Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad

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Hey everyone!


A disclaimer about this one, all the chapters on this thread have now been moved to Wattpad. In case you wish to read it, please find it on the link below:


Alfaaz

I would like to thank everyone on IF who supported this story. Your love means the world to me! I also apologize that I couldn't complete the story here, thanks to IF. The completed version if it interests you, is on the link above!


Cheers!


Zoya


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Hey there!

Thank you very much for the tremendous response to this series. Means a lot to me!

I never imagined I would be able to write a FF and that it would be loved so much!

I'm so glad Alfaaz has had such an effect

I would like to apologise at being such a slow updater, but I try my best, I promise!

As requested by you all, where ever I use difficult Urdu, I will be giving translations. I sure hope this FF can touch your hearts as much as my other works have. Without further ado, here's presenting "Alfaaz".

Alfaaz toh bohot the,

Magar woh lafz nahi..

Keh de jo dil ki zubaan,

Woh awaaz nahi...


GIF credit : Prii



INDEX:


Thread # 1



Ijaazat

Lihaaz

Qurbat

Taabiir

Musalsal

Sifar


Qayamat

Fanaa

Ilham

Shiddat


Moajaza


Aashnaa

Najaat

Qainaat

Ruhaniyat

Seher

Markaz

Safar

Raqs

Nazakat

Qahr

Ikhlaas

Firaaq

Afreen

Ikhtiyar

Fitoor

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Alfaaz...
Your first FF Zo!😃
The excitement and happiness...



You Posted it in Feb last year..and here we all are today!
Feb..I remember the month!
That day and today..some similar feels...maybe a coincidence?!
But a difference there!😃

The First Thread...Started with Ranjish and after a soulful journey gave Sukoon at the end.😳
And now you're here with its second Thread...Second Thread Zo!


Hearty Congratulations Bro!


Proud of you!
May you open many more Threads of Alfaaz!
Way to go Girl!

Love Ya🤗

Edited by Nik03 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res
****
Unres

Zealous si Zoya🤗
Remember me? Hehe!😛

I resed on 5th and unresing on 19th..😲
Ermm...



Sorry? No?
Ouch! *Kicked me?* Lagi mujhe ha! 😛

Sorry ya Zo..





Saw the cutest puppy face?
😛😆

Okii, no more Nautanki,
Coming straight to Upi...*Wah wah It rhymed*
Btw I already gave you running commentary..Fir bhi Not so Nikka unres to banta hai!😛

Ijaazat...Maang hi li aakhir..haaye re😳
Ek ne maangi dusre ne de di..Uff! Deni hi thi!

Ek number title as always bro!
Very well Justified!
I love the banner! ❤️

Shravan se nazrein hatao maamiji Pretty priti pe rakho.😆
Nanu is bae ya..I love how in every update there is always a Nanu special Part❤️

Mama-Maamiji's Love story🤣
Now mami sings, I hate Love stories!

Ah.. Sumo working in PCT and Pushkie's call..Yaadein!
Bol...Sumoness and jhalliness always intact there!
Chup kar Push-Kar! Okayyy 🤣
Kya rhyme kiya hai Sumo!
Aisi hi reh!

Kya hua hai bhaiya ko?..Questioned the right person. Smart Boy!
Lagta hai Preeti se Ishq waala Love hua nahi abhi thats why the intelligence!😛

Tu ne phir kuch de maara na uske sar pe.🤣
The oh so famous facepalm of Sumo!!

Sumo felt something was wrong too, and she had a brief idea as to what...Not only Sumo,I felt it too and had an inkling too...

Nahi, hoon as in jaag rahi hai or nahi hoon as in free nahi hai?...Bechara Pushkar😆
Batana mujhe msg pe kya ho raha hai.😳

Hamper of goodies..MM..To meet Shravan...Yaadein!
Guitar..Aye Haaye!

The sight and how
Naked Shravan..I mean half naked😆
Prominent vein of neck stand out...Oh 😳

The song...The voice..The lyrics..Just Love! ❤️
And how well it justified Shravan's feels here!!!!!

I so Love how with lyrics, You blended Sumo's Feelings, the questions popping up in her mind...Answers she knew deep within her heart but...ah that but!


Does he want me out? Of his veins? Of his soul? Of himself?...Ouch that hurts!
Though she knew its never gonna happen but the insecurities..This is Sumo!!

Let the sun light shine down his face...The lyrics and the actions, Beauty and just Beauty..Love!!

Sumo waited no more...Finally!!
Kahin to she did it!

The vulnerability in his eyes...
He always was vulnerable..And the silent one!
But as we see, Shravan khamosh tha par uski khamoshi bohot kuch kehti thi and Sumo...Wo bolti thi par fir bhi khamosh thi!!
Made sense?😕

The hug...no words no hesitation...just the need to feel closer to each other, to comfort each other...Closeness and level of comfort is increasing slowly!
So Loving this!

A hug and a variety of emotions!!!!
Beautifully penned down bro!
Love it!

She was not only his solace, his sukoon but she was also his sanctuary. One he knew would protect his feeble self but one he also feared for crushing his soul...This is you!!!!
I love it as always!
Thats Zo special!😳

If only...
Complete...
Sigh!!!!!!

His heart and mind tore him to an extent of disarray...Ah the feeling!💔

The movement of her supple lips against his firm collar bone caused a jolt to run through him. You're in my veins and I cannot get you out....Wow and just Wow!!!!!
That sudden impact is there..you know!

Broke the hug but still in contact..comfortably and happily
Upset pout..Aww man!

Was it surprise that I care? Or was it a sense of calm that overwhelmed him?...
Your Sumo is Love Zo! Bas!

He would share his life with her but almost never his sorrows...This one..
Painfully beautiful!

The swing..
The hesitation, fear, nervousness and then the relief...Sumo's reactions...I felt it all!
Thats how your writing leaves an impact!

The silent apology..
I only returned cause I wanted to see you, to meet you, to be with you. I have missed you so much. I .. I needed you Sumo...The raw confession in there!
Love Love Love!!
❤️

The dampness made him aware..Stay that way Shravan no one would mind. Not Sumo, not us!😳

Chala jaaon? Ijaazat hai?
Jaa kar wapas aane ki ijaazat zaroor hai tumko!...O Man!
So so so Love it ya!
He needed it , to make a name for himself , to make his loved ones proud!
He needed it and Sumo understood and supported him...Or kya chahiye!😃
The Chup! and It'll be okay...The ShraMan feels!

He had his permission to come back to her and she had his promise of return...Sums up Bas!! ❤️

Is this love?...Kya yaad dila diya ya! Sigh!
Chashmish and now Sumo!
Uff Zo!

Drooling over the handsome hunk!
Sumo faayada utha rahi hai mauke ka😆
Its the hormones...Zo! 🤣

Kumbhkaran ko sone do na yaar😳
The pair of eyes...I knew its Pushkie pie.. Chachiii dekhne laayak nazara for you Chachii come here🤣
Ahem Ahem...This scene would definitely help him one day..😳

Nange jaise so rahe ho..Shit😆
Perfect Timing Pushkie!!
Kya time pe entry maari hai😳
Sochne ki nahi samjhne ki baat hai...suna suna sa hai😆

Ma ko bula Pushkie...Shaq door hona maangta hai!!
Naak unchi ho jaayegi Khandaan ki...Right Chachi? 😆

Kisi ko koi prob nahi hogi..Agreed Pushkar!
The happiest one will be Chachi and Ramu Kaka for a change will be happy too, no saas waala role na!😛

You cant just leave..Pushkar-Shravan are Love ya!
The three of them sat on the swing, elbows on their thighs and face in their respective palms brainstorming as to how they would best this beast of a problem...Three idiots bro!!😆
Thats what came to my mind first!

Hearts may be heavy, but this was what Shravan wanted and Suman and Pushkar would stop at nothing when it came to him...Reading something like this is ❤️
I so Love it ya!
The Love and Bond these three shares is something else!
Jaans of the show!

Now it'll be interesting to read Ramu Kaka ki Ijaazat Mission with our own three Idiots!😳

Sukoon bhari and Pyaar Puran Update!!😃
Love it and Love you more🤗
Signing off as Nikka sa Nik after a long time!
❤️


P.S. There might be mistakes, ignore plz as I am too lazy to go n read it as its too long. Kaise read karte ho ya?
P.S.S. Take your time in next update bro tab tak I'll Unres on Series too
P.S.S.S. I commented in my crazy self as you know so I dont know whats in there!
P.S.S.S.S. Jaa rahi hu



Edited by Nik03 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello zoya...

First of all congratulations for the new thread..!!!🥳

May u make many more threads for ALFAAZ...



apologies if this part is not as good as you may have expected

This was way better.. but on second thoughts I had never imagined u would surprise us with something like this



"Chup kar Push-kar!" She rhymed it,

N I was rhyming with her...hehe


Walking down the garden with a hamper of goodies in her hand

This reminded me of their day spent together when he had that broken leg... she entered with goodies basket n rushed dropping everything to him


Shravan sat on the low wall, each leg hanging on either side. Hair ruffled, a few strands romancing with his face. The sun against him, casting a wonderful colour on his bronzed skin.. A pair of jeans hung low on his waist, his feet bare. As he strummed the guitar, the muscles of his back moved gloriously.

*completely whipped *

*officially dead*


She would have passed it off as concentration but she knew him and something most definitely bothered him

Best friends know u.. n it shows!!!!


She wanted to rush right into his arms and tell him it would be okay, wipe those creases off his forehead and make him believe whatever bothered him would sort itself out.

This is ur sumo... n she is love!!!!


Getting up, towering above her, he straightened himself and without another lateral thought pulled her into himself.

Haq se... our hero


Suman felt she could die of the emotions that coursed through her veins.

Incandescent flow of emotions. .. too hard to handle...!!


One he knew would protect his feeble self but one he also feared for crushing his soul. He couldn't help himself.

This is what u excel at.. portraying two contradictory emotions together...


He didn't know what to do anymore, his heart and mind tore him to an extent of disarray.

Poor soul... this is what happens when we are at loggerheads with our inner selves...!


How long do you intend to keep fighting all your demons by yourself?"

Everyone needs to have a confidant...

not all demons can b fought with alone!!!

N she wants to b just that😊


He gazed at her face which seemed to have lost the stress it showed earlier and now held hurt.

He can sooo see through her...


Eyes downcast he let himself slip at her feet as if offering a silent apology for having hurt her

This person is love... such heartfelt apology...!!!


I have missed you so much. I .. I needed you Sumo.

Such bold declaration. . Ab I love u ki kya jaarorat hai... I feel.. I need u has way more impact than i love u...

N in their case just one I MISSED YOU would have solved all their misunderstandings long back in the show😭


She cares too much to show her pain and dampen my resolve, she wants me to be happy

They do know each other like the back of their hand...👏😛😛


Chala jaaon? Ijaazat hai?"

Feeble n vulnerable. .. this is Shravan at his true self...but only in front of sumo...love!!!


He nodded his head and gently placed it on her lap. Taking her cue she ran her fingers through his gorgeous locks

Nostalgic. ... BURDEN OF GUILT ki yaad aa gayi.. hmm feels😛😛


He needed his calm and rest before he could take on the world.

Bang on...!!!!!👏👏


He felt like home

She is his home...❤️


The person knew exactly how this scene would help him later, he smiled for he knew this was waiting to happen. His brother and his best friend surely had something brewing for else what would explain what he saw.

Our very own cupid... but i don't think they will need him here... 😆😆


The three of them sat on the swing, elbows on their thighs and face in their respective palms brainstorming as to how they would best this beast of a problem.

This reminded me of three idiots.. I don't know why. ..!!!


Shravan wants to return! Shocked?

Not really to be very honest. .. I was kinda expecting this since NOOR...


How did you find it? Random? Not so random

Not at all random... but awesome as always


What do you think of a shirtless Shravan, for nearly the whole update ;)

Since I m officially dead after literally SEEING him like that... ab I m not left with more words...*sighs dramatically *


What do you think about ShraMan's growing closeness?

Well for emotional closeness.. they are bonding really well.. I would love to see how they both progress from here...

N for physical closeness... remember I m dead already... that slightly peppered hair on his bare chest *sighs dramatically again*


How will the trio convince Ramnath? Would they even be able to?

I think they will b able to convince him ... par kaise.. hmm.. for that u need to update asap

...he he he. ...!!!


So finally after these long rants I would love to conclude with...

This was again amazing... Evil mamiji n her love story was funny. ..

Sumo monologues while listening to Shravan's singing were her heartbeats... she knows him so so well..

The song that u have used went way too perfectly with the entire write up... kinda depicted Shravan state of mind like a pro...


That hug... Feels manh...!!!😳😳

Their mutual understanding is on next level... no need to say or explain anything...👏


Ijaazat mangi aur Mil bhi gayi. ... happy Shravan. ..🤗


Pushkar is as usual so cute. .. hopefully he will put himself to some good use here...!!!


So again waiting for your next update palke bichaye... but don't rush... update when u can...

Zoya u r love... please always remain the person u r...

Dil se duao k saath sighing off..🤗

Swati

Edited by swatiagarwal89 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@Nik Why would you need two reses?


@Swati You missed it 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

@Nik Why would you need two reses?

Bas aise hi😛

@Swati You missed it 😆
Ahem Ahem😎

@Bold
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ijaazat ho to. ..😳

⭐️
Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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You're crazy!
Go read!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

You're crazy!
Go read!

Koi shaq tha kya?
Karne to do😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Ijaazat ho to. ..😳

⭐️

O My Partner..Aapka Res dekha to Dil baag baag ho gaya😃
Tabby🤗
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