A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26 - Page 12

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

u asked if i would read... arey... i read it already.... u changed ur username so i thot i don't know what ff u talking abt.... tu to meri fatima hai 😊

i did read it when u sent pm... its nice one... i wish zaid realizes that not everyone is here to hurt.... i wish he understands ada soon.... 3 days.... hmm... but i wish it happens sooner 😊

love u yaar... sorry for short comment but i really liked it... as i said earlier.... poat t in mayur version soon.. it will rock... mwaah *hug*

ohh sorry...u din get my new user name....quite different to my earlier one no ??

well thnx fr d comment deepika...
yeah he'll hopefully understand ....akhir umeed pe hi toh duniya kayam hai... 😉

aare maaf kiya fr d short comment....n thnx fr commenting n liking...
wahi badi baat hai hamare liye... 😊

take care,
fatima

Hi Fatima. Wonderful FF. Loved it a lot. You're a very good writer 👏

well zaid should express his feeling openly coz itz just the wonderfull feeling to be expressed

lovely ff
plz add me in ur pm list

Originally posted by: Alisha-MJHT

Hi Fatima. Wonderful FF. Loved it a lot. You're a very good writer 👏

Please continue soon and do write more FF on Mayur.

Thanks for the PM.

Alisha xx

thnx a lot alisha
for praising my writing skills and evn my ff 😊

yeah i'll try to continue soon

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

well zaid should express his feeling openly coz itz just the wonderfull feeling to be expressed

hey sanjana,

thnx u read tht post and commented on tht too
thnk u fr ur valuable view !! 😊

take care,
fatima

Hey fatma thnx 4 the pm bt i only read mayur FFz.........🤔

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0066" size="2">I've come across a very common reply in yourcomments regarding zaid's past....</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0066" size="2">well i wanted to know from you guyswhat you all personally feel </font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0066" size="2">is the reason justified ??</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0066" size="2">but please temme frankly whether you feel the reason is justified ???</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0066" size="2">see i felt it's justified....and i wrote the ending first and then the start...😊</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0066" size="2">my point was this only...nahi toh i wudnt hv written d story only....</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0066" size="2">but since you guys are my readers i felt it's better to know ur opinion...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0066" size="2">i know u'll have expressed it via ur comments but still then i'm a bit uncertain </font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0066" size="2">pls....lemme know...it'll help me 😊</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0066" size="2">take care,</font>

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His behaviour is quite justified, considering tht not evry1 is perfect....Just tht i felt/imagined Zaid to be perfect....so wen i saw this side of him....i was a bit shocked at his behaviour and felt tht he shud behave like a grown up man, and let go.

See dear😊 being a writer myself i wud like to say tht positive criticisms r made at times, they r not meant to discourage u....i think if u take them as a challenge it will be loads better😊
To Justify a character is indeed a difficult job.
I hope u werent bothered/disturbed by my comment, i was plain surprised...m sorry if i offended u in any way😊

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

His behaviour is quite justified, considering tht not evry1 is perfect....Just tht i felt/imagined Zaid to be perfect....so wen i saw this side of him....i was a bit shocked at his behaviour and felt tht he shud behave like a grown up man, and let go.

See dear😊 being a writer myself i wud like to say tht positive criticisms r made at times, they r not meant to discourage u....i think if u take them as a challenge it will be loads better😊
To Justify a character is indeed a difficult job.
I hope u werent bothered/disturbed by my comment, i was plain surprised...m sorry if i offended u in any way😊

ohh no no zeejay i wasn't disturbed or worried by ur comment...
ulta i was actually quiet pleased by ur comment !! infact i'm so happy i've a reader lyk
you whoz so understanding and encouraging... 😊

actually i just felt like asking u..and wat better way than this...i thot this way..im sorry if ur offended by my post...im really sorry....

yeah ur ryt...i shld take in positive criticism and as a challenge !!
and it's also true na evry person has his or her flaws....chaand pe bhi daag hota hai na... 😉
so zaid is no exception....

hope ur liking the way the story is progressing... 😳
and there is this sad news...my story will end in three or more parts.. 😭
hope ur not shocked by this news....lekin its my first story na...so i din wanna take a risk..and hence my chaps too were small.....but i tried to make them big...
n i dnt like dragging stories to d breakpoint....

dunno if ths is ryt or not....but i felt it's ryt to do this.... 😊

take care,
fatima