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Posted: 12 years ago
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writter note: 6 months after manveer marriage and the upcoming chappy won't be uday pov

Chapter 8

They said time would ease the pain
Every day I still feel the same
I wake every morning reaching for you
My pillow soaked with my tears like the morning dew

We were so sure this was something we could beat
Knowing it would be no small feat
The ribbons of pink now mean much more
Just never thought this would come knocking on our door

We fought for more time together
Thinking every day you were getting better
Every day rain or shine seemed to be lined with gold
We still talked of our future plans of growing old

We heard of so many that had survived this
I still remember our last kiss
We thought we could win for sure
Now for others I can only hope for a cure.



The long dark night was gone ,the sun filled in the town with its bright light ,the nature sung its songs ,as the grew valley glittered in the rays of sun , the birds flew high in the fresh air while the leaves danced to its soft music of the winds ,a tiny ray of light entered the wooden cottage filling in each corner of the house as a ray hit his eyes ,he rubbed it and opened it just to find her curdled up in his arms ,his wife a person he always loved a tiny strand of hair played on her face as he put it behind her ears till now his touch send ghoosebumps down her spine as she opened her eyes softly and looked into his ,there was his signature smirk plastered to his face as he huskily whispered into her ears

UDAY:good morning manyata happy 6th month marriage anniversary wifey

She did not response just curdled herself in his arms more , he got the signal that his wife was in no mood to open her eyes but he was not letting go of her that easily tricks played in his minds as his hands travelled to her back and tickled her she twisted in his embrace as he stopped she looked at him in a complaining manner ,he smiled at her and with the other hand caressed her check ,she looked so heavenly , such flawless skin ,such anglelic beauty ,her lips so soft and rosy ,her check so soft and turned beetroot every time his one figure caressed it but suddenly he felt something wet under her eyes he observed closer to find it was a drop of tear he was aware of the tear as she kissed the back of his palm ,he knew the time of separation was back he cluntched to her body fearing and not letting it go but suddenly he opened his eyes with a jerk , the body that he hugged tightly turned into mist he sat up on the empty bed sweating with tears trickling in his eyes as his eyes travelled to the window themed night sky had filled in the town of Nainital with its darkness a time he loved ,now no more did he like the bright sun or its light he loved the darkness he created a shell around himself and anybody who would even try to peep into his life was not forgiven not even his own parents as he stepped out of his bed and went to the washroom ,he looked at himself dressed in an old faded torn pair of jeans and a net vest to cover his chest this did not pretend the harsh winter wind his body needed something warm but now he did not listen to anything he would rather be happy if he would die out of cold he took some water and splashed into his face and love unshaven moustache , his hair undone and all dusty after drenching his face completely he headed towards the little bar at the corner of the room and took a bottle of whiskey , he unsealed the bottle and poured down the sour liquid all in one go ,his eyes were now blinded with tears as he strumpled down his steps and sat with his back to the cold glass wall ,he crumbled down and lied on the floor as tears covered his face he cried like a poor baby as he mummered some words the acholhal was digging the inner pain he was suffering from ,that was the only reason he drank to bring out his feeling as he mumbled

UDAY: why manyata why did you leave me? You are a bitch I hate you ? how could you leave me all alone all by myself you coward how could you just give all your responsibility to me and leave ,me I hate you manyata you are a disgrace on the name of a wife you said time will heal up everything but bloddy freak I am still in pain why manyata why please baby come back I love you so much please I promise to do all household chores , I will look after amaya I promise I won't be hard on bed please come back na I need you please today is our 6 th month marriage anniversary baby please come back

This was the last few words he said as his eyes fell all heavy and he laid on the cold floor while the harsh cold winds covered his body and he shivered in the cold and continuous tears trickled down his check

BRIDGRAAJ HOUSE

The house was darkened just with the lights of the study were switched on ,the corridors were isolated as slow sobs were heard it was bridgraaj , he looked at the big wall size photo of manyata hanging up in the wall but each time he saw the garland of flowers covering her beautiful face and that smile of hers as he said with tears swelling in his eyes and a voice broken with sorrows

BRIDGRAAJ: my little baby where did you go? Why you hide this all from us? For only onces you could tell your dad I would surely find a way out of it , we would go to big doctors but why did you suffer the pain all by yourself see even uday is not happy you did not save his life by giving your hearth you made him filled with guilt beta why did you do this?

He covered his face with his palm and cried as a soft arm touched his shoulder and he looked upwards to see it was little amaya he wipped his tears and took her into his arms as he said

BRIDGRAAJ:What happened beta ? why did you come out of the bed?

AMAYA;nana sabh you are crying na ?

BRIDGRAAJ:no bacha it was just a piece of dust

AMAYA:nana sabh you are missing mummy ?

BRIDGRAAJ:lets go to bed ok

AMAYA:I am missing mummy she will never come back na

With tears swelled all in her eyes as with a broken voice she continued

AMAYA:I will never forgive udayveer he killed mummy I hate him

BRIDGRAAJ;beta don't say like this he is your father na

AMAYA:no never ever I hate him nana sabh he killed mummy I hate him

Saying this she rushed upstairs leaving bridgraaj completely take n by tears , as she rushed to her room hugged manyata photo and cried her heart out and complained

AMAYA:mummy I love you so much this time I will ask santa to gift me your life I am sure he will fulfill my wish

Saying this she cried and unknown to her fell asleep on the bed by her mother photo

PROMO

OFFICER:sorry mr veer singh but bridgraaj is dead and now you are amaya legal guardian

done with the chappy

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any res box and ss will be discontinued



Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: anushruthi

good Chapter

Emotional And touching


i am glad to see you back i missed you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
awesome update annesha...
poor Uday...

sad fr manyatas death...
but wat happened that amaya thinks Uday is her moms murderer?
hmmm..

omg bridj gonna die...
bad...
amaya wid uv?
hope they sort out soon...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesome update annesha...
poor Uday...

sad fr manyatas death...
but wat happened that amaya thinks Uday is her moms murderer?
hmmm..

omg bridj gonna die...
bad...
amaya wid uv?
hope they sort out soon...
update soon...


thank you so much
i am glad you could take out time for my ss
yea told dat it is a tragic one heheeh
coz manyat donated her heart to uday
yup sorry
yes
maybe no
mayata will sort out all there problems
thank for this lovely comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
intresting so amaya thinks udayveer killed manyata ...humm lot of secret in store

intriguing promo...looking forward to it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
finished reading all the parts and this last part was so emotional I had tears in my eyes will manveer ever happen as it seems like manyata is dead will someone come into udays life... oh god brij is dead I hope Amaya accepts uday and doesn't blame him for killing his mother please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: shana0127

intresting so amaya thinks udayveer killed manyata ...humm lot of secret in store

intriguing promo...looking forward to it


i m glad you took time for my ss
thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: preya_radev

finished reading all the parts and this last part was so emotional I had tears in my eyes will manveer ever happen as it seems like manyata is dead will someone come into udays life... oh god brij is dead I hope Amaya accepts uday and doesn't blame him for killing his mother please update soon and thanks for the pm


i m glad you took time for my ss
no its a tagic ss
manveer will never met
manyata is dead
thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Awsssmmm puff pastryyy
sad fr manyata death
uday is so broken plzzz do smething
and hw manyata sort every thing out
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.

Awsssmmm puff pastryyy
sad fr manyata death
uday is so broken plzzz do smething
and hw manyata sort every thing out

hey my hunney bunney missed u soo much😭
yea i too felt sad whiel killing her just lying i loved killing her my saut kahiki🤢
ahaa i wld love to enter this ss as uv new love interest but u all wnt let me do dat na😳
aha like how jeery sorted out in ps i love you of nicholas sparks😃

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