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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 6 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: Nik03
Knock Knock!
Hey Alfaaz ❤️
Missed my Reses?
I know.

Hahaha yeah yeah..

Filhaal you are way more gayab than your reses..

I've left messages, if you see this before those, please respond!

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Harshi Arora

@Harshi_ta

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Posted: 6 years ago

#472

Amazing, well I know Shravan was not upset reveling truth and ramnath and Nirmala I really hope they guys will back bcz it may time but shrvan will get his mother love which he were missing, obviously after coming back of Nirmala still it take time to get to used to it for sharavn but it will

Mad sharavn confession is as always best in your story

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

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Posted: 6 years ago

#473

Hey Zoya!

Mesmerizing Update!

It's so lovely 😳

I loved it so so much... 😃

But it just felt a bit short.

Or may be I was just so lost in it😕😆

That scene between Shravan and Eustace ❤️

I somehow had an inkling that it would go like this... I felt he wouldn't be mad at him.

Glad it came out this way!

A son like Shravan!⭐️

Regarding Nirmala and Ramnath... I believe they both deserved a second chance in this story.

I am happy things are finally falling in place for them.

And this coming from Shravan in someway... adds more meaning to it.

I generally say I love your Sumo.. but today Shravan took my heart😳

He has heart of gold truly... there can be no one like him❤️

Not many could do what he did!

Shraman scene.. ❤️

And D makes a comeback.. not the famous D though 🤣

These two are love😳

I agree with Sumo... actually hearing about it from the man himself feels different.

The thought of him doing something like this still gives me goosebumps.

Though he is just a character... but still I feel scared for him.. what if Eustace reached a bit late.. I know stupid me😆

And now a very important issue...😉😆

I know Braemar trip is ending.. but still why going back so soon.

She could just stay in London ... May be for a week..?😳

Or a month?😉

Or a year?🤣

Sochna... jaroor Haan... please 😆

I loved it so much 😃

And best part was no Aditya... phew!😆

Enjoyed reading it!

Do continue soon 😳

Apoorva

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orion23

@orion23

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+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#474

Thank you Harshi and Apu!!

Detailed reply will follow later, but hugs 🤗

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#475

Keeping this alive, in case it gets shut.

Hopefully, I'll get back to this soon...

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#476

Hey Zoya!

It's Good to have Alfaaz back 😳

That's an interesting update!

Sumo has really grown so much.. from a girl hoping for forgiveness of her best friend.. to someone who is now flourishing entrepreneur.

She has achieved so much.. and also love of her laugh.

Proud of the girl!⭐️

Eric.. Amanda ki Shaadi 😳

Mr. Wingman Malhotra is all set for Braemar again😆

Isko Scotland ki citizenship de dete hai ..😆

Damn! that phone conversation ☺️

Too direct ☺️

But weren't they gonna wait till marraige?

I don't mind though ..😆

And I am sure Shraman most definitely don't 🤣

I really like this bond between Sumo and Pushkar.. I wish they explored it a bit more on the show.

Nirmala back in MM.. interesting.. I am really happy for Shravan... finally he found his peace and happiness.. 😃

And again Aditya.. no comments 🥱

I am trying to ignore him.. thanking Shravan in graduation speech won't melt my heart. ..samjhe Aditya 😛

You will have to work more hard Adi😆

I feel for Vandy Bhabhi.. poor victim of pregnancy harmones... bloated balloon 😆

Also Bichara Pushkar 😆

He is hoping for someone like Sumo and then he will settle for Preeti 🤣

That's real Kuch bhi Aiwien 😆

Finally bade ho gaye hai Shraman ..Ready to be married 😃

Shraman ki Shaadi 😳

But why does it feel so short 🥱

Also More than 3 years ka leap🤔

No good bye for them even!

I Could do With Some airport Romance😳

Janta maaf nahi karegi.. 😆

Mujhe flashbacks mien bhi chalega wo time... baaki aap soch lo 😉

And less than 50 chapters 😒

Ek update mien itne shock

Khair! It's your call ...I know they will be worthed!

But Please Let It be 50 If Possible 😳

Enjoyed reading it!

Do continue soon

Apoorva

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 6 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: akrocks77
Hey Zoya!
Hey Apu!
It's Good to have Alfaaz back 😳
Hehe shukriya
That's an interesting update!
Glad you think so...

Sumo has really grown so much.. from a girl hoping for forgiveness of her best friend.. to someone who is now flourishing entrepreneur.
She has achieved so much.. and also love of her laugh.
She was a fierce girl, caricatured on the show.. Needed to undo that 😳

Proud of the girl!⭐️
Me too!

Eric.. Amanda ki Shaadi 😳
Mr. Wingman Malhotra is all set for Braemar again😆
Isko Scotland ki citizenship de dete hai ..😆
Hahahaha Actually na?

Damn! that phone conversation ☺️
Too direct ☺️
But weren't they gonna wait till marraige?
Listen, there were insinuations. Who said they ever crossed a line? Kuch bhi!
I don't mind though ..😆
And I am sure Shraman most definitely don't 🤣
Oh no they do!

I really like this bond between Sumo and Pushkar.. I wish they explored it a bit more on the show.
I agree yaar...
Nirmala back in MM.. interesting.. I am really happy for Shravan... finally he found his peace and happiness.. 😃
Hehe yeah I didn't want to spend more time on the details, she's back and things are good!

And again Aditya.. no comments 🥱
I am trying to ignore him.. thanking Shravan in graduation speech won't melt my heart. ..samjhe Aditya 😛
You will have to work more hard Adi😆
Hahaha bechara jaan bhi de dega toh tum log maaf nahi karne wale.. Tch

I feel for Vandy Bhabhi.. poor victim of pregnancy harmones... bloated balloon 😆
I love that girl!

Also Bichara Pushkar 😆
He is hoping for someone like Sumo and then he will settle for Preeti 🤣
Helloo? This is my story, 🤪not the show..
That's real Kuch bhi Aiwien 😆

Finally bade ho gaye hai Shraman ..Ready to be married 😃
Shraman ki Shaadi 😳
Yesh... I'm tired of writing their wedding, so it will be a different take :p

But why does it feel so short 🥱
Cause that's all the time I had and besides, a lot happened in here even if it was short :p
Also More than 3 years ka leap🤔
Yup, I didn't want Alfaaz to stretch like chewing gum with unnecessary scenarios 🥱
No good bye for them even!
Nope!
I Could do With Some airport Romance😳
Hehehe ah well, I did suggest it's been 3 years and they hadn't met in 10 months, clearly kuch toh hua hi hai na in the time elapsed ...

Janta maaf nahi karegi.. 😆
Aadat daal lo, ab aaise hi chalega for the most part 😆
Mujhe flashbacks mien bhi chalega wo time... baaki aap soch lo 😉
Hahahaha dekhte hai...

And less than 50 chapters 😒
I think their story has pretty much been told. I could have added random twists, but why would I do that unless it affects the story positively...
Ek update mien itne shock
Hahahaha
Khair! It's your call ...I know they will be worthed!
Shukriya
But Please Let It be 50 If Possible 😳
I can't promise.. I cut down 5 chapters and made it one in this update anyway.. So, yeah 😆

Enjoyed reading it!
I'm glad 🤗
Do continue soon
Here's hoping 😃

Apoorva

@Bold Apu ❤️

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#478

Hello!

I have read it and loved it ... I will be here tonight pakka 😳

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Tarushi

@tarushiv

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#479

Loved it ❤️,as always

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#480

Hey Zoya!

And this story just got more beautiful ⭐️

I loved this one so much 😳

Braemar is back... could I ever be more happy 😃😆

This is becoming my most favourite place... if only this Doyle's mansion was real

Pre wedding celebrations for Eric and Amanda ... everything is just so perfect!

That modern days Swayamvar... with just one contender 😆

Although those details of the every game ..👏

Remarkable those details and descriptions.. I could really picture all that.⭐️

You have a magic trick for writing weddings!

They are so perfect!

I just can't wait for both the weddings 😳

He saved Shravan's life... endangering his 😲

I think now we are good... I kinda like him ... 😆

Though that fight or confrontation.. between them ... it really tells a lot about depth and complexity of their relationship... and couldn't have come out better ... ⭐️

Poor Pushkar and Varun though... nothing went too good for them 😆

Last scene between Shraman ... well I am all excited and intrigued to know what's going on there 😳😆

Although I think it's Preekar... trying to get romantic 😆

I love this chapter so much 😳

Braemar I love you more though!😆

Excited for the next!

Just 7 more chapters 🥺

Khair we will have to negotiate on number of Epilogues then... later 😉

Do continue soon!

Apoorva