A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26 - Page 10

oh .... zaid has a disheartening past .... love should always be expressed ... never hide your feelings ... it's beautiful ... totally loved it ..... do update soon ...

loved it dear
plz do pm me too

awesome update

oh dear the pain zaid must be going thru seeing his mother was horrible....

wow awesome update! i hope he realizes what ada i going through............thanks for the pm!

~Naina

haey sis.

I was hell shocked wen i started to read the update i was thinking shayad fatima ne leap le li hogi ar jab thoda age chali gayi toh eh ehsaas hua ke shayad ye ada ya zaid ka past hoga..aur yeh zaid ka past tha..it was soo painfull

Apne past ki wajah se zaid pyaar mein believe nahi karta...par zaid ko yeh samajhna chaiye tha ke har maazi dohraya nahi jata..i hope uski samajh mein yeh baat ajaye n hope ke woh apne pyaar ka izhaar karde...

Im sad that k this ff is ending...but im sure u wil start a new one..inshallah.

P.s:fatima aapne apna username badal diya shabnoor..,bahut khub hun...waise bhi aap raat ki rani hai.😉..isiliye it completely suits for u...😊..

Love
summi

u asked if i would read... arey... i read it already.... u changed ur username so i thot i don't know what ff u talking abt.... tu to meri fatima hai 😊

i did read it when u sent pm... its nice one... i wish zaid realizes that not everyone is here to hurt.... i wish he understands ada soon.... 3 days.... hmm... but i wish it happens sooner 😊

love u yaar... sorry for short comment but i really liked it... as i said earlier.... poat t in mayur version soon.. it will rock... mwaah *hug*

Heya dear readers.....

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

LoVely Update!
So thts the deep down emotion...m surprised...i mean because of a miserble past a grown up man doesnt believe in love....and thought it was pure lust.
There are always a handful of ppl in the crowd who r as such...but tht doesnt mean if u have had the misfortune to meet those few, the others r lyk tht as well...Zaid needs to think straight...he's a grown up man now..i guess his irrational thought comes from grief, and these incidents, did her mother die?

Well i hope he keeps his thoughts away and for once understand ada's love.

3 days....3 days or moreso as u say.....but even a second can reunite them forever....m counting on each😊

It was a beautiful update..i loved ur narration...!👏
Do cont soon..!
Thanks for the PM

Lots of luv
ZeeJay🤗

hey thnx fr d comment zeejay,

yeah actually tht is d very reason y zaid ran away frm
ada n his emotions...but one can't run away ryt all the tym...
you hv to face it smtymes or d other.....

yep ur also ryt being a grown up man...he shld let go of d past...
but what if u can't just let go...it happens often dsn't it ???

hmm....ur on d ryt track dear....
3 days....
n 3 updates n my ff will be over.... 😭
but life goes on ain't it ?? 😊

thnx fr liking the way i narrated...i felt i cld express it more deeply n passionately
but i just cldn't do more justice thn this..... 😊

yep i'll ryt soon.....

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

fatima amazing update lov

</div>rocking 1 keep updating plz
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n thnx 4 d pm

hey thnx samira dear,

im glad u loved it !! 😊

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: sonam961986

oh .... zaid has a disheartening past .... love should always be expressed ... never hide your feelings ... it's beautiful ... totally loved it ..... do update soon ...

hey sonam di,

yeah zaid does have a very disheartening past....
but wat if u feel history repeats itself.....then it's betr to hide urself n feelings...
im sayn this in zaid's pov....

awwe u loved it ...im elated di 😊

yep i'll write soon ....

take care,
fatima