Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 51

Hello!

I am here... this time on time haan! Atleast I tried IF ate my comment twice. This new layout and update of their's, it is beyond me honestly. 🤔😵

Coming to chapter It's beautiful, mesmerized I am. I love it so so much. All of it is so overwhelming and heartwarming like I have literally cried a bucket and it feels good. They have grown up so much... them.😳

#KhushiKeAansoon😳😆

These two have come such a long way, I don't know about Amanda but I surely feel like a proud and happy mother. 😆

First things first, The diary entry is back... I am so happy. It's everything I hoped it would be and so much more ...thank you so much for this one. It's my most favourite entry of all.

Shravan's suicide, I feel so sad every time I read or think about it. He must have been so gloomy and aloof to even consider something remotely close to this. He has been through a lot. My boy!💔

Kismet indeed! My Imperfectly perfect Shraman!😳

Our imperfections make us who we are indeed. Scars make us whole. These two have grown up so much.👏

"I am with you for as long as forever lasts."❤️

"Yours and yours only" My heart!❤️

Shraman ki Shaadi... finally

Birthday festivities and Shaadi saath saath... 30 year old with white hairs peeking out... and here I thought he is just 25😆

In her childhood home, what more could we have asked for. We have a groomzilla and Chef bride😆

"Always a master of details and my heart."❤️

Sneaky Shravan! I like it! Naam raushan karega ye malhotras kaa😆

Understanding Shravan, Lover boy Shravan, Sneaky Shravan, Grumpy Shravan.... I think I am in love with him much more than ever.

I adore this grumpy Shravan so much though, he is so cute, muttering about all his tortures... kitne gam hai isse, I literally laughed so hard... as I imagined Namik saying all that with that sad pout and grumpy voice... and trust me it's funny. 😆

Sumo shaadi ke baad gadde uthaegi🤣

Ye ladka matlab... kuch bhi😆

Ye preeti kitni samajhdaar hai.. kaya palat. Btw aapne Pushkar ko koi aur de diya ab preeti ka bhi toh kuch karo😆

And all those plans involving preeti... kya matlab...Is he high or what!? Mast Pagla gaya hai ye😆

The wedding day bhi aa gaya... aap ye story leke udd rahe🤔

White Sherwani and powder blue lehanga though...

Those details here and there and that overall feeling of finally being there... getting married. All That nervousness. Eric and Shravan being adorable as always.😆

Shravan is literally the star of this chapter. He just steals the show. Tragedy mien comedy types humour hai iska. "Stop what? My heart?"... kuch bhi matlab😆

Panick attack, heart attack, cardiac arrest... Sab ek saath ho gaya matlab🤣

Shraman ki Shaadi!❤️Man and wife ... series ki yaad dila di😳

An eternity indeed! Love you both!❤️

I love it so so much! #3, I now say bring it on! Alfaaz!❤️

I will miss you though!😳

Do continue soon.

Apoorva

Apu 🤗

I was really looking forward to your comment and you didn't disappoint!

Such a heart-touching one!!

Shukriya hai aapka ❤️

Originally posted by: orion23

Apu 🤗

I was really looking forward to your comment and you didn't disappoint!

Such a heart-touching one!!

Shukriya hai aapka ❤️

The chapter touched mine😳

My Pleasure always!❤️

Alfaaz!

🤗

Hello!

Here I am as promised 😳

As I have told you already this one went from heartwarming to heartbreaking pretty fast.

I was honestly like this got dark pretty damn fast😆

Anyways let's take it from the start ... Shravan can just take my heart and keep it. He is the most precious thing quite literally and I agree with Sumo sometimes look at him with same awe as she does.

I am honestly left staring at the screen with a stupid goofy smile, that makes me look demented. (Not my words.. aaj yahi sunne mila hai😆)

When he said I am coming back home, but this is home too... my heart honestly soared in so much joy. From that scared and boy who thought he belonged nowhere and with no one. He surely has come a long way.

It is one thing to have love of so many people or to be loved so much but to be able to recognize and openly accept it is a huge thing coming for him.

Nothing could be better than him knowing and acknowledging this. Shravan!❤️

He is finally healed. My boy!😃❤️

Pushkar moving to London for Kaira is so sweet! But like Shravan said do take care of his baby okay😛

Although Shravan still being worried about his health worsening is actually ironic as he is worried about something happening to him when at the end it's Sumo whose health worsens.💔

You honestly had me worried about Shravan's health through most of the update despite the fact that there were clear mentions of her being unwell. I really didn't see this coming. 🤓

And all through out the last part my reaction was like my Sumo😭😭.. Shravan was no where in my mind in that moment. All I cared about was Sumo, Shravan's wife who!?😆

As you already know your Sumo is my absolute favorite so initially I was honestly like ab Jung hogi.. but then I am like why poke the bear(read.. sadist) further. 😛😉

So meri Sumo pe rehem khaana... like you said for our collective sanities... please haan thoda sa rehem.😆

And you just had to leave it at a cliffhanger

Just two remaining... okay this seems much more harder than I thought.

I will miss you Alfaaz! ❤️

Eagerly waiting for the next one.

At this point, you can hold on to the last one for an eternity, if you want but next de do... ek Sumo ke vaaste... kidding take your time😳😆

Apoorva

Hello!

Alfaaz update within nine days time, I was so happy and surprised but then I started reading and after some time my heart went like nahiiiii😭

I have honestly read it like a few paras at a time, after a few paras only my heart would go like bass ab aur nahi... but the curious brain kept me going.

Himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi... my poor poor Sumo 😭

And most importantly my Shravan 😒

Haven't he gone through enough already ...!?

And throughout the update, ek ek kar ke reports aa rahi hai... kabhi cancer kabhi kuch, and my heartbeat kept going up down along with theirs. 🤔

I have said this before, I will say it again next heart attack mera hi hai Shravan ke baad 😵😆

Khair from the start... Shravan's helplessness and his worry for her is so well put. My boy was so heartbroken and mine broke with him.💔

Them being strong for the sake of the other one!❤️

The moment cancer entered the chat ... me be like 🤬Phew! That was a bullet well dodged though. 😆

Him hugging her and clinging to her in the hospital bed is so endearing yet sad. They are so made for each other. Shraman! 😍

Shravan has been such a sweetheart throughout the update, how well he handled it all and stayed strong for her sake. His meltdown at the end proves how much he was hurting inside. That whole scenario is so beautifully written.❤️

Her Doctor sounds classy and articulate, she is both affectionate and poise. I like her.

You know there is something about Alfaaz or may be it's just you but every time I am reading about one of them worrying about their own health, I am somehow more worried about the other one.

During Shravan's heart attack thing also, I was a little bit more worried about Sumo being there with him for a long time.

And when he thought his ill health will jeopardize their relationship in some way then also I used be like think about her emotions too naa.

Here also I was feeling so sad and worried about Shravan may be a little bit more than i was about Sumo 🤓😋 I think I have lost my mind 😆

She is right he wouldn't survive it easy. Shravan!🥺

Ever since the last update and knowing about her desire of becoming a mother, I had this lingering feeling that what ever this is it might come in the way of her this desire in some way. I really hope she is okay.

And hoping for another version of Samar and Samairah😳❤️

The first and last paragraph though! ❤️ Like i told you❤️

This one was one rollercoaster ride of emotions, mine were literally all over the place. 😳

Second last.. last one remains... this is getting hard! Awaiting the last one!

But still I would say take your time with this one...😆

Alfaaz Forever!❤️

Apoorva

Hello!

Here I am as promised.

Let's take a moment first... last one😭

I am on my emotional high point right now.🤧

First things first.. that first paragraph is just so heart touching.

That first scene of them snuggling in bed is so beautifully written. It's just so fluffy and heartwarming.

Sumo is okay and pregnant.

And Ohh! Shravan, you just take my heart and keep it. You are precious and perfect.

Suman's internal monologue describing the past year and it's hardships is so articulate and still Heart felt. They truly are each others strength.

She is right, he is her rock! Shravan!❤️

Everyone helping her through the pregnancy is so adorable. Malhotras!😃

They have a baby girl. Hayat sounds beautiful and it's meaning too is. She indeed is their life. Adorable little munchkin!😳

Push up scene, all that teasing and blushing. Happy tears! They truly deserve all this happiness.

He truly is a superhero hayat. That makes all the daughters though I feel. 😆

"Where are Shravan and Suman?"

"Lost in each other."☺️

There goes my heart!❤️

Shravan crying because Hayat is leaving for london is just so adorably cute. He keeps my heart all gooey and melted. Precious he is!❤️

Hayat hoping and wanting something like them for herself and aiming to become a lawyer is again so heartfelt. 🤗

This update was just so perfect. I don't even know how describe it's perfection. It is everything I could have hoped for it to be and more. 😳

This one was the happiest one for me, after the Sumo's proposal one.😃

Though I honestly wanted to hold on to not this one for as long as I could cause in my head it was like you don't read it, it doesn't end. But I was just too curious to know about Sumo's condition and how this ends.😆😳

This was a tough decision. For days I contemplated whether to read the next one immediately or just hold onto it.😆

And halfway through the chapter I was like you two perfect little things please don't go, just don't end. It was an overwhelming update. I cried through it all too. 😳

Although You just had to cover it all in one update, I was hoping for a Epilogue sort of a thing. Wishful thinking I know! 😕🥺

This really was harder than I had imagined. It's been so long still feels like yesterday.

One last time, I will miss you Alfaaz! Nothing lasts forever indeed!

Alvida Alfaaz! ❤️

Although someone once said Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna.. but still here I am.😋😆

Ruhaaniyat sounds intriguing.

Waiting for whatever it is that comes next.

Apoorva

Apu, I'll reply to your comments later but I loved it <3

Originally posted by: orion23

Apu, I'll reply to your comments later but I loved it <3

It's okay! Take your time!😳

❤️