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Debasree

@debasree04

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: gadhadada

hmmmmmmmmm..... THANX alot DEBA..... nahi yaar cz ab jo 2ND story aayeygi na wo.... wahein say start hogi jahan ye wali end hui hay.....
main nay 2ND story ki opening pehlay likh di thi.... i said earlier that i lost my focus on that in middle.... to us story jo abhi market mein aayii nahi hay.... to connect it with this one last spell aisa dena paray.....
now i hope U understand.....
thanx alot buddy.... very quick responce.... WOW....

Ok ...I understand.....Actually I am waiting 4 the story becoz all these stories of CIDians always make me happy & it is impossible 4 me to go to bed without reading it...

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neeme

@neeme

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Hmm.Nice Story.....i can say itt funny from the end...Over all enjoyable story.....But investigation was missing..But Nice one....

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

THANK YOU NEEME DII..... ya i knew... there was NO DETECTION.... cz my DETECTION buttons were at DORMAT position.... so when any time the favourable conditions will be back.... they turned from RESTING to ACTIVE positions... tab tak yehi BORING STORIES bear karni parein gi....😭

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

buhat SHUKRIYA.....
CHAMP and POOJA................

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Hasini

@Hasini_smile

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Nice story dada..

every thing was fine, but i cant digest the scene where abhi sir slaps daya sir.. i dont say thts not good, but i just cant digest. thts it..

Someone slapping my hero is too much for me tht too when the slap came from his best friend😔

Other than tht ur story is too good as usual..👍🏼

keep up the gr8 work..

Waiting for ur VM😊

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.Crystal.

@.Crystal.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Awesome and really fantastic ........and it was really funny too, especially the last part 😆
I really enjoyed reading it....great work as usual 👍🏼
Waitin' 4 ur next story!!

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

thanx alot.... CID_HD and NOTEPAD.... buhat SHUKRIYA......

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anonymous7

@anonymous7

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Nice Story!😃😃😃

The Ending Was Just................... Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

bundles of THANX.... DK.....
ya the nxt story will move from that LAST PHASE......

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

sorry.... ya MOONLIGHT......
yaar BETIJI.... yaqeen karo.... mujhay bhi buhat BURA laga.... U cud imagine... U just READ and felt PAIN... wat amout of PAIN my HEART felt....
but thanx for LIKING the STORY.....

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