..bas isliye 😳

And I so hoped you liked my comment...LOL...I am never able to grasp other FFs as well as this one..god swear..somehow I can feel whats words mean in this story baaki sab mein I always feel very superficial..and always get amazed at those who get those meanings..

Tabhi mere ko ye FF apna lagta hai...😳 Probably because I have taken interest in it more..whatever be the reason..