A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26 - Page 11

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

loved it dear
plz do pm me too

hey

sure sanjana dear i'll pm u d next part....
thnx fr readng it 😊

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: ShelDev

awesome update

</div>oh dear the pain zaid must be going thru seeing his mother was horrible....
<div>i hope he realizes soon that ada is in love too...

pls continue soon

thanks

heya hie,

thnx a lot shel fr d comment !!

yeah zaid has been thro' a lot and tht too at such a age
where ppl enjoy life carefree....hez seen and been thro' thngs tht were nt ryt
at his tender age....n thy affected him deeply !!

evn i hope he realizes ada's love soon...😉

yep i'll continue soon ...

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: naina.patel

wow awesome update! i hope he realizes what ada i going through............thanks for the pm!

~Naina

hey naina,

yeah he'll realize soon...wht ada is goin thro'

thnx fr liking d update 😊

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: maloo19

wonderful ff

hey thnx fr d compliment dear😊

take care,
fatima

Hi fatima ur FF is amazing i loved it plz add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: kulsumd

haey sis.

I was hell shocked wen i started to read the update i was thinking shayad fatima ne leap le li hogi ar jab thoda age chali gayi toh eh ehsaas hua ke shayad ye ada ya zaid ka past hoga..aur yeh zaid ka past tha..it was soo painfull

Apne past ki wajah se zaid pyaar mein believe nahi karta...par zaid ko yeh samajhna chaiye tha ke har maazi dohraya nahi jata..i hope uski samajh mein yeh baat ajaye n hope ke woh apne pyaar ka izhaar karde...

Im sad that k this ff is ending...but im sure u wil start a new one..inshallah.

P.s:fatima aapne apna username badal diya shabnoor..,bahut khub hun...waise bhi aap raat ki rani hai.😉..isiliye it completely suits for u...😊..

Love
summi

hey summi,

awwe u were shocked..??...aare tumhe pehle thode hints toh diye the
hume laga tumhe idea hoga... 😉
kya leap ??? nah i dnt believe in leaps generally in between the story...
it spoils d plot....

hmm yeah sahi kaha...zaid indeed had a painful past....pehle hi kaha tha....its nt dreadful
but pretensious and painful....
yeah evn i feel he understnds n accepts reality....soon 😊 but smtymes it does take alot of tym...
like in zaid's case....

he has ada if he realizes it but some dnt even have tht kind of support....

yeah this ff is ending... 😭 ....i have a story in mind....
but it'll take long to materialize i guess.... 😳

P.S: yeah finally a new fatima does thngs her way ain't it 😉
and yeah it actually means 'Light in d darkness' 😊 ....see my pic also reflects d same !!
if u've noticed dear .... 😉

take care,
fatima

juz now went through all the parts......its such a beautiful story....ur writing pattern is fab....am completely in love with this ff..awesome..simply no words...love it

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

Hi fatima ur FF is amazing i loved it plz add me to ur pm list

thnx fr reading it and liking it 😊
sure dear....i'll add you
but may i know ur name ??

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: achoose

juz now went through all the parts......its such a beautiful story....ur writing pattern is fab....am completely in love with this ff..awesome..simply no words...love it

hey thnx a lot dear... 😊

im rendered speechless by the comment ..!!..
well may i knw ur name ??

take care,
fatima

aww this
was awesome part
loved it to the core....
thnx for the pm