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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ moonlight5
i respect ur words nd try to myself remain calm but u see how she posting these in every GD STORIES........nd also she opened a new thread for dis.......she is trying to create useless isuue than how i tolerate.......if she has any problem she can avoid her stories........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey moonlight
I respect the senior members of this forum a lot. They keep this forum very clean and neet. And when i first give my opinion i use sorry at many stages and stay polite. I burst out when suhaani.cid use harsh worlds against me too. I agree i m not active on this forum. But i like this forum as every one respect each other.
I once again say sorry to all members but wrong is wht wrong....
U can not just insult any one in open ear by saying 'u just shut up. I m right as i m a senior here'
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey GD
Just want to say take critics also in joyfull way as u take 'LIKES' and don't even think to stop writing there r many peoples who r waiting for ur new creations including ur STORIES. :-)
Wishing best for ur all future creations.....

Prady
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys and girls, pls cool down. I had to put some imp work on hold for this issue. When someone writes a story they should be prepared to take some criticism. Suhaani wrote what she felt. @suhaani, u cud've posted ur opinion in one thread. Pls stop this heated argument. Otherwise I will hv to close this thread.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Why are you all fighting ? Thats my job ... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok .... Was silently reading all posts and I feel it's high time I interfere .... Look GD ... you're an active part of the CID forums & I appreciate your presence here ... It's nice that you like to write stories & share it too ... Now coming to what Suhaani wrote .... I agree with her ... Look it's not that you wrote bad stories but a change is never bad right ?? You write a certain style of stories ... Which are in your opinion good .... But maybe it does at times get OTT !!! look I know you're good with emotional segments and all .... Maybe taking suggestion from those who criticize can make the investigation too equally interesting !!!! Coming to what Suhaani said about Abhi-Daya slapping each other ... I've not read the story but the fact that you showed them slapping makes me feel apprehensive ... Would you like to see Abhi-Daya slapping each other even if it's a plan ??? I'm sure you wouldn't ... Right ??? When writing a story it becomes necessary that you cater to everything that all readers want !!! Some may like emotional view some may not ... & it become your duty & rather enhances your story when you blend both the opinionsin a correct ratio .... Try and involve all opinions if possible !!!
Success always comes after learning in a hard way .... What we are saying right now might sound like severe critisicm but it would always help you in the long run .. I've written stories & have also got severe critisicm at times .... So I try and learn from them and attempt something that all might like ... Too much of emotion or too much of investigation foes at times spoil a story .... You can blend them perfectly .. You know to give dome duo moments you needn't get OTT... even a small moment like duo getting down the qualis or even a casual chit chat small & crisp is a moment !!! You can have them !!!! It's a honest suggestion GD !!! Try not to get so emotional with stories ... It does spoil the fun !!! If you blend this perfectly ... You'll get more readers and that's good right ?? Take critical positively !!

Coming to those who felt suhaani was being rude !!! I was a new writer in the forum .... I was critisized too .... But it helped me do better .... Suhaani is one of the senior most members of the forums and an experiences IF writers !!! She does deserve to be given respect doesn't she ??? Her criticism which sounded harsh to you now ... Might simply help GD in the future .... Right now he's hit you people as readers ... If he writes according to what suhaani suggested he might get us senior members also as readers right ?? So it's for his better .. & please do not be rude to such a senior member of the forum !!! That is being rude !! Hope you people understand !!

Coming to IF .... look everyone IF is a place to interact ,get to know your show & the show lovers better ... Let's not spoil the ambienceof this place but getting into arguments !!!! Let's work together for the betterment of the forum !!!

GD one thing I'd strictly like to mention .... Don't take me wrong but take this as a senior members suggestion !! You have doubts I realize ... But we have 2 threads here where doubts can be cleared !!! Also the general thread .... Ask there .... Please do not pm me,Vis or anyone else for every small problem !!! It is a bit problematic at times !!! Hope you understand !!?

I've sweetly answered everyone !!! Hoping I've not been rude to any !!! Please coordinate & hopefully this ends now and no more fights on IF !!! those who agree with me ... Including both GD supported & Suhaani supporters like this post if you agree & let's end this here
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dada
nice sweet n cute sory........plz jo hua bhul jao......here all love nd really like ur every creation........
please come back........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
I hve a suggstn......

Be as cool as CID_HD.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
I agree with @moonlight , @ Visrom & Bhavna.........
I am new to this forum & may be I must not comment on some senior member but it is very bad yaar to see all the CIDians r fighting with each other....

Suhaani....I also feel u may be little harsh...u can express ur feelings in another way...I think u r very angry with this kind of emotional scenes as u r too attached with CID...believe me I also & I know CID is a crime serial....but u r a senior member of this forum & ur approach should be different from others...u r a good writer & u can criticize others but in a different manner...it's a small suggestion...dnt take it otherwise...

Now Gadhadada....without criticism no one can do better....CID is a crime serial & u must remember it...we all r emotionally attached with CID that's why we dnt accept such scenes as those scenes r too much emotional....may be this is ur style but it somehow deviates our CID...dnt change our CID...I always appreciate ur works becoz apart from this ur idea is good......
Come back soon...dnt be disheartened....give lessons from this & improve ur story.....Plz dnt stop writing.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry i couldn't read this earlier.........was a little bit busy......... anyways, fabulous story..........last part was too awesome😉......loved it.😃....very nicely written.... 😊

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