A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: amrita2010

Finally, finally I finished reading all the parts.

One word describes it prefectly, TOUCHING!!!
I loved the way the story enfolded...it's beautiful!!!
Did i mention this before? I feel like viewing the scenes while reading your writings....great, dear!!!



Wow that was too fast...but then again
the story is quite short ain't it ??

it was my first attempt at writing......

I'm so touched that you liked it....I have no words :)

I'm speechless dear




Thnx :)
Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my partner...
That was so good yaar...
Really , the way you expressed it...
Beautifully written...
The past was painful, I felt so bad for Zaid
I was totally lost in it! 😳
and you were disturbibg me..
I want more! 😊
But after your exams hun! or else dont ever expect my comment! 😳
Your vocabulary is wonderful!!!
I love it!

Take care!
Love you 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Noor - I had edited my comment
Didnt check yet?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Hope Im not late 😊

***Edited****
Sorry I am really late to edit it - kaan pakadke sorry,Noor..

Glad to see you here di ! and it's alright...at least you came :)

Noor - It was really a touching one.. We knew Zaid's past was horrible - but this much..It was indeed a shock and painful..
But I didn't understand why Zaid said this - I very well know this is the past, a past which has done no harm to me or someone else in direct respect What more harm can a past do to someone? His own mother was killed by his father in front of his eyes - that too brutally..

Din know if it was really touching or horrible...I mean I even don't know if these things happen in reality what actually the person might be going thro' but if I were in Zaid's place then my condition would have been the same....hope I have done justice to it.

hmm...see what I felt is it's not exactly done any harm, apart from psychologically right..that's what my title of the chap says, It's all in the mind...ain't it??
the only harm it did directly was he lost his sanity and mixed lust with love, and I'm telling you when this situation arises na even though you feel like you love someone and care for them or at the most hug then and let out everything, there is a time when you feel what if we snap out of this? what if he really doesn't love me? or do I deserve him? All these questions cloud up when you know it's not relevant to think this but you just can't help it.

And this situation is not always for people who've suffered like Zaid, it could be something else but yet same and different.

And I agree to this line - hate is too strong for a word
I do not mind if someone tell me that she or he don't like me - but when someone says me "I hate you" ,It really hurts a lot .Today after reading this line from you - i can just agree to you and your views.

Yep hate is too strong for a word, and that is what I personally believe in...I just can't hate someone....I know people when I'm with them i feel eerie not always but sometimes wherein I should not...and why do I feel coz I have this stupid thing in my mind..wherein I know they are actually good people, happens with many people..its something about hate we all can relate too....glad even you could.

So..I guess this story is nearing its end - but do update only after ur exam.Else I wont spare you.

yeah its nearing it's end...and even my exams are nearing an end 😊
so no worries on that thing :)

With love,
Your di

Love you too di,
Fatima



Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -sam-

Oh my partner...
That was so good yaar...
Really , the way you expressed it...
Beautifully written...
The past was painful, I felt so bad for Zaid
I was totally lost in it! 😳
and you were disturbibg me..
I want more! 😊
But after your exams hun! or else dont ever expect my comment! 😳
Your vocabulary is wonderful!!!
I love it!

Take care!
Love you 🤗



Oh my my...my partner finally got time to come and visit this poor thread 😳
well I'm honored !!!!

Yeah I know how much my sleeping beauty was disturbed..after all I was one who was
constantly distracting her ?? or was it the other round hmm :)

but glad to know you felt his pain and agony that he was going thro'

About more...I guess I've already mentioned this one's coming an end but there are others.....
and thnx again dear :)

love ya
take care.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shab,
I am really delighted because u did the great job
and the way you wrote this part was beautiful
I actually dont feel to read anything apart from MAYUR but this one made me to rethink or revisit my own thought my dear
"I hate you" these words doesnt matter if it comes from someone whom u dont love but matters when loved one says this,it actually makes u livelss
Anyways ,i really felt bad for the past but now happy as both are together
so keep writting
luv,
Di
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG fatima
you are a awesome writer dear........you showed the emoyions perfectly.......i knew zaid's past was not a happy past.....but still so much........i cant tolorate all this...........how can a man be so much idiot...cruel...and nonsense.......fathers are suppose to be our role model...our support....but this was......you know what i actually could feel the pain of zaid.....this was truly painful........i cant believe this.....i feel so sad for zaid and her mother also....but i am happy that ada is with him
do update soon
love
tasfia
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiii
sorry 4 da late comment
been abroad
awesome update
loved it
poor Zaid
his past was horriable
so sad
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautifully written and definitely Hate is definitely a strong word.. and sorry for the awfully late comment...
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Posted: 14 years ago
its beautifull....
i read it all in one go n its simply awesome..... plz pm me the next tym u update....

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