A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26 - Page 13

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

ohh no no zeejay i wasn't disturbed or worried by ur comment...
ulta i was actually quiet pleased by ur comment !! infact i'm so happy i've a reader lyk
you whoz so understanding and encouraging... 😊

actually i just felt like asking u..and wat better way than this...i thot this way..im sorry if ur offended by my post...im really sorry....

yeah ur ryt...i shld take in positive criticism and as a challenge !!
and it's also true na evry person has his or her flaws....chaand pe bhi daag hota hai na... 😉
so zaid is no exception....

hope ur liking the way the story is progressing... 😳
and there is this sad news...my story will end in three or more parts.. 😭
hope ur not shocked by this news....lekin its my first story na...so i din wanna take a risk..and hence my chaps too were small.....but i tried to make them big...
n i dnt like dragging stories to d breakpoint....

dunno if ths is ryt or not....but i felt it's ryt to do this.... 😊
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take care,
fatima

ohh m glad, for a moment i felt u took my words the wrong way...:)
Its always a pleasure to appreciate talent sweety😊 n u r truly talented!⭐️
no no m not at all offended by ur post....!!
exactly thts the point dear, i thought zaid wud be perfect😍 but his char is very natural....n thts lovely😳
Yes m loving the track..abt the FF ending...well m not tht sad, unless u r promising another story soon? u r.. right? u cant give up writing after this one...dont u dare even think that alright?

Same here, even i dont like the drag n all....abt ur short updates...c dear there's a difference.

In short updates when there is nothing new revealed, i mean when there is no headsup in the track, then its a short update in its true essence, ur updates have been lovely and meaningful😳and an important part of the story as a whole...

About ending the story u r doing the right thing...dont worry, every story has to come to an end, but then opens another door right? we move to the next ff and its another challenge😊

I have a request, after this ff if u get time, do write an OS or ff on SaJan...coz i love reading abt them and the amazing writer u r, i cant really imagine wat u can come up with.
As i always say i love ur narrative skills...! i can simply imagine the beautiful definition u can give to SaJan actually i cant....

I am always here if u need any support😊 as a writer myself i understand tht u must be unsure and nervous abt the future track, but dont worry give it a try buddy! and it will rock as always m sure😊

luv
ZeeJay🤗

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

OMG ...!!

</div>u almost gave m a cardiac arrest ...
i thought , it happened to nupur...phewww
*wipin of the sweat*..
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ohh...feelin sad for mayank !...hope he understandz nupur soon ...

lovely update ..great !!

-Ruchi-

hey ruchi,

hehe...sorry fr giving u a near heart attack 😆
hmm....i wanted readers to feel tht way nly ...aah thnk god i succeeded 😊

thnk u fr liking it so much....
waise tym eill only tell...whether he'll undrstnd her or not... 😉

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

ohh m glad, for a moment i felt u took my words the wrong way...:)
Its always a pleasure to appreciate talent sweety😊 n u r truly talented!⭐️
no no m not at all offended by ur post....!!
exactly thts the point dear, i thought zaid wud be perfect😍 but his char is very natural....n thts lovely😳
Yes m loving the track..abt the FF ending...well m not tht sad, unless u r promising another story soon? u r.. right? u cant give up writing after this one...dont u dare even think that alright?

Same here, even i dont like the drag n all....abt ur short updates...c dear there's a difference.

In short updates when there is nothing new revealed, i mean when there is no headsup in the track, then its a short update in its true essence, ur updates have been lovely and meaningful😳and an important part of the story as a whole...

About ending the story u r doing the right thing...dont worry, every story has to come to an end, but then opens another door right? we move to the next ff and its another challenge😊

I have a request, after this ff if u get time, do write an OS or ff on SaJan...coz i love reading abt them and the amazing writer u r, i cant really imagine wat u can come up with.
As i always say i love ur narrative skills...! i can simply imagine the beautiful definition u can give to SaJan actually i cant....

I am always here if u need any support😊 as a writer myself i understand tht u must be unsure and nervous abt the future track, but dont worry give it a try buddy! and it will rock as always m sure😊

luv
ZeeJay🤗

awwe i'm so glad zeejay ...im really rendered speechless by ur words..!!
for appreciating my talent and all..

frankly telling i owe you and sheldev n pooja a lot...u guys have been reading my ff frm d very start...i actually have written a thnk u note for u guys...wch i'll post @ the end... 😊

hmm...i have a story in mind but it'll take a bit tym to materialize...and studies too...
ahh it's being a lot hectic for me...to manage studies and stories n poems .....

actually one of my frnd (colg frnd) alwyz says to me...ur updates r quiet small...i mean she just reads hence she feels so...bt its so much ....u have to thnk so much before making it ur update...ain't i ryt..??
but don't worry i don't take her criticism in the -ve way....i helps me a lot to improvise 😊

hmm....os abt sajan...i'll defo thnk abt it if i get tym... 😳
and im enthralled ....by ur praise bt i seriously dnt thnk of myself as an amazing writer....maybe good bt nt amazing..i've yet to learn so much more....

sure dear...i'll never forgt you...and inshallah my future track wud be good !! 😊

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

awwe i'm so glad zeejay ...im really rendered speechless by ur words..!!
for appreciating my talent and all..

frankly telling i owe you and sheldev n pooja a lot...u guys have been reading my ff frm d very start...i actually have written a thnk u note for u guys...wch i'll post @ the end... 😊

hmm...i have a story in mind but it'll take a bit tym to materialize...and studies too...
ahh it's being a lot hectic for me...to manage studies and stories n poems .....

actually one of my frnd (colg frnd) alwyz says to me...ur updates r quiet small...i mean she just reads hence she feels so...bt its so much ....u have to thnk so much before making it ur update...ain't i ryt..??
but don't worry i don't take her criticism in the -ve way....i helps me a lot to improvise 😊

hmm....os abt sajan...i'll defo thnk abt it if i get tym... 😳
and im enthralled ....by ur praise bt i seriously dnt thnk of myself as an amazing writer....maybe good bt nt amazing..i've yet to learn so much more....

sure dear...i'll never forgt you...and inshallah my future track wud be good !! 😊

take care,
fatima

thts very sweet of u dear😊
No probs i understand....but m glad to knw tht u have thought of something😊 so u will be writing!:D
i will tell u smthing...i am just lyk u....scared all d tym abt my updates, i think its natural as a writer.
I think nobody is perfect, there's always a scope for improvement, ur style of writing is really fab, if u believe tht u can do much better then its really good😊
For me u r one of the best writers on IF..!!
and i will never let u forget me😆 Just Kidding ;)
Yup really luking forward for the future update:)

Keep Rockinngg as always...!!:D:D
Luv ya🤗

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

thts very sweet of u dear😊
No probs i understand....but m glad to knw tht u have thought of something😊 so u will be writing!:D
i will tell u smthing...i am just lyk u....scared all d tym abt my updates, i think its natural as a writer.
I think nobody is perfect, there's always a scope for improvement, ur style of writing is really fab, if u believe tht u can do much better then its really good😊
For me u r one of the best writers on IF..!!
and i will never let u forget me😆 Just Kidding ;)
Yup really luking forward for the future update:)

Keep Rockinngg as always...!!:D:D
Luv ya🤗

awwe thank u so much dear..!!..

hey can i ask u smthng actually i've written some short poems todays...
could u jz temme how thy r ??
if yes then i'll pm u them....
is tht fine with you..??....

i actually even write short articles and poems.....and i wud be glad if you read them 😊

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

awwe thank u so much dear..!!..

hey can i ask u smthng actually i've written some short poems todays...
could u jz temme how thy r ??
if yes then i'll pm u them....
is tht fine with you..??....

i actually even write short articles and poems.....and i wud be glad if you read them 😊

take care,
fatima

It will be a treat to read them, but m not gud at poetry😳 so i wont be able to give a critical review......but will love to read, so do pm them to me..
Ryt now ma sis needs the lappy, so i g2g......weneva i log in next, will reply to u:):)

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

It will be a treat to read them, but m not gud at poetry😳 so i wont be able to give a critical review......but will love to read, so do pm them to me..
Ryt now ma sis needs the lappy, so i g2g......weneva i log in next, will reply to u:):)

sure dear i'll pm them to u today only...
u can gimme ur reviews later too 😊

take care,
fatima

Fatima .... I will read all the parts and get back later ....

just read all da parts...
Mindblowinggg....
loved itttt....
update it sooon....
n add me to ur pm list....

Heya guys I've finally updated next chap hope you guys like it !

Enjoy and lemme know how it is ...

Chap 8: Soiree

The whole household was busy with chores and was stirring up with the last minute preparations, finally the big day had arrived and joy and happiness lit the home. Everyone was running here and there and the hustle-bustle left everyone panting. Old melodious wedding songs were playing, guests were chattering and the bride and groom were nervous in their respective homes and looking forward to the evening!

The evening was cold due to the light snow fall and mist shrouded the way, the colourful lights illuminated the background and added a touch to the serene place.

Gaurav was seated in a shimmering white car, unlike the traditional horse being led by Sameer and zaid and accompanied by some other local friends and the Khanna family! Zoya too joined them as she was from both sides. He looked handsome in his golden sherwani with cream patchwork, a white shera covered his face he moved it aside and gazed outside in the hope of seeing his beautiful bride and was caught off guard by zoya while he was busy blushing.

Preet sat quietly dressed in her bridal attire in her bedroom as her friends and cousins joked and giggled around her adding to her nervousness. She looked around and took a last look at her bedroom and memories of her younger self flocked her mind, and she blushed deeply the day she dreamed off had finally arrived, she was getting married to the man of her dreams, the love of her life! Her heart thudded impatiently with excitement and jitter waiting for him to arrive soon.

A moment later, distant sounds of wedding band was heard and muskaan and ada left to greet them as preet adjusted her ghunghat taking one last look of herself as a maiden!

Preet's parents greeted the groom's family and friends, flashing smiles. Gaurav descended from the car and walked towards Geeta, Preet's mom welcomed him with an Aarti thali, he moved his sehra aside and bowed his head so as to take blessings from her, she smiled and led him inside.

Preet's father Abhinav greeted Prachi and gaurav's family and friends and took them inside the wedding hall where the ceremony was to take place, soon everyone got seated. Gaurav waited eagerly at the alter and looked sideways every now and then to get a glimpse of his lovely bride, and Sameer and zaid pulled his leg and teased him to glory yet gaurav remained unfazed and grinned!

A couple of minutes later preet descended down the stairs with ada, zoya and muskaan on her sides, gaurav almost leapt with joy seeing her ! She looked stunning in her heavily embroidered gold lehenga, heavy gold neck less and earrings adding to the beauty. He gulped unable to gasp her image into his heart.

Zaid on the other hand was feeling the same on seeing Ada, she looked breathtakingly beautiful in her baby pink chiffon saree with silver embroidery and crystal work, a vision of ethereal beauty. He could not keep his eyes of her! She too noticed him and felt shy and blushed deeply trying to concentrate more on preet rather than him. She stole furtive glances at him from under her lashes and almost stumbled, his warm brown eyes stirred her soul and butterflies fluttered in her stomach at the look, he looked tall and handsome in his maroon sherwani with golden work, he complimented her in every way. She blushed like a young bride on her wedding.

She snapped out of her reverie when she heard the priest chanting the wedding vows. Soon preet and gaurav got up to go around the sacred fire for seven times, they were completed in no time and the priest handed gaurav a small container of sindoor, he took a pinch and smeared it in the small parting of her hair, symbolizing his commitment forever and then wrapped a gold mangalsutra around her neck and tied the ends. Finally they were man and wife! Everyone wished them a long and a happy married life; they stood up to take Ada's grandma's and their parents blessings.

They took blessings and finally it was time for the bidaai ceremony and tears of joy and sorrow as separation from parents filled Preet's eyes and she hugged her near and dear ones.

A lone tear fell from zaid's eyes too, as he thought he would never have such a beautiful moment with the girl of his dreams! But you never know until the right time comes!

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Ah! finally it's over I know it's small but please forgive me for my mistakes !

-Fatima