A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26

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Hi, guys😊 I'm Fatima if you don't know me, Finally i've writtin a story and finally had the courage to post it here......as i've read a few FF's out here... This is my first story and here it goes. I hope you guys like it...Please let me how you felt reading it as it's my first ever work...and your comments and views will help me !!

Well the names used are different and not mayank and nupur ..but the names I used signify something and the character portrayal is very different from the way mayur r actually....hence opted out for these names ...the leads are mayank and nupur 😊 as they are my fav couple....do read ths FF too like the other mayur ff's..!!..Hope u guys like it !!

Character Sketch:

Ada:


Sweet'simple, and sensitive, very vivacious and a bit sarcastic too at times, loves romance to the hilt. Believes in love but feels no one will ever love her and has no reason to justify this statement of hers. Loves reading, writing poetry and articles for the local magazine and newspaper and watching romantic movies'can't stand horror; at times very philosophical that people stare at her with awe and the next instance she flips sides'her best friends laugh at this sudden change and label this as her "silly switch mode", hates lies and people who backbit and loves her family very much though it only consists of her elder brother and grandma. Believes in the saying "Do Good Feel Good" and a staunch believer in destiny. Is talkative but only in front of her friends not in front of strangers a unique amalgamation of an introvert and extrovert. She is a teacher in a pre school as she loves being around kids; has also done Masters in Special Education and Diploma in Early Child Care and Development.
Preet:

Ada's friend from childhood. She is cute and speaks her heart but very shy and quiet compared to her friends. Admires nature and natural beauty works for an NGO that preserves the environment. Loves to hang out with her friends and friends are her life.

Muskaan:

She is Ada's cousin and a dear friend too. She, Preet and Ada are childhood friends. She is sweet and bubbly by nature and very short tempered at times but at the same time is a responsible girl. Is a wedding planner and runs the cake shop along with ada.

Zoya:


She is a friendly girl by nature. She hails from Mumbai she loves her job and works with Sameer but they are always at loggerheads with each other. Is very brave and feels girls can do everything loves to take risk, twist and turns and lives life to the fullest. "Reckless" is another name to describe her.

Sameer:

Ada's big brother. He is chivalrous and charming, lives life to the fullest and yet is down to earth at times can be very lazy too. Loves his sister a lot and wants her to be happy; fulfills all her wishes. He works as a Public Relation Executive in Mumbai in a famous firm with his friends.

Zaid:


Hails from a rich family but yet is simple but with an added amount of attitude for the rest of the world who don't him personally, a very matured and responsible person and doesn't delve his thoughts and feelings to anyone. Bit different from the normal crowd and prefers to live in his illusory world and very shy by persona it would be best to say different and opposite to ada'holds a deep understanding for the people and the surrounding around him. An avid reader and movie buff, loves travelling to far off places and exploring, an ardent lover of all sports; not only watches them with great passion but plays too whenever he is free. Many people feel he is conceited, arrogant and rude but his friends feel his is a magical enigma and emotional and loving too. Mom left when he was young and dad remarried and so doesn't believe in love. Is a Mechanical Engineer by profession and loves his job truly..

Gaurav:

Sameer's childhood friend. Easy going and friendly in nature and a flirt, life of the party loves to hang out with friends and enjoy life to it's maximum but doesn't love to splurge on materialistic things and a die hard tennis fan'loves the sport like crazy once dreamt of becoming a professional tennis player but ended up becoming an HR executive and currently working in an MNC..

PROLOUGE

Ada is busy doing her daily chores as usual but this time with her brother, he is back home for a month as Gaurav and Preet are getting married. Even Zaid is back in town and Zoya too has accompanied them on Gaurav's special request! Everyone is busy in the preparations of the wedding and there is a hustle-bustle everywhere. Eventually, during the course of one month many things happen and the world turns upside down and Ada's life takes a new turn'..and this time for good!
I know the characters are too many but they are just supporting not more than that the story just revolves around zaid and Ada....hmm please read it and do let me know ..Thank u 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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im up for it !!!
do pm me!!

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Nice concept and characters:)
wud luv to read this one:)
continue sooon:)
Thanks for the pm

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ZeeJay!:)
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@parisbynight: and @VampirePrincess:

Thank u ..u liked it ...i'll try to update soon :)


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Hey Fatima
Lovely concept & character sketch
Can you please add me to your PM list?
Would love to read this FF
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hey, fatima.... i knew u would post this story on IF
let's c how u sketch out the later parts.....
m waiting to c the comments dat u wil b receiving for your story..................


👍🏼 ALL THE BEST 👍🏼
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hey Fatima,

Congrats and a great character sketch!!

Are Zaid n Ada a telly couple or u have made em up? looks interesting.
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Ooh!
Welcome to the FF Forum hun! 🤗
I really look forward to read more from you,
your prologue is really intriguing, keep writing!
PM me with updates, pleaseeee.

Best of luck 😳

xo. Fatima
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@charmiee: Hey thnx dear ...for ur encouragement and u knw d first part yup..??...😉 u read it
r'mber?? don't u...and ya finally i posted it here...hope evrythng turns out to be well !!

@hapinezz13: Thnx ...and no Ada n Zaid are nt a telly couple they are my own creation...
hope u like it!! 😊

@Phatty16: Thnx for welcoming me to d forum.. and i hope u will like it !! 😊
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Chap 1: Bonding



The sky was beautiful, the sun was shining and the birds were chirping and a chill ran through the air. It was mid November and the weather was very pleasant, Ada loved this time of the year but her grandma dreaded this weather as she usually fell ill. It was not a usual morning it was a lovely morning filled with chaos in the home and the reason for this chaos was Sameer. Well he was not home but would be arriving shortly. In the meanwhile, grandma goes to her room and Ada to the kitchen. Suddenly there is a light knock on the door and Ada runs to the door and is ecstatic to see him and hugs him tightly.

Well how is my princess? And what is this she is having tears in her eyes… did anyone say anything to my baby?? Hearing this Ada started to laugh and said oh! My sweet brother it's just I'm overjoyed to see you back and nothing more, you know granny is waiting for you from when and you are busy here go and meet her and then we'll talk.

Sameer agreed to this and went to his granny's room and approached her slowly from behind and embraced her and kissed her on her cheek, granny blushed at his act and said him to stop flirting with her hearing this both of them broke in laughter. In the meanwhile, Ada laid out the breakfast and called them to the dinner table. Sam is overjoyed to see his favorite and exclaims! "Aloo k parathe!!" Yummy, love you sis! I'm dying to have home made food come on lets proceed who are we waiting for?? No one I guess! so let me start and Ada smiled at this.

While eating Sam tells them about Mumbai, his job the amount of fun he, Gaurav and Zaid have together and his colleague Zoya whom he cannot stand, both Ada and granny have a hearty laugh at this as they can't digest the fact that there is at least one sensible girl who is not mad to chase Sameer and Sameer is annoyed as they are all praises for her and Sameer is shell-shocked. The day passes and slumber takes over.

Next morning Ada wakes up as usual and is busy doing her chores when she realizes that she had not been to her cake shop cum caf from the last two days and Muskaan is handling the shop all by herself, so she decides to go today. Later everyone has breakfast, and Ada leaves for her cake shop when sam offers to drop her on the way to meeting his buddy Gaurav who was here a week back. On the way, the duo talk about several things finally they arrived to the "Blueberry Cake Shop". Muskaan was astonished to see them and hugged both of them and started chattering to both of them, later sam had a brownie and left. Ada and Muskaan got busy with their customers and entertaining them. Muskaan filled Ada with the latest gossip that circulated in the town. Muskaan and Ada had been friends right from childhood and even close cousins. The trio was famous in the town Muskaan, Preet and Ada "The Three Inseparable Souls". Soon they started discussing Preet's wedding and how little time was left, they had to do shopping, buy cosmetics, select the wedding card, decide the venue and so much more. They were really going to have a tight schedule but, "When Muskaan is there no worries are there," exclaimed! Muskaan.
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hmm....well this is my first chap hope u guys like it....hope i get honest reviews... thnx !!
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