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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer
BUT WHY??
ATLEAST GIVE A NICE ENDING DEAR! THIS IS TOO MUCH. U CANT END THIS SO SOON!

actually ther is a lot more but people are not intrested so it is useless to write

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Pranoti aka Sanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: annesha18

actually ther is a lot more but people are not intrested so it is useless to write

na, this not a gud reason at all!! i sufferd frm the same phase! give few more updates! wait, sabr ka ohal meetha hota hain. wait, lets scarp

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hmmmm dude i forgot

@.maleficent.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

fanatstic update anisha
loved it to the core dear
ohh uday is in love
and that manyta reject uday thats not fair i mean the guy is read to adopte so called child of her i mean amay than also
this not done
and plz cont plzz anish for us plzzz for your regular raeder plzzz

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Jarin04

@Jarin04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

pls i like this ff pls don't end it lyk this

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Ravneet Kaur

@Fantasyangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

anesha am luvin this story...nd pls cont it...nd nd wlcm back nd thanku for pm

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

heyy plzz dnt discntinue itt,doo cntinuee itt!!!!!!

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Awesome update Anni! Very interesting. But why doesn't Manyata want to marry Uday😕? And what's this about DISCONTINUING this SS? Please don't do that! Do reconsider your decision😊.

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

guys i am ontinuing this ss but the main reason is this is not a manveer story completely it is about uday how he manages his responsibility can be called a tragic story do not know i feel you all will dislike it so i thought of discontinuing but again after the replies i have planned to continue it but do not hate me for updating sad chapppy later in the ss
thanks for the support

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

awe sum but again scary update soon,...

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

CHAPTER THREE
My heart gave the strongest jerk as i kept telling myself that it cannot happen what manyata said was a lie ,she cannot reject him ,but it was not only me having the same feeling even the elders panicked as bridgraaj said in a firm voice
BRIDGRAAJ:what are you saying manyata are you in your true sences?
MANYATA:dad i am in my true sences but whats up with you i am sorry aunty disha and giriraaj uncle but i cannot marry uday
woa she said sorry to my parents but what about me huh miss manyata who will include me in your sorry list or tell me you rejected me from there also ,i felt my heart being broken ,crushed ,smashed and a road roller doing dance on it i felt tears swelled up in my eyes but i held it back and finally spoke
ME:why don't you want to marry me
all there eyes turned towards me ,for the first time i took thing on my turn i was indeed a shy guy but when it comes to my girl i will leave no stones unturned ,she looked at me, the anger which was rapidly erupting in me was slowly melting as she gave an innocent look my god those big wide black eyes i had already started to melt and i felt a small smile crept in my face i held it back and gave an look of you-owe-me-an-explanation my mom understood that situation was getting heated up so finally she tried to cool us
DISHA;i think bridgraaj we should let the kids have a talk sepearately alone that would be better
now no doubt she is my mom one second she makes me upset by calling me kids another and another moment makes me happy by giving me a chance to be with manyata all alone at this the elders took our leave as we exchanged a look finally it was us just both of us as she managed herself and sat on the sofa opposite to mine she was a real beauty no one could ever look so heavenly just in a plain yellow kurti and a pair of faded jeans except for her i was busy admiring her as she parted her lips to speak
MANYATA:see uday do not mind but i cannot marry you
ME;but why manyata but is wrong with me i mean
i could not control a girl whom i loved so much was rejecting me no this could not happen i mean why tears started to roll off as she took my hands in hers and pleaded
MANYATA:look uday please do not cry
UDAY:how am i not supposed to cry do you even know how much i love you ...
i just said whatever was in my mind ,i did not give it a second thought how could i blunder shit what she must be thinking uday veer singh you are a despo dumpo shit its my first love i had soo many hopes how could i just propose her i mean no ring no flower and she just rejected me for marriage i looked at her ,her eyes said clearly that she was hurt her eyes were all teary as she managed to mummer
MANYATA:uday please go do not make it nay harder for me
i did not say anything i just got up to leave as i felt a warm yet soft tender fingure s' on my wrist i looked back it was manyata tears were falling off her eyes but i was too angry to her i jerked her hands off and marched away i took my farewell from bridgraaj uncle as my family went back to home ,both ma and dad was amazed by my behavior they had never seen me much more angrier ,i banged the door of my room on there and went directly to my cup board my anger knew no bounds i threw all my clothes and then broke a few glasses too on my head and my hand was bleeding and truthfully god it pained it pained soo much ok i was angry but i could not torture myself i came out to look for some first aid rotten luck of mine mom noticed me and started to panick i tried to cool her but blood was oozing from my head and i felt dizzy and dad he dragged me to car and rushed to the hospital on the way suddenly everything was blankened and when i got up i found myself in a white room i understood i was in a hospital i did not want to face my parents i was ashamed of my behaviour i just did what my heart said and did not bother to think about anything as i finally got a sweet fragnance it was manyata 's perfume i could smell her but my medicine did not let me open my eyes then i felt many peoples presence as i started to observe there voice and recognize them
DOCTOR;it will take him some time to come to his sences
MANYATA:he will be fine na?
ok so it was just manyata and doctor and at a part i was happy that she cared for me and bothered to come here
MANYATA:Doc is there any improvement
DOCTOR;no it got even worse are you sure its you who want i mean
MANYATA:yes doctor and moreover i do not have many days left so yes
DOCTOR:but manyata how did you come to know that
MANYATA: last year i came to know that i got lukemania till now no ones knows and i want it to be a secret
DOCTOR;but when did you come to know that uday has a whole in his heart
MANYATA:last month when dad said me ,at that point i decided to donate my heart and when i came to know you are only operating me it became a easier task
DOCTOR;yea i am feeling guilty lieing to him that it is just a minor pain
MANYATA:that 's better doctor i do not want him knowing this i want that operation to be done and he getting well soon without even knowing about him let it be like a past buried matter which he would never come to know
DOCTOR:that is the reason you rejected him for marriage but he can get another donnar
MANYATA:no doctor and moreover i am going to die so it does not matter i want to do something for him
DOCTOR:do you love him that much
MANYATA;yes doctor but it does not matter i have only three months left
done wid this chappy
i knw it very complicated
so i will make it simple
manyata has lukemania
and uday has a hole in his heart
so manyata plans to donate her heart to uday
happy reading
promo
i pinned her to the nearest wall my hands were already working hard to unhook her blouse as i whispered in her ears making her shiver
ME;YOU ARE MINE ONLY MINE NOTHING CAN SEPARATE US NOT EVEN THE NATURE NOT EVEN OUR DESTINY NOT EVEN OUR DISEASES

ME;MANYATA LETS MARRY AND AFTER WHAT HAPPENED LAST NIGHT I THINK YOU HAVE NO OTHER CHOICE BUT TO MARRY ME

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago

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