ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102)

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: Nik03

Ok then speed slow rakho!!
N do think about adding more n change it into FF 😉

Dekhte hai 😉
Pehle hi itne part add kardi hain and I think a SS is 10 parts and I am already counting 12 so let's see if I get more ideas I'll convert it but I have already an ending in my mind so dekhte hain ;)

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Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Dekhte hai 😉
Pehle hi itne part add kardi hain and I think a SS is 10 parts and I am already counting 12 so let's see if I get more ideas I'll convert it but I have already an ending in my mind so dekhte hain ;)

Yes a SS is of 10 parts.
12 Parts already...Yayy!!
That means its already a FF ⭐️
Ending soch li to kya hua...I know you do have some ideas in your mind.. ..you just have to add them here 😉

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: Nik03

Yes a SS is of 10 parts.
12 Parts already...Yayy!!
That means its already a FF ⭐️
Ending soch li to kya hua...I know you do have some ideas in your mind.. ..you just have to add them here 😉

Dekhte hain, you are giving me ideas let me warn more tears coming in the next chapters 😆

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Dekhte hain, you are giving me ideas let me warn more tears coming in the next chapters 😆

Yesss!!
You are going to do it!!!😃
Are am all ready...no worries at all 😉
Aap aane to do 😃

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: Nik03

Yesss!!
You are going to do it!!!😃
Are am all ready...no worries at all 😉
Aap aane to do 😃

I have so many ideas now 😆

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#346

Beautifully written roller coaster update👏

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

I have so many ideas now 😆

Keep them coming 😆

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AnuradhaMG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#348

This is sooo beautiful...I m truly having tears in my eyes reading this chapter...sooo many emotions portrayed so welll...OMG...fanastic, overwhelmingly fabulous...plz look up for all positive adjectives in d dictionary in praise of this chapter

rgds
Anuradha 👏

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#349

I read what I wanted to n more importantly how I wanted to ...❤️
A part of my heart is at Peace now!!
I have my answers now!!😊

Thank you soo much Sal for this beyond beautiful upii ⭐️
For now take a 🤗🤗
Baaki ka comment baad mein...n I dont know ye baad mein kab aayega 😕
Sorry for that !!

Love you buddy !!

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SummerRain7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#350

This story is undoubtedly one of the best ShraMan stories that I have come across in recent times . I wandered to this forum looking for a light romantic read. But once I started reading , I just couldn't put it down although it was heart wrenching and heavy on emotions. You are an amazing writer !! You have portrayed the emotions and actions of the characters so convincingly , something that the makers of the show failed to do.

My favourite chapter is the one where Shravan is running and reflecting. How he sifts through his own emotions and actions , tries to think from Suman's POV , failing to understand but still trying . It was amazingly done! I am also glad that Sumo realized where she went wrong. She may have refused Ramnath's cheque but she did choose her own family over him. In a way I get why she did that but that doesnt mean it would hurt Shravan any less. Last chapter was amazing too. Shravan is beginning to heal and I look forward to their emotional reunion . They are two imperfect people longing to belong .

I am so glad that I came across this story . Now eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

Edited by SummerRain7 - 8 years ago