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Posted: 14 years ago
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1. the duo do not really have such emotional talks
2. the scenes involving all the romance hints are not really like fw's cid. not the cid, the original cid, that we love.
3. the duo are not physical when in duty. what they do as frnds we never see, and thats the charm we love. their physical touches are too dostana.
4. ALSO ABHIJEET-DAYA WOULD NEVER EVER SLAP EACH OTHER.

"we all like the fact that you are trying to write nice stories, but it is all too sentimental and there's no investigation. A couple of stories like this might have been fine, but you seem to be writing the same type of stories week after week. Could you please focus on the case rather than senti dialogues and scenes which make the readers uncomfortable? CID is a crime series and not a k-serial. Pls do not PM US in this matter".
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Suhaani I totally agree with your opinion
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey GD
I just like ur all stories.... So sorry for late commenting..... But today when i read suhaani.cid's comments i can not stop my self.....

Hey SUHAANI.CID pl don't take it personaly but i just want to clearify that u r commenting ur own opinion then do not use we as I love the stories written by GD.
There can be differance in opinion. I am a guy and i never feel any dostana in GD stories.... Don't mind but u also introduce a new character similar to ur name in ur story and relate it to abhi's personal life.
Its ok when u write ur story u can bend it in any manner.
I m sorry if u feel bad but just feel ur comment so harsh and relating to every reader so that i posted this. And u post same at end of each GD STORIES unnecessary.
U should understand that this type of comments may become a reasone for nervesness of writer.

GD U R DOING A GREAT WORK
WAITING FOR UR NEXT STORY KEEP IT UP
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
then u want to see such scenes in cid? wah!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@SUHAANI.CID
its ur own opinion nd ur eyes who sees DOSTANA in GD stories.....but there all about TRUE FRIENDSHIP which bonds two SOULS not BODIES as u mentioned........
but plz dont mind u herself introduce a character SUHANI in ur own stories whom u shown ist niece of ASHA but later u introduce her as niece of ABHIJEET........ hows possible????????
u totally create FILMY DRAMA in ur stories.............

but m EXTREMILY SORRY GUY..

how u could CRITICISE another writer by using such harsh SHARP, HARD words ......ha CHEAP word like DOSTANA.........
we all here sincere nd mature READERS.........
please dont destroy nd spoil the atmosphere by using such CHEAP WORDS........
SORRY but i could not remain myself silent at all............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
who the hell i m to say wht FW should do in there stories if i didn't like i ll put of my tv or if i like it i ll increase there trp and once again y u r concern about my opinion u have ur! U express it. But while criticising u should consider writters mind.
And y u use we? Isn't it consider all the readers? Or u think that u r the only person who under stand the stories in a write way?
Harsh words pinch than any thing else in the world dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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listen. am not harsh. everyone has the right to criticise, okay? and there are some members who wud agree wt me. i am speaking on their behalf. and mind u, they are some of the popular members here. so dont think everyone likes the too-emotional scenes of this writer.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Some peoples r so childish and self centered. They don't have any TAMIS to talk with others
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaani.cid

listen. am not harsh. everyone has the right to criticise, okay? and there are some members who wud agree wt me. i am speaking on their behalf. and mind u, they are some of the popular members here. so dont think everyone likes the too-emotional scenes of this writer.


dear i agree u have right to criticise but remember u have no authority to play with feelings of others.......oh u r senior member but there no any sign of u seniority .......seniors guide there unior in correct nd responsible way not try to insult them in front of all.....if u had any problem then u free to PM her nd gave her ur dolorus opinions............
Edited by Shivani24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Relax friends.. plz dont stop this..
iam not supporting anyone of u, iam supporting IF here..
Suhaani sorry to say this but u sounded a little bit harsh.. u can say all this by giving a PM to GD.. no need to say the samething at the end of all his stories.. And onething, even i dont digest the too-senti scenes at times which were un-realistic.. but ill just ignore it and enjoy the remaining part.. its just his style of writing.. he is trying to portray the friendship between DUO which he had in mind.. if u dont like then just ignore it. dont open his stories.. there are many beautiful threads in this forum which we can njoy.. u can continue wid those..
And Shivani and abhi.daya, i kow u are very much upset but friends suhaani is a senior and one of the most active member of this forum.. we just cant talk to her in this manner.. u can clarify him by saying ur feelings with cool mind..
IF is to make friends, so make frienship..

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