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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey Zoya!
I am so sorry... I am really late
I promise I will read it today only.
Very sorry!
Edited by akrocks77 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey Zoya!

Sorry again I was late... that too almost whole week 🥱

And Qahr... well I loved the update 😳
Loving all the shocks and underlying emotions!

As stupid as that may sound... but I am actually relieved Shravan missing thingy happened in the beginning and not at the end.. . It's good for peace of my mind 😆

Warna teaser scared me enough

Sumo running frantically towards the lake... not caring about anything ... I just fell in love with your Sumo more😳
That fear in her💔

Now Shravan knows that Sumo knows.. excited to see how this goes now from here for them and ofcourse for Eustace 😉😆

Why... Ohh why! Why Aditya!? 🥺
No matter how good he is shown... he still remains Aditya... duhh!

And more over why in Braemar ... that man just ruined a beautiful trip for me ...🤔
I was considering it there secret honeymoon till now... beech mien haddi aa gaye😒

Oh No Eric ... Not the Logs... 😒
Go For what's more Worthy to be cut 😉

I Love This Conversation 😃
Shravan and Eric ❤️

It's Good He Heard It ... I am Not at all feeling Sorry 😈
He So Deserves It😈
Jokes Apart ... It's Your Character ... So I will give him a fair Chance .

Aditya and Shravan hugging 🤔
Dissaproves🥱

Loved reading it 😳
Awesome update!
Do continue soon😳

Apoorva
Edited by akrocks77 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
That was amazing, sorry I forgot my username name that's why I login months back and both parts are amazing , well yes namik has a scare below his right eyes that connect here very well and this last one update its make me laughter too much frnds at like this really and I really love Eric and sharavn relationship here , really if they didn't have their girlfriends no one believe they both are straight overall it's amazing
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey zoya, apologies for the delayed response. Just got around to reading this.
It's amazing how you keep in going and keep us connected to characters who have to reel life anymore but are still part of us.

Enjoyed the update and appreciated the pm.

Sumo and shravan will need to trust each other...Get beyond the reactions impulses they showed in the past.
Shravan didn't wNt yo share more weaknesses with sumo I guess, but now she knows and reacted in a way. That shravan may feel that she does not trust him to stay alive fir them.
He is much stronger now, he has his suni and the entite family.

He has enough love in hum e to accept a step brother, what happened was no fault of Aditya ir shravan. They were kunda roadkill between the ego if Ram and Nirmala.

Doyle family us ever so loyal. Shravan is confident in their live fir him and that makes him so much free with them

Eric and shravan bromance is much fun.

Thank you for writing this super story. Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Alfaaz isn't shifting 🥳

Yippee 🥳


Thank you 😳

Hahaha you're super cute Apu 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey Zoya!

I am so sorry... I am really late
I promise I will read it today only.
Very sorry!

Oh come one, take all the time you need!
It's not like I'm updating everyday 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey Zoya!
Hey there!

Sorry again I was late... that too almost whole week 🥱
Uff, chup!
And Qahr... well I loved the update 😳
I'm glad you did😳
Loving all the shocks and underlying emotions!
Hahaha honestly, itne jhatke dene baad, I'm mildly lost as to how I should portray the rest 😆

As stupid as that may sound... but I am actually relieved Shravan missing thingy happened in the beginning and not at the end.. . It's good for peace of my mind 😆
LMAO! I'm not all that terrible a person 🤣

Warna teaser scared me enough
Haan, that way I'm terrible!

Sumo running frantically towards the lake... not caring about anything ... I just fell in love with your Sumo more😳
That fear in her💔
That fear would and should be in anyone that claims to love another.. Sumo is bae.

Now Shravan knows that Sumo knows.. excited to see how this goes now from here for them and ofcourse for Eustace 😉😆
Hahahaha I'm excited to see what my brain finally allows 😆
I have a plot, but because I'm dicey about it, I'm not writing yet 😳

Why... Ohh why! Why Aditya!? 🥺
No matter how good he is shown... he still remains Aditya... duhh!
That's what I wish to undo..
Ramnath is redeemed.. Niru almost...
Aditya ki baari ab😉

And more over why in Braemar ... that man just ruined a beautiful trip for me ...🤔
Ah, no.. Come on
I was considering it there secret honeymoon till now... beech mien haddi aa gaye😒
He be no haddi bae! Wait for it..
By the end, "I love your Aditya" nahi bola, toh mera naam badal dena! And mind you, I love my name 😉

Oh No Eric ... Not the Logs... 😒
Go For what's more Worthy to be cut 😉
Hahaha Niru's neck?

I Love This Conversation 😃
Shravan and Eric ❤️
Shukriyaaa

It's Good He Heard It ... I am Not at all feeling Sorry 😈
Arey bechara
He So Deserves It😈
Iss story mai uski koi galti nahi hai
Jokes Apart ... It's Your Character ... So I will give him a fair Chance .
Shukriya!

Aditya and Shravan hugging 🤔
Dissaproves🥱
I approve! It's like warring siblings finally giving in..
Might I be bold to say, a mild Thor-Loki equation there ..

Loved reading it 😳
Awesome update!
Thank you so much 😳
Do continue soon😳
Now that's one request I haven't been paying much heed to
Apoorva

@Bold 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

That was amazing, sorry I forgot my username name that's why I login months back and both parts are amazing ,

Thank you so much Harshi!!! 🤗
well yes namik has a scare below his right eyes that connect here very well I'm glad you felt so and this last one update its make me laughter too much frnds at like this really and I really love Eric and sharavn relationship here , really if they didn't have their girlfriends no one believe they both are straight overall it's amazing
Hahaha I know right 😆

Thank you so much 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Hey zoya, apologies for the delayed response. Just got around to reading this.

Good to see you 🤗
It's amazing how you keep in going and keep us connected to characters who have to reel life anymore but are still part of us.
I'm so glad you feel that hon...

Enjoyed the update and appreciated the pm.
You're very welcome 😳

Sumo and shravan will need to trust each other...Get beyond the reactions impulses they showed in the past.
Shravan didn't wNt yo share more weaknesses with sumo I guess No, that's not true.. He didn't wish to share it in Braemar... , but now she knows and reacted in a way. That shravan may feel that she does not trust him to stay alive fir them.
He never wanted to commit suicide.. And he loves his life..
He is much stronger now, he has his suni and the entite family.
That is true
He has enough love in hum e to accept a step brother, what happened was no fault of Aditya ir shravan. They were kunda roadkill between the ego if Ram and Nirmala . I agree things happened.. No one was truly wrong ..

Doyle family us ever so loyal. Shravan is confident in their live fir him and that makes him so much free with them
Doyles are bae!

Eric and shravan bromance is much fun.
Yeyyy

Thank you for writing this super story. Can't wait for next part
Thanks hon 😳

@Bold Thank you so much
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Posted: 6 years ago
Knock Knock!
Hey Alfaaz ❤️
Missed my Reses?
I know.

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