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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: simiv

Bye Ramzz!

@ Czar: Diplomatic immunity becoz you are Russian and if you commit a crime in India..since you are a high offcial they can't punish you here!!:D



@czarina : 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣


thats lik a perfect royal wifey...babes u rock !!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystory



@czarina : 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣


thats lik a perfect royal wifey...babes u rock !!!!!!!!!!!!


You too czar..so I will call upon you if we need to dispose of anybody😉
Need to go now..see you later😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: simiv

You too czar..so I will call upon you if we need to dispose of anybody😉
Need to go now..see you later😳




damn we r one horrible couble 😆

baki sab humsay bachkay rehna

love yaa

bi

have a nice day
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey Smiley Sim

Brilliant writing''hats off to you👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

First of all Thanks a ton for the siggie 😃 & Sorry sabko pareshaan karne ke liye especially you candy & Ramzzz.😳 Loved the Siggie.⭐️ Too amazing & cute. 👏 👏 👏

Returning to the update hats of to you Sim for highlighting the Big issue of Females.👏 Loved your detailing & discribtion abt Khanak here.⭐️ & the Dr, Sriram is the worst insaan 😡 (dharti ka bhoj kahi ka 😡) Dr.Sriram is papa's age n he behaving like this..disgusting'.. Mere bus cahle to is ka bhi khoon kar doon.😊 Khanak felling sad & frustrated & decided to go for the shopping.😒 Brilliant discribption of her thoughts here,👏 She is completely unmindful of what she is buying.😳 Wonderful discribtion of Little guy & his Mom.👏 asie har gali mein milte hain log specially in Pune. *phew* she is blaming khanak for all the issue

Khanak is so scared ki she even runs away from store manager 😊, your discribtion so real ki I litrally felt a goosebumps here.👏 Than those idiotic bunch of guys I so hate them.😡 So they had a tushan with Shantanu khandelwal.😉 Poor khanak got so scared yaar.😭 Shaan is tensed as he is late coz of Mumbai traffic 😕'.Yaar sacchi Mumbai traffic is very khatarnaak.

Shaan finally enters the house 😊 & the way she reacted as soon as shaan entered the house 😊..was the best 👏 the way to described their love & her trust over hubby.😊 Waise Kudos to you simi for the beautiful discribtion ⭐️ the Security, the trust, the faith, the love, the dependence in the relation of a Husband & Wife described beautifully here,👍🏼 but why she didn't shared it with him.😕 Waise Shaan is going to channai for a Week.😲 Ooh ho ab khanak kya karegi ek week ke liye 😕 (let her go with him 😳 ya phir kuch karo but no duriyaan between the love birds yaar please 😳)

Last part was as usual fantastic.👏 Your way of discribtion their togetherness, was magical.😍 Khanak feeling Secured & most importantly the feeling of belongingness the sweet pleasure made her cry 😊. ..shaan feeling bad seeing her tears..worrying whether he hurt her.😊 Superb Superb Superb 👏 & the final lines the Red & Purple one was just out of the world ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

🥳 SHANAK FOREVER. 🥳

Sorry Simi for commenting late 😳 actually My papa came yesterday to meet me from Jaipur so didn't commented. 😳 Was busy with Papa.🥳 Sorry.😳

Waiting for the next part''..Jaldi dena. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Love u 😊

Pranjal.

Sorry for the late reply Pranju!! And don't worry abt the siggie..as you said any HAA updt is incomplete without one.
And yes I just felt that I cud write abt one such thing which any woman faces in society..not only with young fellows but also with older men..then it gets really hard to deal with...like Khanak is having.
And in such a state of mind..it was natural that Khanak wud rely on Shaan..but when he talked abt his new venture she didn't mention her problem becoz she knew then he won't go..even though she cud be wrong there but we as humans react this way..
And yes though she didn't tell him abt the prob he was probably sensing it in her..😃
Don't worry abt not commenting..see my haal is also the same😉
Love U,
Simi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: purvi08

i would have kicked those guys😡😡😡😡

but bolna aasaan hota hai,lekin woh time aisa kuch karna bahut difficult hota hai😭😭😭😭😭

beautifully written⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

please unhe juda mat honey dena di😉😉😉😉

love you simi di🤗🤗🤗🤗

@burthal group--i miss you all..have fun everybody🤗🤗

KAsh!! I knw yr jujitsu knowledge wud help quite a bit..if the badmaash guys don't learn it frm you then our czar is ready to kill them😉😆
Waise I am missing you too!!!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JyotiS

Simi updat ekaro jaldi as I have some time to dodge someone and sneak around. Everything failed but cell phone zindabad😃

Hey Jyo! I ain't ready yet...calm down..zyada excitement tere liye theekh nahin!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago


Originally posted by: mystory




@sautan : this song goes for u deary...i hope it answers all ur questions...njoy

Aaj Ki Farmaish Billu Munni Aur Shamp Ki Raampur Meerut Aur Itava Se,
Sangeet Hai Sohail Sen Ka, Bol Hain Dr. Irshad Kamil Ke,
Pesh Karte Hain, Har Aashiq Ke Dil Ko Kuredane Wala Gaana,
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai, Ajab Sa Risk Hai.

Koi Bole Dariya Hai (Kaisa, Kaisa Hai Isq)
Koi Maane Sehra Hai (Kaisa, Kaisa Hai Isq)
Koi Sone Sa Tole Re
Koi Maati Sa Bole Re
Koi Bole Ke Chandi Ka Hai Chhura
Hota Aise Ye Mauke Pe
Roka Jaaye Na Roke Se
Achha Hota Hai, Hota Ye Bura
Kaisa Ye Isq Hai Ai Ai' Ajab Sa Risk Hai..
Kaisa Ye Isq Hai Ai Ai' Ajab Sa Risk Hai..
Ajab Sa Risk Hai..

Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai

Musqilon Mein Ye Daale
Jo Bhi Chahe Kara Le
Badle Ye Dilo'n Ke Faisle
Mann Ka Mauji Isq To Ji
Albeli Si Raho'n Pe Le Chale

Koi Peechhe Na Aage Hai
Phir Bhi Jaane Kyun Bhaage Hai
Maare Ishqe Ka Ishqe Ka Dil Mera
Isqe Uske Ye Hisse Mein
Tere Mere Ye Qisse Mein
Maula Seekhe Bin Seekhe Bin De Sikha
Kaisa Ye Isq Hai, Ajab Sa Risk Hai
Kaisa Ye Isq Hai, Ajab Sa Risk Hai

Ga Ga Ga Ga Ga Ma Ga
Ga Ga Ga Ga Ga Ma Ga
Ga Ga Ga Ga Ga Ma Ga Re Sa Re Dha Ni

Naina Laage To Jaage
Bina Dori Ya Dhaage
Bandhte Hain Do Naina Khwaab Se
Na Ata Ho Na Pata Ho
Kore Naino Mein Koi Aa Base (X2 Times)
Iska Uska Na Iska Hai
Jaane Kitna Hai Kiska Hai
Kaisi Bhaasa Mein Bhasa Mein Hai Likha
Iske Uske Ye Hisse Mein
Tere Mere Ye Kisse Mein
Maula Seekhe Bin Seekhe Bin De Sikha
Kaisa Ye Isq Hai, Ajab Sa Risk Hai..
Kaisa Ye Isq Hai, Ajab Sa Risk Hai..
Kaisa Ye Isq Hai, Ajab Sa Risk Hai..
Kaisa Ye Isq Hai, Ajab Sa Risk Hai..




Aaaye Haayee...!!!😍😍

Now What Do I Say? I'm speechless...😳

This is for you my Sweet Sautan...
"Hum agar aapse mil nahi paatay
Aisa nahin kay aap humein yaad nahin aate
Mana ka jahaan kay sab rishtey nibahaye nahin jatey
Par jo bas jatay hai dil mein wo bhulaye nahin jatay.."

Bhagwan kare aise Sautan sabko mile 😆
Love you
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi guys!!
Thanks again for continuing to read and comment and like HAA... Here's part 1 of the next update. It may surprise some of you but again..I don't want the story to be predictable, just like life is unpredictable.😃
Eternally Yours A

Khanak expertly wrapped her wet hair in the bath towel and checked her face in the mirror carefully. It had become a routine lately, something she'd never paid much attention to before marriage. She blushed; yes, there were several tiny bruises and a particularly large one on her right shoulder which would be tough to hide with makeup, he had been quite rough last night, which was unusual for him, she wondered why. Perhaps she would opt for a churidaar kurta instead of a saree today, yes that might work.

There was also that subtle but definite hint of dark circles under her eyes, she frowned. Not good, she was prone to them when she did not get enough sleep . Her concealer would have a lot of work to do today, it won't do if he saw them, then he would ask questions, she wouldn't be able to fool him with just about anything; he was way too perceptive.

She walked up to the huge French windows and threw open the curtains, letting the warmth of the sun's rays soak into her skin. Inhaling deeply the clean and cool sea breeze, she felt an immediate calm seep deep as if to cleanse and splurge her very soul. All the cares and concerns from yesterday dissipated as if by magic. What had seemed like a huge insurmountable mountain of obstacles now appeared like a tiny molehill.

As for that sick Sriram Lodhi!! She had a game plan, she could take him on single handed! He wouldn't dare to try anything with her, how could he? Nahin toh use apne reputation se haath dhona padega ( he would have to forgo his reputation.) He won't risk it..especially when his roaring private practice was at stake! Maybe she should start by telling some of his patients, who were hers as well; no better way to spread bad news except by word of mouth..he wouldn't know what hit him

She liked the idea so much that she almost laughed out aloud before controlling herself ..he was still sleeping, I will let him sleep till it is time.

She smiled; he was lying with his face buried in the pillow occupying the whole bed as usual; no amount of space was big enough for her Prince Charming. So much so she frequently was afraid of rolling off her side..till he pulled her in at the last moment and proceeded to hug her so hard that she sometimes was afraid of dying from asphyxiation..

You are my body pillow, and that's the way I will treat you...came his pat reply when she protested.

I Wonder what would happen if we had a baby? She closed her eyes; she didn't want to think about it.

She glanced at the alarm clock..still half an hour to while away..perhaps she could skim the headlines and do justice to their subscription for a change, which was piling up unread on the coffee table! At least the kabaadiwala wouldn't feel insulted.

She opened the locks of the front door and peeped outside. There they were, new and crisp fresh off the press, 'The Times of India,' and 'The Indian Express,' happily announcing the daily horrors in bold and clean lettering.

If anybody asked what were the few things that Shaan and she didn't agree on..(they were discovering them slowly,) it was the choice of the source of news..He preferred 'The Times,' considering it less biased while she preferred 'The Express,' because she liked their irreverent style of reporting. They had spent arguing on the pros and cons of each for a whole day before arriving at a compromise and ordering both; it was an entire different matter if neither found time to read.

Not today though, she was determined to make a start. She ventured out to grab the papers and was startled by a loud noise from upstairs, the unmistakable rhythmic sound of a ball being bounced up and down...

Eeekkksss!!

She screamed in terror, her heart lodged in her throat, her worst fears realized..

Helppp!

Worse when her mouth was clamped shut with a strong hand, not allowing any sound to escape! This could not happen to her. Unable to shout, she did the next best thing ..she used her teeth...and kicked hard..

It worked..

Ouchhh!!!!

She opened her eyes wide in surprise..

Damn you! Is this the way you greet your husband??

She stared dumbfounded at Shaan who stood propping his injured hand in front of her face..looking very peeved and upset..

Oh No!!

She moaned almost collapsing with relief, it was her crazy husband after all, she should have guessed. She felt an irresistible urge to laugh; instead she reached out for his hand.

I'm so sorry! You poor hand! You frightened me! I thought I was being attacked! (He pulled his hand away;) Show it to me please!

Attacked?? When all I did was hug you from behind?! You are nuts!! But he let her look at it.

I'm sorry, I was just too keyed up, maybe it was something I saw in that newspaper, they always talk about such horrible things!

She stroked his hand, blowing gently on it at the same time, relieved to see that the skin was barely broken; Does it hurt you really bad?? Poor thing, he looked in much pain.

She felt miserable, cursed herself, why was she so jumpy, after all it was just a stupid basketball!

His irritation immediately vanished replaced by fond amusement as he studied the myriad of emotions flit across his wife's lovely expressive face while she carefully examined his hand; guilt, concern, anguish, apology, relief, self deprecation, tenderness... He decided to play along ..(acting in college plays certainly did come in handy.)

Then you should avoid reading or watching the news if it affects your psyche that badly!!! And yes it really does hurt! You could have drawn blood! Maybe even killed me!

He shouted in theatrical anguish. (That was going too far..no OTT bacchu..your wife is crazy but not stupid!)

Hey careful that stings!

He yelped as she tenderly washed the wound and cleaned it, muttering under her breath; .it doesn't look so bad, and we don't even have a first a first aid kit in the house, I am such an idiot!

It feels worse than it looks Ms Vampire! I am sure you were one in your past life and now you are morphing into that avatar again! Let me look at your canines! He said grabbing her face between his hands.

Stop it! Don't whine like a baby! It looks fine! By the way why are you always coming up behind me like that and scaring the hell out of me??!! You are the one to blame!

He beheld her face as it flushed with irritation and her eyes flashed accusingly. She never ceased to fascinate and surprise him, so quickly had the tables turned.

Well, I was missing you and your little behind was quite tempting; he said defensively, chagrined.

She smiled playfully, her anger replaced by smug satisfaction; Then we are even Mister, serve you right for taking your wife for granted! Now open your mouth!

What?!!

Open your mouth burthal before it becomes too late! She said urgently tapping his bewildered face.

There, that's like a good boy!

He almost choked as she plunked something in his mouth, it was round, sweet and rather delicious.

Happy birthday baby Shantanu! Welcome to the world! You are exactly 5 minutes old now..sorry missed out on the timing! A beautiful smile lit up her face.

How is it? She asked looking at him expectantly as he assimilated the information in his brain.

Oh is it my birthday today??!!! I forgot!... And it's awful!

Is it really? Damn!! I wanted to surprise you. I got up at 4 just to make it from scratch per mama's instructions! And I messed it up! I'm so sorry!! What a horrible wife you must think me to be!! Her face screwed up as her eyes filled with tears of disappointment.

He pulled her into his arms, looking into her eyes wondering at the depth of her love and devotion. He stared at her face, drinking her innocence in, she looked so lovely with her still damp hair forming vagrant curls around her face;

It's missing a very vital ingredient..

He said kissing her lips slowly and deliberately. She sighed with relief, moaning softly responding with equal ardor, putting her arms around his neck.

It's the most delicious thing I've ever tasted besides you of course! He smiled as she blushed her eyes dropping to focus on his bare chest which made her color even deeper; Thank you my sweetheart, for making this my most memorable and crazy birthday!

Shut up! You are such a tease! She said with a little smile running the tip of her fore finger over his collar bone.

A tingle shot up his spine, she drove him mad; Shut me up! You know how to!

She looked up with a pert smile and shook her head.

Now where's my gift? He whispered in her ear, loving the warmth of her red cheeks against his skin, it felt as good as the early morning light filtering through the window blinds did on his back.

What gift? Isn't my toiling in the kitchen for 2 hours gift enough, I expect some appreciation! She said but smiled knowingly as he lifted her up and carried her into the bedroom.

I meant the most wonderful, exclusive and priceless gift that only you can give me.

What is it? She sighed with happiness as he lay her down and closed her eyes.

The gift of you... Which only I can have anytime anyplace, no questions asked right? He asked kissing her with fierce ardor molding her petite body tightly to his own.

Right, no questions asked. She had no qualms about that at all.

xxx

Please comment😃

Edited by simiv - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mil gay..

waise simi is it not the indian express???
Edited by RB81 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

mil gay..

waise simi is it not the indian express???

It is..sorry typo..😊

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