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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys..here it is..something for Poo ..Congrats for your Goldie Status!!!

And all my wonderful friends here on IF..a HOT gift!!!!😳😉 Sorry but I feel that our Human Shanak are a hot couple..so please bear with them...😳😳😳 and with me..😉
I Fall As I Stand

You touch my heart

With the warmth of your hands

Your eyes pierce my soul

And I fall as I stand

You take me places

No one ever can

Its by His Grace

That you are my man

And I am yours

to do as you please

Make love to me

Don't just tease

The sun was setting over the Pacific as it did everyday, turning the skies and waters ablaze. The warmth of the day slowly gave way to the mildness of dusk and the wind picked up stirring the fronds of the trees and bushes awake as the rest of nature turned in to go to bed. But time stood still for two particular individuals, whose journey together had taken on a newer meaning, where trust, friendship and love mattered the most.

She looked into his eyes of delicious liquid mocha and surmised exactly what he was thinking about... She blushed and her lashes fluttered down casting shadows on her cheeks. The soft light of the fading sun made her skin glow like gold. Fascinated he raised his fingers to trace her cheek bones;

Shadow and light, how lovely does the sun set on your face...
So how are you going to erase those memories my love? He asked with a devilish raise of an eyebrow.
His voice though the softest of whispers carried loud and clear into her ears; Tell me I'm waiting..he encouraged as she seemed to falter.

She looked up biting her lower lip her gorgeous eyes bright with intent and love; let me show you, but no peeking,...

He obeyed and sighed blissfully as he felt her fingers gently fondle his his jaw, his chin, his face, his neck.



She bent forward weaving her hands through the back of his scalp and slid them down using firm pressure on the tense muscles of his neck and shoulders, slowly and sensuously smoothing the knots away.

There is magic in your hands, I should demand this more often, he said as he firmly grabbed her dainty behind and pulled her onto his lap. She came willingly enough biting his ear while her hand crept inside his shirt fluttering like a butterfly over his strong hard torso eliciting a gasp.

Oh my Angel, my gift from God, what will I do without you? He muttered under his breath as he slid her skirt up her silky legs and licked and nipped the tender skin at the base of her neck...

Ouch! what was that?

Hunger pangs and you taste like a saltine cracker dipped in honey.

She giggled, I need some chow too..as her fingers undid the buttons of his tan shirt then paused suddenly ...lets get out of here..
What are you talking about? his hands were trying to pull up the bottom of her shirt.

I mean what if someone sees us?

The seals? We could teach them a lesson or two,
he chuckled.
The park rangers may wonder whom the lone bike belongs to..

But I can't hold back that long, it's too far away! Don't tell me it's one of your tricks! He looked up his face flushed with desire and frustration.

Shhh baby..trust me!

~~

He was nearly knocked over as she rushed into his arms..

He laughed, Hold on..as he kicked the door shut and tightly wrapped her in his arms; I want no strange eyes to witness our sacred pairing.

Communicating in a language that didn't need to be spoken, they had decided to stop at a small wayside motel; The Old Monterey Inn appearing too far away. It wasn't very clear about what may have passed through the receptionist's mind as he checked them in but he probably had a good clue by the look of nervous agitation on their faces.

The room was small but neat with a bed, two sofa chairs, coffee table and a TV, but these were passed over and ignored.

Its too warm in here, she said as she did away with her coat and helped him remove his.

Damn, these frilly things, more of a hindrance than a convenience! He mumbled gruffly as he fumbled with the tassels of her long skirt before she helped him unravel them and let the denim material fall to the floor. He went down on his knees and flicked his moist tongue into her navel.

Ahhh! She sucked in her breath and writhed giggling as his hands roamed up and down her spine.

Its my turn now! She was vehement as she tried hard but failed to remove his buckled belt

Sweetheart don't worry your pretty head, leave it to your man. He was true to his word..

He stumbled and fell over backwards as she jumped into his arms;

My girl seems to be in a hurry, he chuckled as she covered his face with wet kisses and fumbled with his shirt.

Remember that she's hungry? she sounded business like as she pushed him down on his back and bit and nibbled on his skin eliciting a delighted gasp at the intensity of her ardor.

Your husband needs to be fed too! he decided forcing her on her stomach and sucking the smooth skin on her back making her shiver with ecstacy.

A flimsy undergarment was unclasped and tossed away before he dragged her back into his torso, and his hands smoothed over the swell of her bosom.

Screaming out his name, she turned around panting while her nails dug into his lean back.

I may need some bandages before we are done, he laughed as they rolled over again and fell on to the floor. Darling are you hurt? he asked concerned, cradling her head in his hands.

Of course not, how could I be with my he-man around? She spoke urgently as she smoothly molded herself into his body like a certain lock had found its key before kissing him hard on the mouth.
Then get ready for the main event.
What kind,
she could barely speak for her brain had turned numb with rapture.
A marathon that may never end.
Later...
The phone rang..
What the hell..who is it?
Sir wake up service, its 5 am.
So soon? Blast..thanks anyway..
You are proving to be bad for my health honey... he muttered smiling before pulling her back on top of him.
You asked for it..came back a smug reply.
~~~~~~~~
Phew..had trouble writing it..but eagerly awaiting yr comments!!😊😳
As I said will be off for about 4 days.,,till then take care 😉
Edited by simiv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: RB81

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👏👏congrats for 9th thread dear👏👏
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Thanks sweetheart...you have been a major instrument in this achievement!!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
hei simi,
so i start with my comments now..
wat to say..the title itself had the effect.."I FALL AS I STAND"..wonderful..
then comes the poem..
awesome to the core..👏
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each n every line simple but had its own mark..as i read it again i feel butterflies in my stomach n my heart goes crazy..
just his hands n eyes does most of the deeds to her..then poor her how could she stand..thats y she falls as she stands..
yup..no one can take her to the places he has taken her/will take her through out their entire life(by all means😳😳)..s..he is ur man..ONE N ONLY SHANTANU..
the last 4 lines of the poem is just out of the world..my heart goes more crazy in these lines..i couldn't get enough of it..such lines..oh my gosh..*thud*

And I am yours

to do as you please

Make love to me

Don't just tease

the real state of her mind..wat she feels abt him n for him..she is all his n he can do watever he wishes..n it is demanding.."make love to me..don't just tease"..😳😳😳 my cheeks r burning hot with these lines..y don't my heart stop drumming like crazy..it is awesome simi..
do u expect me to go further with my comments..mein tho already in shanak land dreaming abt them..
ok..as i promised u to give my comments i drag myself back from the dreamland to continue with my comments..don't mind if i go to dreamland occasionally..😳😳😳
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the way u described the dusk..marvelous..can it get any better..na..wonderful simi..n the 2 particular individuals(shaan n khanak) had their relation moved to a higher milestone..a very understanding relation..that they'll be there for the other..
seeing his eyes she knows wat he feels n that gave a blush automatically..the description of her lowered eyes with her eyelashes touching her cheek n the sunlight falling on her..kudos to u dear..i so imagined her..wonderful..
shaan is back to his naughty self n asked her how she is going to erase his old memories..her reply to that..*sighs* took me to another world..she undoing his tense muscles with her soft n sensuous touch..haaye..*me died*..how could he just sit after she did this..ahaha..there he comes..how could he hold himself..he pulled her to his lap..(*reminded me of the lap scene on july 13 episode *sighs*) n she did things to him which could hardly stop him from doing anything to her..her biting his ear n hands over his torso..(oh my gosh i get goose bumps thinking of that..☺️
☺️☺️☺️☺️)
n he is back to his self..n he couldnt control himself that he started playing with her skirt and at the same time teasing her to no bounds..she too got on full mood..but suddenly got aware of the surroundings n said him "lets get out of here"..i could so feel her hunger for him..(its going to be a tough time for shaan i think..☺️
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shaan's frustration abt leaving now n the way she reassured him n they cant make it to the place where they stayed so going for a wayside motel..the receptionist's look at them meaningfully..thankfully the receptionist didnt interrupt them..
woh woh..khanak rushing to his arms immediately after getting inside..her urgency to hold him n do things..well written simi..(am i going overboard with my comments??😕😕 i hope its within the limits..)
oh my gosh..he got down on his knees and flicked his tongue into her navel..*died again*..(should i really continue further..)ahhh..exactly the reaction khanak gave..she is all set to undo his but failed in her attempt to remove his belt..n our dear shaan didn't want his sweet heart to work on that n he did it for her..oh my gosh..(besharam ki hadd..)
khanak in all hurry n jumping to his arms making him fall..really she is the tigress now but has a potential opponent..☺️☺️
☺️ both feeding each other's hunger..☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ (me need a cold shower again..KILL ME SIMI..just KILL ME!!!)
haaye..khanak digging her nails to his back (again reminded me of july 21st episode..their final SR in the show..☺️
☺️☺️☺️) shaan's comment for that needing bandages..LOL!!!
haaye the MARATHON event..☺️
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room service waking them up..
the final comments by shaan..(haaye so khanak proved my point..tough time for shaan..but he enjoys it..bring it baby..) and her reply..haaye "U ASKED FOR IT.."
☺️☺️☺️☺️
haaye..ramzzz finally finishes her besharmi comments..
*hides from everyone*..but kyun..y should i hide..waise i am BESHARAM..so let it be..but dont think too bad of me..haan..😳😳
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratulation Simi For the 9th theard...🥳.
🥳. 🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.🥳.


Party Time


Humun Shanak Rocks 👍🏼

Hey Guys the Pics Are Awesome...loved it 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


THis Is for Our Dearest Simi & my humun Friends



Love u
Pranju.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: simiv

Thanks sweetheart...you have been a major instrument in this achievement!!!😳


i didnt do anything in this dear..dont embarrass me..u know wat i'm still in college..thought i would go home..but we had to finish the prev thread na..so i'm here till now..😆
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats Simi 😃

and Sorry for late comment... your poem is Out of this World... pure mirror reflection of Shanak 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratulations for Thread # 9!!!!
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Oh...😳😳😳😳 for the update... just caught up... phew.. Ice... need lots of it...😳😃😆
But your poems are beautiful... sigh...😳👏
Edited by jparker - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First one to put a like yeaii
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
@ Pranjal: You are so sweet!!!! Can you copy and paste yr comment frm the previous thrd..I lked it so much!!
@ Ramzz: I meant for reaching the 9 th thread..couldn't hv done with out your encouragement...
Thanks so much!!!
And I expect a nice long comment..which will inspire me to write hotter updates!!!;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: candy84


Congrats Simi 😃

and Sorry for late comment... your poem is Out of this World... pure mirror reflection of Shanak 👍🏼

Thanks dear..they inspired me to write it and you helped!!
btw can use yr siggie for the next update!!!😳😉

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