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HunsraJ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Prologue was awesome Ani👍🏼.

I got sad when the child called Manyata - MUMMY!
But after reading ch1 , I'm relieved now.
Uday's parents are discussing Uday /Manyata marriage - it's all happenning so quick😲!!
I think Uday will have some difficulty adapting to the little girl.
But it was a great start.
Please continue soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful, and awesome prologue Annesha!!👏👏
as always ur all stories are super good!!😃
do update soon!
😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely prologue!!!!!!!!! totally loved it!!!!!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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my heart skipped a beat i jumped up the bed and looked directly towards my mom and screamed out my lungs
ME:really ma are you planning to get us both married?
my mom passed a meeky smile to my dad and then continued
DISHA:i thought you slept but looks like giriraaj he was evesdropping  na
i felt my ears turn betroot my act was caught as my parents passed each other mischievious  smile i cooled my nerve and sat down on the bed and looked like an innocent child
GIRIRAAJ:yes beta we were planning for your and manyata marriage i had even talked to giriraaj about it and he agreed so beta the last verdict is yours do you want to marry her?
i felt the tension growing i the room ,things were getting serious my one answer would decide the fate of my entire life .millions of question ran in my mind although at any cost rejection was none of the option but what about me? i mean manyata 's presence always drove me crazy but why was it so? why was i dishearted when i got to hear that little witch i mean sorry amaya calling her mom ? why did i imagine a perfect family photo with her ?i cannot even think of tying the knot with another girl  it was she and only she jesus  i am in love with her i mean i had always been in love with her why did i not know? my chain of thoughts were disturbed by my mom
DISHA:so beta what have you decided? kya tum ushei sadhi karogei [will you marry her]
ME;ma ushei nahi toh kisei karunga [ if not her then whom will i marry]
just by my this sentence i found myself being a sandwich in middle of my parents tearsflowed from my mom 's eye while dad patted my back and said
GIRIRAAJ: so tomorrow we will go to their home to fix the dates
DISHA:cannot believe our son has grown so big
i gave her a bear hug and headed to my room whole night i could not sleep thinking about manyata i was so nervous i thought about her what her reaction would be i knew it will be a yes still  i felt insecure all these thoughts captured my mind and i was sleep derived ,
with the first ray of light i got up today was a big day i was going to my in laws home for the first time ,i had to be at my best i knew bridgraaj uncle had always loved me but now things were different today he was going to examine his future son in law and that made all the difference ,soon after a shower i got into a black tuxedo at the breakfaat table everybody was ready and soon after breakfast we left ,as dad drove the car my heart beat got faster and faster ,we stopped near a well desinged six storage bunglow just like ours ,each corner of her house reflected beauty and richness ,this was another thing which made our parents special in both our family inspite of all wealth we were not pampered we were strick to our disipline
and morals ,their servants lead us inside as bridgraaj uncle seated us and the servants offered us some cold drinks ,i was too nervous and almost shivered as bridgraaj uncle looked into my direction i felt my nerve freezing
BRIDGRAAJ:how are you uday?
ME:i am fine uncle
BRIDGRAAJ:i was your uncle past then but now call me sir
ME:ok sir...i ...am...f...i...n...e...
i stammered and sweat i felt my heart came out as he gave one of his frosty look to me i felt my heart coming out but soon the situation was broken by laughed it was started by bridgraaj uncle and followed by my parents i looked confushed and lost
BRIDGRAAJ:beta do not get scared i was just pulling your legs hahaaha giri your son is soo innocent
GIRIRAAJ:yea but where is your daughter manyata?
BRIDGRAAJ;she has gone to leave amaya for school
DISHA;actually i had to say something about amaya
BRIDGRAAJ:i do know you do not want her to be with manyata after marriage i do understand and i will look after this matter
GIRIRAAJ;no it is not that we both have no problem with amaya and we wanted to say we want her with manyata even after marriage we also love her and she is like our grand daughter
BRIDGRAAJ;i do know and after sia death amaya had been so close to manyata i am glad that you both do not have a problem but what about uday
great now once again the wheel was turned towards me another decision but like i hate her still yea i do not have any problem like i have waited for manyata so long and i am ready to accept amaya
ME:uncle even i do not have any problem
although i had not just one but numerous problem with that amaya  but for manyata i had to accept just then my eyes were hooked on the door as my lady love manyata made her way in with a red full length salwar suit she looked so beautifully as she made her way inside and sat beside bridgraaj uncle
MANYATA;morning everyone so today all under the same roof is there any special occasion today
DISHA;yea beta today we have come to talk about yours and uday marriage
i saw her face turning pale as she stood up ,her eyes were all teary
MANYATA:what???????/
BRIDGRAAJ:beta but i said about this to you before
MANYATA:and dad i had given my verdict i do not want to marry uday



at last done with chappy two
happy reading



Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

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Awesome Chapter
well written

WELCOME BACK Annesha !!
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: anushruthi


First to comment
Awesome Chapter
well written

WELCOME BACK Annesha !!


thanks flad you liked it
thanks for the warm welcome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
1 sec annesha why is the title 'discontinue'
well res. i'll read n cumnt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
gr8 update Annesha 👏👏

Welcome back to Dek forum
Thnxs for the pm😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
i ma discontinuing this ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: annesha18

i ma discontinuing this ss

BUT WHY??
ATLEAST GIVE A NICE ENDING DEAR! THIS IS TOO MUCH. U CANT END THIS SO SOON!

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