my deviationTIGHT SLAP!!!!

Haven't read this yet.. will read it 2mrw..

ah..................... ur stories are back............. needed one after the WC...................


will read tomorrow

haan.... yaar... magar GHALATI say ho gaya... ab sub say DANT paraygi.... So SORRY..... bus... kya kahun... khud ko....

Another nice story👏👏👏....thanx yaar
But I feel that if it ends this point -

"DAYA: magar boss… ye tou bus….. (saw him) acha…. theek hay…. PROMISE!!! bus khush…."

...It will be more good...but anyway it's good.......expect more & more good story from u...

Hey once again a very good story… I like it…..

But just got confused at following points can u please clarify my doubts:

Here in start

ABHIJEET: DAYA dekho pehlay tum CHECK POINT 2 per thay na' ab tum CHECK POINT 1 ko cover karogay' main 2 dekhunga'. VIVEK aur FREDDIE tum log 3^RD dekho gay aur SACHIN aur KAJAL tum dono 4^TH point ko lead karo gay'. MINISTER ki apni SECURITY tou hogi magar POLICE force bhi hogi'. samjahy'

DAYA: magar boss'. ye mera CHECK POINT change karnay ki wajah??? kal tum nay kaha tha kay main CHECK POINT 1 cover karunga aur tum 2!!! tou aaj ye!!!

Here I didn't find any difference in the position

After this DAYA covers check point 1and when ACP ask

ACP: wesay ABHIJEET tum nay DAYA ka CHECK POINT kyun change kiya tha???

ABHIJEET: Sir mujhay khaber mili thi kay CHECK POINT 1 per shayed koi hamla ho' is liyey'.

Here I don't think that ABHIJEET will appoint DAYA at the position where a known danger…… that to by changing his position

WAITING for your next creation…… Good Luck

Prady

hmmmmmmmmm..... THANX alot DEBA..... nahi yaar cz ab jo 2ND story aayeygi na wo.... wahein say start hogi jahan ye wali end hui hay.....
main nay 2ND story ki opening pehlay likh di thi.... i said earlier that i lost my focus on that in middle.... to us story jo abhi market mein aayii nahi hay.... to connect it with this one last spell aisa dena paray.....
now i hope U understand.....
thanx alot buddy.... very quick responce.... WOW....

thanx alot PRADY.... that U xtract time from UR tough sstudy skedule.... n really i m so HONORED that READERS read stories with such concern....
sorry buddy.... i think.... its an TYPING MISTAKE...... now i shuffle it... but zabardast.... i think U also have an HAWK EYE like ACP Sir....😆

hey ur stories plays a role of mind refreshment in my studies..... And about concentration i think its a quality of CAs :) ..... I try to hawk eyes like ACP but not able to :(..... Pl Add this story in GD production house list... Good luck for new creation

Prady

yup.... CA's have so much SHARP EYES n MIND too..... hahahha
ya sure... add in LIST too.....
thanx buddy.....