Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#451

Beautiful as always.

Unexpected back story, totally makes sense.

Growth in relationship nicely woven.

Love this story, you give it new twists.

Thanks for the pm

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#452

Hey Zoya!

Fabulous update!

I really fall for Sumo a bit more every time 😳

She is love ❤️

Shravan is not feeling well😔

Thankfully it's just a infection this time.

He needs to recover soon.

If not for others but atleast for my sanity now 😒

Eustace!❤️

His and Sumo's conversation!❤️

I suddenly hate Ramu and Nirmala more 🤢

As if that was even possible 🥱

But yes I do... poor Shravan!

He jumped in a freezing lake.. due to his insecurities😭

Aisi bhi kya testing 😭

Kitna pareshan karenge sab log usko🥱

Thankfully Eustace saved him!

Cherishing a scar of that incident.. this speaks a lot in it self.

I feel for you Shravan 🥺

Their conversation 😳

I am really glad to see this gradual progress in their relationship 😳

Hoping it stays the way.. and goes even stronger 😃

They both found home in each other!

Truly soulmates 😳

Why do I have a feeling... sadist is lurking around 🤔

Have some mercy on them and specially on me😭

Already Sumo ki Delhi return ki talwar latki hui h.

Ab aur kuch nai please 😳🥱

Loved reading it!

Beautiful one!

Apoorva

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#453

Thanks a bunch, Apu and wormy!

Means a lot that you girls still comment here!

🤗

Detailed replies later, I had a quick question for the folks still reading Alfaaz here.

Do you'll want it updated here? Or would be cool reading it on Wattpad?

Whatever you'll say, I'm only asking cause I see a handful here and if you all are on Wattpad, it would save me some time updating in one place 😆

If it's comfortable here and not on Wattpad, say it, it will be updated here too.

Cheers!

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#454

Wow! What a lovely morning 🤔😆

To answer your question... it's your story ...so it's your call!

I totally understand why you are saying this!

As for me you will find me where ever you go ... and take my Shraman 😆

I will come and read it there... vote... comment I won't promise... I am sorry... as there are many stories that I read there .. and it will be wrong on my part to just comment on few... and not all.

It's my love for Shraman that takes me there... but it's my love for this place and you guys that keeps me here ..I chose latter long ago..😳

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: akrocks77
Wow! What a lovely morning 🤔😆

To answer your question... it's your story ...so it's your call!
I totally understand why you are saying this!

As for me you will find me where ever you go ... and take my Shraman 😆
I will come and read it there... vote... comment I won't promise... I am sorry... as there are many stories that I read there .. and it will be wrong on my part to just comment on few... and not all.

It's my love for Shraman that takes me there... but it's my love for this place and you guys that keeps me here ..I chose latter long ago..😳

Well, if I'm going to miss out on your comments if I only update there, it's not a gamble I'm willing to take. I wait for your comments dude, and if that means I need to keep updating here, then so be it.