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huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

that was awsssmmm annii love it too the core

Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago

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sanah12

@sanah12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

loved both the updates. Do continue soon n thanks 4 the pm.

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sanah12
loved both the updates. Do continue soon n thanks 4 the pm.

thank you i am glad you liked it
next update next saturday

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
awesome...
loved it loads..

thanks glad you liked it

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: huma12.
that was awsssmmm annii love it too the core

thank you so much i am glad you liked it

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: fireroad99
LOVE IT FROM THE CORE

thank you so much
i am glad you liked it😳

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Kritika

@Karkit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Awesme ani loved both update
thnx fr pm n cntinue soon

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Karkit
Awesme ani loved both update
thnx fr pm n cntinue soon

thk you so much
glad you liked it

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

A surging ,seething ,murmuring crowd of doctors and nurse raced inside the ICU and with every passing seconds my heart started to pound more and more ,i tried my best to hold back my tears i could not break down not when amaya is with i had to be strong for her ,i do not know why but at that point of life a soft corner came into me ,a feeling of protecting amaya from consoling her ,at that time all that matter was the little five year old girl who was watching her mother getting operated in the hospital ,i had no answers to her question poor innocent soul no she was quite she rested her head on my lap and looked at the ICU door as i patted her head to get her relax like mom does to me when i used to cry ,The time was hard to kill and those were crucial hour of my life as the sun rose high above and spreaded its light over our life of darkness but like every bad thing it did come to an end the doctor came out and with a smile on his face said
DOCTOR:i must say it is no less than a miracle this time she is saved you can meet her after sometime and uday i need to talk to you privately amaya you can be with the nurse in canteen
then the doctor called the nurse ,amaya tightly clunched to my shirt and i hugged her as i said wipping her little tears drops
UDAY:baby don't cry i will come just now
saying this she loosen her grip while i saw her leave with the nurse my heart ached a fear crept in my mind whether the nurse will take good care of her or not and whether she will cry or not i wanted to stay with her but my thoughts were disturbed as by the doctor ,his face was pale as he said coldly
DOCTOR:uday this time was just a miracle i am sorry to say but this miracle are not going to happen again she has very few days left
UDAY:can i meet her please
DOCTOR:she is still unconcious
UDAY;doctor please and can i bring amaya along please
DOCTOR:ok as you wish
saying this i raced to the canteen and saw amaya sitting in a corner of a dark corner of the canteen as she saw me she raced to me and i strongly pulled her in my embrace i knelled to be at her level and said
UDAY:baby we are going to meet mummy
AMAYA;i do not want to meet her
UDAY:why baby whats the matter?
AMAYA;she lied to me she said she will never leave me but now even she is going to leave me all alone
saying this she outburst in tear as i hugged her tightly and kissed her forehead saying
UDAY:do not worry she will not go anywhere
saying this i caught her little fingure and took her to the ICU as we opened both our heart pounded and tears swelled up ,my manyata ,my little angle was rested on a white bed with tubes and salines attached to every part of her body ,amaya went and hugged her while due to non sence she did not response amaya looked at me and asked me
AMAYA;what happened to her why is she not responding
i went to her picked her in my arms there was worries in her forehead as i said
UDAY:do not worry baby she is sleeping she will respond once she is fine ok
she believed me and sat beside manyata clunching to her hands and running her tiny fingure into her hair while i stood in a corner watching the whole thing my heart cried at her condition i was so helpless i stood there and stared , this finally came to an end when finally i heard manyata 's voice , i went and saw she came to her sence as she moved her hands over amaya 's hair who was fast asleep in her embrace i looked at her with my eyes all teray seeing her in that almost dead condition made my heart break a thousand time ,she looked back at me ,her eyes were full of love and fear love for being with me and the fear of getting separated from me ,i hated seeing her like this ,her silence was killing me as i spoke
UDAY;you did not even tell amaya about it did you?
MANYATA:no i did not have the courage to tell her
she said lowering her eyes now an immense anger rose in me she calls herself mom how can she be so careless how can she hide such a big thing from her daughter and i outburst in anger
UDAY;How can you be so careless with her do you even care about her what will happen after you die she will be left all alone like an orphan she will have her granddad but she do need at least one of her parents in her life no manyata i cannot le you ruin her life i will stay with her ,i her dad will take care of her
manyata did not cry as her tears were dried up due to her disease but i could feel her heart crying aloud as i tried consoling her by saying
UDAY;you cannot risk her life please manyata lets marry and after what happened last night i think you have no choice other than to marry me not for my love sake than atleast for your daughter
MANYATA;uday why are you doing this i do love you ,love you more than anything but i cannot see you in the pain of separation i cannot see you suffering because of me
UDAY:i will not suffer because Lost love is still love. It takes a different form, that's all. You can't see their smile or bring them food or tousle their hair or move them around a dance floor. But when those senses weaken another heightens. Memory. Memory becomes your partner. You nurture it. You hold it. You dance with it.
at this i knelled down took out the ring that i had bought that night to propose her and strneched my hand asking her
UDAY:manyata would you like to spend the rest of your life with me? will you love me till eternity? will you be mine and only mine forever? will you marry me
MANYATA;i will marry you
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