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Posted: 12 years ago
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it had been an hour I had gone to drop amaya home and get the discharge papers ready on being asked by uncle bridg I had to lie that manyata and I have gone to spend some time alone and we took amaya along I also assured him that after this met she agreed to marry me on hearing this news both our family broke into hug every body was happy and the house was filled with sounds of laughter I also made myself clear that we must marry within this week they did agree to me and as for amaya she hugged me kissing my cheeks calling me dad instantly because after yes she was extremely close to me then I made my way back to the hospital the thought of keeping manyata alone made my heart ached so I went and got the discharge then I entered the room the nurse had led me to ,the errie silence and the darkness made my footsteps sound loud .ten different instruments beeped and LED lights flickered at regular intervals .cables from the instrument disappeared into my dear love my princess ,I noticed her curly hair first ,her complection was pale white with dark circles and her lips were turned dry due to the medicines her eyes lost its glow as I sat beside her and ran my fingure into her hair she gazed at me with a very strange look ,she was stunned ,in spite of all this she still had a beauty hidden in her her stare was full of love and passion as she parted her lips to say

MANYATA:so uday did you tell dad about it

UDAY: I did and they all seems so happy about it even amaya seems very close to me

MANYATA:hmm glad she accepted you

UDAY:any girl cannot escape uday veer singh charm not even your daughter MANYATA:neither her mother

She said turning her face sideways as her check flushed furiously we could no longer continue our conversation as the doctor had to interverne I stayed out of the room and was busy messaging in my phone as she finally came out in the sarre she was in last night she was looking angelic yet her looked tried and badly in need of rest she almost stompped her steps and fell but was saved by my arms I pulled her in my embrace and carried her to the car we were the main attraction as every body looked at us and she hid her face in my chest out of embrassement but I enjoyed it entirely she was curdle in my arm like a small baby then I seated her in the car the drive was peaceful with radio playing all music channels Meri har man maani bas tum tak
Baatein bachkaani bas tum tak
Meri nazar deewani bas tum tak
Tum tak, tum tak, tum tak, soneya!

Tum tak tum tak arzi meri
Phir teri jo marzi meri
Har dushwaari bas tum tak
Tum tak, tum tak, tum tak, tum tak
Meri ishq khumaari bas tum tak...

Ik tak ik tak, naa tak.. gum sum
Naazuk Naazuk dil se hum tum...
Tum... tum tum tum tum tum tum!

Tum tak chala hoon tum tak
Chalunga tum tak
Mila hoon tum tak
Milunga tum tak

Tum tak tum tak tum tak
Tum tak tum tak tum tak tum tak
Ooo...

Meri akal deewani tum tak
Meri sakal jawani tum tak
Meri khatam kahani tum tak
Meri khatam kahani bas tum tak

Tum tak tum tak tum tak tum tak
Tum tak tum tak tum tak tum tak
Tum tak tum
Tum tak tum
Tum tak tum

our journey came to an halt by a gigantic traffic a small girl of nearly age of 8 was trying best to sell her bunches of red roses ,the one manyata favourite as she came to ours without even wasting a single second I bought all roses and paid her off ,manyata looked at me with much confusion and suspicion this was what I planned to propose her but on the party but I could not but does this really stop me nah I can still propose her I got off the car and brought her out ,cars stopped all eyes were on us she looked at me with her wide open as I knelled down on my knees and said

" I love you will you like to spend the entire of your life with udayveer singh"

She covered her face with her palm while I could here hoots and claps all over ,I could see the rays of sun reflected in her eyes ,her eyes were wide as there was a sparkle in her eyes ,she finally removed her hands and shook her head in a yes with a tears of happiness as she said

MANYATA:yes I do agree to marry you

My happiness knew no bounds I got up and pulled her for the tightest embrace ,I hugged her as though we will never leave and then I faced her her lips were eight millimetres apart from mine ,soon I reduced the gap to zero ,I came forward ,the tiny distance made it difficult to as I took the initiative ,to us nothing mattered neither the crowd ,traffic nothing i placed my hard lips on her soft ones and entered her lips through my tongue,our tongue were batting each other ,the love and passion was felt from both side ,i bite ,sucked and nibbled her lips ,i chewed it her lips taste so heavenly i loved it it but i realished that she was running out of breath and broke the kiss she looked at me ,she was all red and sweating before she could open her mouth i placed my lips on it

We kissed again as she looked at me and said

MANYATA:what are we doing?

UDAY:kissing

I said with a big grin not letting go off her waist the passion held us back ,she could hardly make an eye contact as her checks turned crimson red to me it was the best kiss I ever had it felt me 1000 more alive as we kissed again ,but after a long passionate kiss we finally broke away from each other because even passionate people like us need as I pulled her chin and whispered in her ears

UDAY;We are getting married ,we can do anything ,

I emphasised on each and every word as I took her back to the car the traffic by now was all cleared as I started to drive watching the sun completely risen over the city as she started to to tell about her dreams how she wished she could have a home in the beach and how colours the walls inside pink and yellow with a small puppy with whom amaya and she would play around and at last a terrance garden to date around with me ,it

was the most amazing moment of my life my love was with me nothing could be better I told her about amaya reaction and she seemed too happy as she clunched to my arms and we drove away

Done with this chappy

Sorry for the late update

Sorry for my mistake

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and thank you for liking my previous update



Note: form next chappy it will take a leap of 6 months

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
_Annesha_ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

thank you jiji
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
The update was nice
sry i cant lik it because m using mobil
uday was romantic and his way of propose was good
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: roopali15

The update was nice
sry i cant lik it because m using mobil
uday was romantic and his way of propose was good


its ok no problem
i am glad that you like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Very nice update annie loved the chappy. Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: nishaya...

Very nice update annie loved the chappy. Thanx for the pm


i am glad that you liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Hi Annesha
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm 😊
⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hi Annesha
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm 😊
⭐️


I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKED IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

lovely updt...👍🏼👍🏼


I AM GLAD LIKED IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
wsome update annesha rock...
update soon n pm me
n thanks for today pm
i loved it
continue soon this asap
very nice update dear n
plz give a long update
keep it up n thank you for pm
update sooon

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