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When you smile, I smile with you,
When you cry, I feel it too,
You are my soul, my heart coming out to you,

Be my eyes when I can't see,
Be my voice when I can't speak,
Be my life when darkness creeps on me,Throw the stars that shine so bright,
Cross the sky and cross the night,
Making ways to be right by your side

Hold me close don't let me go
Hold me tight don't you say no
Save the love we have for ever moreSave me, when my dream catches fire
(Spare?) me, in my only desire
Wake me, when the pain is over
Take me, now (Take me, now) ...2

When you smile, I smile with you,
When you cry, I feel it too,
You are my soul, my heart coming out to you,

Be my eyes when I can see,
Be my voice when I can speak,
Be my life when darkness creeps on me,

Through the stars that shine so bright,
Cross the sky and cross the night,
Making ways to be right by your side

Hold me close don't let me go
Hold me tight don't you say no
Save the love we have for ever more...



UDAY POV
i was born and brought up in Hungary ,my parents were very reputed cooperates ,soon on my 2 nd birthday my mom gifted me a baby sister ,unnati ,i loved and cared for her a lot even a scar on her could bring a tear in my eyes i was always so careful about her but when i was 1 we had to part away my grandmother ,my dadisabh was not well and she needed to be taken care so my parents and unnati had to migrate to Mumbai ,i had to stay back to complete my graduation it gave me emence pain to part away with them but life had its way after my graduation i went back to India and by then i saw a changed Unnati ,she was young and a cranved lady an eligible age to get married  i was running in my 25 and she was running in her 22, but her behavior was quite strange whole time she was engaged either in phone or in computer even after questioning a lot of time she prevailed silence at last on a christmas eve she confessed that she was in love with a boy ,and they both were quite serious about there relationship i personally met the guy , Vijay  he seemed a good guy  ,he belonged to a good background ,he was a soft ware engineer at Banglalore and i could see the love in his eyes i broke the news in front of my parents they had no objection as they themself had a love marriage though ds seemed a bit disturbed finally the long awaited day came of there marriage i was so happy finally my chotti was getting married i was busy welcoming the guest when suddenly my eyes were hooked on a girl she was not the most beautiful girl but indeed ahd a charm to make anyone fall for her on there knees ,she was into a pink gagra and silver siletons ,i gave a smirk seeing the navel ring she had ,she had very little make up but there was a glow in her face she walked in with her ,dad and a little girl probably her sister my dad greeted them and instantly i realized it was Uncle bridgraaj and the girl was Manyata she was my classmate till 3RD standard we had so much of fun together and we were the bestest friend s but she had to leave soon to India due to her mother 's dead i still recall she cried so much on my shoulder my shirt was wet but i did not care as all i wanted was her smile back after that day we lost tracks although there were many time i recalled her although she was my classmate still she was a year younger than me ,as i saw her walking towards me my heart raced it always did when she was around my check began to give a pink effect i do not know what was happening to me she came to me and with a smile
MANYATA;hey uday
her voice was so changed i cannot believe this was the same fatty whom i used to call princess she was changed god someone look at her curves ,she looked so beautiful as she flipped her hair and the little girl pulled her end of gaggra and asked in a honey cube voice
GIRL:mummy who is this guy?
COMPLETED CHAPPY 1 MAYBE TODAY OR MARCH
chapter one https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3450960/ps-i-love-you
chapter 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3450960/ps-i-love-you?pn=2
chapter 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3450960/ps-i-love-you?pn=5
chapter 4 and 5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3450960/ps-i-love-you?pn=6
chapter 6 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3450960/ps-i-love-you?pn=8
chapter 7https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3450960/ps-i-love-you?pn=12
chapter 8https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83549620
chapter 9https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83994464
chapter 10 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/84980632
EPILOGUE https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86078433
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I felt as though for a moment i could not breath i felt my self suffocting ,marriage how could she marry i mean why? she could at least tell me before making such a big desision before making such a big decision ,jesus who was her husband was he better than me i am going insane why am i compairing myself with a random boy ,my chain of thoughts were broken as she spoke back to HER daughter
MANYATA; amaya remember i always told you about my best friend the great sleeping head well this is he Mr sleeping head of our class Uday veer singh
i chuckled at her mentioning me sleepy head she always teased me by that name as i was fuming with anger at her due to some unknown reason and mummered"woa you remember my name great" but i needed to speak i could not stand there like a dumb wit i looked at her eyes those sparks were making me weak i do not know why i feel this way i really wanted to talk to her finally i recollected myself
ME:hey so you changed a  lot huh
MANYATA:same goes for you ,you came  back to india and did not even inform me huh
i laughed at her scarcastically come on like she got married and she did not tell me that is a bigger crime just then the cute chubby girl yes amaya  went with one of her friend now it was just two of us i needed to find out whom she married ,when and why ?its time to act i made myself firm now no rounding around the bushes direct question yes
ME:she is so cute what her age
i messed up again this is what usually happen when she is around i say a motherly affection in her eyes
MANYATA:this friday she will turn 5
UDAY;that is great but i cannot see your husband anywhere
i saw her face color changed she turned pale as her voice soften up
MANYATA:Akash Verma  is no more he died in a car accident before 3 years
i do not know why but an immence joy ran across my spin i felt myself at the top of the world why did 'nt i realize she did not have a mangal sutra or a sindoor ofcourse her husband died i was so happy i felt guilt for thinking so happy of someone dead but i just could not control and spoke
ME:that is very sad
MANYATA:yea indeed by the way he is not my husband ok
she said with a little smile i was frooze and barely could ask
ME:then who is akasha nd what about amaya
MANYATA:sia di husband my jiju amaya  is there daughter aand they both died in a car accident before three years
a glint of sadness took over her face as she continued
MANYATA:kriya was just two she was too small to understand all this so since then i take care of her ,she is aware of her real parents but for her now i am everything and for me she is everything
i felt my legs rooted to the ground i did know sia di she was manyata 's elder sister and stayed in India with there mom i even talked to her for so many times i felt sad but soon my happiness over powered me i was happy that she was not married ,happy that i still had my chances
i do not know why but i imagined a perfect family picture me ,manyata ,amaya  and some other kids [lol] we were about to continue our conversation asthe panditji announced that the marriage was about to start i saw her raced to amaya  and took little amaya  in her arms and started to whisper something ,both had a glint of happiness in there eyes maybe manyata was telling something about me ,i kept my glance fixed on her the marriage was soon completed  and everybody sat down for dinner i proposly sat beside her and she noticed me soon yea i mean 15 minutes is soon isn't it ok fine i had to cough out my lungs to make my presence clear i could understand that amaya was not very happy with my presence come on like even i am not so happy with your sence ok i hate kids i just simply hate them they are noisy ,irritating and untolerable as i started over convo actually she did
MANYATA:so uday for how many days are you here?
UDAY:till i get married
MANYATA:oh so you are here for your marriage so where is your girl friend in mean would be bride
UDAY:i do not have a girl friend i will let dad and mom decide
i said with a smile as i saw the little brat again pulling her gaggra and said in her honey tone with a puppy face
MANYATA:what happened amaya beta you are not feeling well
AMAYA;yes mummy can we go back home please
manyata took a heavy breath and looked at me
MANYATA:sorry uday i have to leave bye
UDAY:Bye and amaya dear take care of your self
AMAYA:thank you UNCLE
my ears echoed UNCLE i knew this was the plan of that little devil anyone could guess by the little smirk in her manyata left i was disheartened my face was low and everybody mistook it thinking i was feeling bad for chotti the bidai rasam was done our home looked so empty my mom was in her room and she was the best person with whom i could talk about my feeling i was so confused about manyata night had crept in by now i changed into my tracks and tee as i flung open the door i knew i had distubed a perfect lovey doubey moment between mom and dad but i really did not care i jumped on the bad and slept in middle of them ,dad gave me a frosty look and mom smiled at my antics they both layed back
GIRIRAAJ:what is it beta ?
ME:dad mom i was missing you guys so today i want to sleep with both of you
i closed my eyes to prevent futher discussion as i acting like a typical evesdropper was over hearing there convo
GIRIRAAJ:manyata is a good girl
DISHA[MOM]:yea i heard she is a dance teacher at a school
GIRIRAAJ:yes she is so sweet ... even maasabh likes her a lot
DISHA:So did you  speak to Bridgraaj
GIRIRAAJ:yes he agreed to uday and manyata marriage


Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow! what a beautiful prologue👏 👏 👏
and the poem, thats too good⭐️
loved it dear😃 post the chapter one soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love the poem👏
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aha
a new update
this seems to be a good one
the poem and the prologue was awesome
I felt my world crashed when she said the word mom
Edited by eyecatchers - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesummm god job well done👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lops manyata's child.😆..is she her own daughter ya someother story...😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sia di husband my jiju amaya is there daughter aand they both died in a car accident before three years
a glint of sadness took over her face as she continued
MANYATA:kriya was just two she was too small to understand all this so since then i take care of her ,she is aware of her real parents but for her now i am everything and for me she is everything
for my reader this is the secret behind amaya and it is updated in chappy one so i hope ur doubts are cleared
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum chapter annesha.
thank god manyta is not married. so uday is in love with manyata. nice.
cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome
well written
Enjoyed Uday's POV ...

Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago

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