ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 39

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Posted: 8 years ago
This chapter was made of moments. ..Shravan basking under the new found knowledge of Suman's love, Nirmala anxiously waiting to seek his go ahead to run off to her foster son, him knowing her anxiety yet controlling his annoyance, them meeting, Shravan standing up for Sumo. ..but the moment that took my heart was when he promised her that he will always fight for her..something that Sumo never did for him.

It's strange that Nirmala, however interested she sounded in seeking Shravan's permission to go to Aditya, actually thought of going over to Aditya. Shravan on other hand was yet again understanding enough to let her go without staking a rightful claim over his mother's love, either because he understood the futility of it or because it was late now to forge a natural bond with her. One of the hardest things in life is to grieve the loss of a person who is still alive.

I loved their meeting outside PCT, it spoke so beautifully about their relationship. They knew each others schedule, their movements were noticed without even they themselves being conscious enough to notice it...this spoke volumes of the depth they shared. They meant more than they knew to each other.

The restaurant scene was again beautiful. Shravan did have caveman instincts towards Sumo, mine to cherish, mine to protect, mine to provide for. Her explanations were relatable as well.

Him standing up for her and Sumo getting overwhelmed and all that followed was bliss.

Like I said, love the way you write Saleha, everything you write is either exceptional or not enough for me..I always want more.😛

Ramadan Mubarak Sal!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Safire

So so nicely penned!!

Thank you for a pretty long update!!


Thank you so much :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

It was emotional roller coaster ride of Shraman.


Shravan & Nirmala scene. Shravan & Sumo scene where Shravan was missing her. Without saying anything Sumo understood he was hungry. Shravan's hesitance while paying bill he couldn't find his wallet, his thinking about his parents.
Shravan who stand for Sumo, he defended her in front of his family. Sumo who heard everything couldn't believe her ears, the man who claimed he hated woman all his life, he stand for her. What she could expect more than this from a man to whom she loved all her life. I just love Your Shravan always.

Beautiful update dear

Vinu


Thank you for loving my Shravan ❤️ and I am glad that you enjoyed this one :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm falling more & more for Shravan with each update!! ❤️
Love the way how you're also focusing on supportive characters to move this story forward.
Eagerly waiting for next update 😊

P.S. : If possible, can you send me a pm next time?

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariumharis

Beautifully penned..

Ramadan Mubarak to u too..


Thank you so much Mariam for reading this, may this month be blissful for you 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing chapter
absolutely loved it
continue soon


Shukriya pinky 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

A long and lovely update! !

Beautifully penned !!
Thanks for pm!

Ramadan Mubarak! !❤️


Khair Mubarak Tabby Kayan ho aaj kaal ?
Thank you for the comment though :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

FF...😃
I knew it!!!

All thanks to you

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Will read and comment as soon as I can.
Bit busy ...that's whyno resyet!!

Ramadan Mubarak dear😊

😆
Take your time bro I'll wait 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

New reader me happy 😆
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Originally posted by: Ranified009

How beautiful this is, and very realistic for the kind of relationship they share. Pure bliss, please continue soon😳

Tried to keep the essence of the show alive, will try to continue soon :)

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