ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 37

Originally posted by: anumiklove

Very nice

Originally posted by: sujatha-4

amzing dear and beautiful penned.

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Sal..I have always held you in awe as writer, and today you have just accentuated my regards for you.

The praise goes right back to you, but also as a person.
It felt as if you were residing inside Shravan , as if it was being narrated by him. How else do you explain such picturesque description of what he was going through in every scene?

Never have I related to a character the way I relate to Shravan, that would explain certain things 😆

His dilemma, his agony, his anger, his contempt, his love. .every possible feeling of his was narrated with such accuracy that as a reader I felt like I was there with him, when he jogged, when he spoke to his dad, when he held her little finger, when he read those letters, when he gave her the parting forehead kiss.

The holding of the pinky fingers for me was symbolic as well. .that he was willing to take a small start towards their relationship but it was still a log way from holding the whole hand, a long way still from the ultimately fulfilling and simple relationship that she dreamt of with him.

I think it was also a way for him to acknowledge her efforts and that even though he didn't show it he cared more than she thought

Preeti and Pushkar entered the wedlock with no major expectations, like you walk into a theatre to watch a movie by a new director, you are willing to give him the benefit of doubt, you are willing to overlook his flaws in direction and even the onus of the end result is on you and not him..if you liked the movie, it was your brilliant decision to watch it and if you don't it was your silly mindless thought of giving the director a chance. Suman and Shravan on the other hand were bogged down by expectations. .Like a Karan Johar movie on poverty ...you never expect it..so you won't like it for sure.

Wow ! That was one hell of an analysis, there is a reason why I love reading your comment always leave me with a sense of satisfaction even when I think that it wasn't good enough.

The whole Tiwari killa scene was so heart touching, his discovery of the letters and his relief at knowing that she missed him as much .

This was not just a beautiful chapter Sal...it was phenomenal!!!

Like I said. ..you are awe worthy girl!

Originally posted by: priety.priti

Beautifully writtenroller coaster update👏

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

This is sooo beautiful...I m truly having tears in my eyes reading this chapter...sooo many emotions portrayed so welll...OMG...fanastic, overwhelmingly fabulous...plz look up for all positive adjectives in d dictionary in praise of this chapter

rgds
Anuradha 👏

Originally posted by: Nik03

I read what I wanted to n more importantly how I wanted to ...❤️
A part of my heart is at Peace now!!
I have my answers now!!😊

Thank you soo much Sal for this beyond beautiful upii ⭐️
For now take a 🤗🤗
Baaki ka comment baad mein...n I dont know ye baad mein kab aayega 😕
Sorry for that !!

Love you buddy !!