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Hii Guys

I am really sorry for this much delay in update but I was very busy because of diwali preparations.

So continuing the story,

Lakshmi pov

Suddenly What happened to Mr. Oberoi? Why he behaving like he is jealous. Why he is playing with me like I am a doll. No Lakshmi you have to show him that you are not weak girl. You have to stay strong Lakshmi.

With that thought she leaves the cabin.

After coming out of cabin, Lakshmi see dev and priya.

Priya:(Non stop) What happened jahnavi? Why did Rishi Sir called you? Did he said something?

Dev: Let her speak priya.

Lakshmi :He didn't said anything just like he is giving me Neelam Aunty Message.

Priya:Ok

On the other hand

Rishi pov

Thanks to that guy I realized my real love, my love for Lakshmi.

Note: I am using a scene from old show name beintehaa, in which the hero realized his love for his wife with some changes.

Flashback

Rishi was driving his car on a lonely road. After sometime a person asked him for a lift . He gives him lift.

Rishi: Where you want to go uncle?

Man: Please drop me on graveyard. My wife is waiting for me there. he don't like to wait.

Rishi: on graveyard. I mean its a strange place to meet.

Man:(teary eye)My wife is no more.
She died 7 year ago.

Rishi become shocked and said sorry.

Man see Rishi face and he understood that he is confused about something.

Man:Can I ask something?

Rishi:Sure uncle

Man : You are confused regarding that whom you love.

Rishi: How do you know?

Man: I have seen the world more than you son .I know you're confused by seeing your face. Graveyard is very far. Did I toldy love story to you.

Rishi: Please tell me uncle.

Man: I had my beautiful wife but I start having an extra marital affair with a girl who work in my office.I start to ignore my wife badly. I used to think that I used to love that girl.
After some month my wife got to know about my affair and she becomes broken. She confronted me and I said I love that girl and she cried . She leave me and drink poison. After her death I got to know that I always loved her but my realisation was too late I lost my wife forever. But after I always go to her grave woth her favorite things.

Rishi become shocked and thought that uncle story is very similar to my story

Man: If you want to know that whom you love.

Rishi nodded.

Man:Ok stop the car and become relaxed. Close your eyes.

Rishi does the as same.

Man: Now thought that whom you want to smile always

Rishi sees Lakshmi face

Man:Whom you want protect from the evil world

again Rishi sees Lakshmi face.

Man:Whom you can't see crying

again Rishi sees Lakshmi face

Man: With whom you want to share your happiness.

again Rishi sees Lakshmi face

Man:Whom you love the most and want to grow old with?

again Rishi sees Lakshmi face.Rishi become shocked and opened his eye.

Man:Whom face you see.

Rishi: My wife face.

Man: Thats means you love your wife. not your girlfriend.

Rishi : Yes uncle you are right I loved my wife, her innocence, her pure heart, her selfless nature, her everything. Thank you uncle for making me realize my love for her.
I will never let her go away from me.

Rishi drop that man to graveyard and leaves.

Flashback end

Rishi:I will never let you leave me my wifey, my Lakshmi, my sweetheart. I will inform the same to malishka and will apologize to her.

After sometime everyone start to leave.

Priya: Sorry Jahnavi Today I didn't come with my scooty.

Lakshmi :Why

Priya: woh my scooty have some issue.

Lakshmi:ok

Dev: O will drop you both

Priya(smilingly)Ok

Lakshmi:Ok

They are about to sit in the car just then Rishi shouted STOPPPPP.Everyone turn back amd see rishi standing there. Priya and lalshmi look at him angrily.

Rishi :(jealously) Miss Jahnavi My mom called you at my home. So you will come with me in my car.

Lakshmi : I will manage sir and I will come on time. Don't worry.

Rishi:Its my order miss jahnavi. you have to come with me. Did you understand.

Priya look at rishi with lots of hate. and dev smile as he know that rishi is jealous of him.

Ayush signal dev to go and dev and priya leaves.

Lakshmi:(angrily) Why are you doing this Mr. Oberoi? I was going with friends. What is your problem? O even telled you that I will come on time then why you forced me to come with you.

Rishi:You are my wife sweetheart. When your husband is here do you should go back to your house with your husband not with your friends. And remember that, I don't like your male friends. So please stay away from that dev.

Lakshmi (very angrily) I told you thousands time that I am not your wife. I will make more male friends. I will go with dev . You don't have any right on me.YOU UNDERSTANDDD MR. OBEROI.

Rishi become too jealous and angry.

Rishi:(angrily) I AM YOUR HUSBAND AND I HAVE EVERY RIGHT ON YOU AND DON'T FORCE ME TO SHOW THAT. I WILL MAKE SURE YOU STAY AWAY FROM THAT DEV. YOU ARE JUST MINE ONLY MINE. REMEMBER THAT ALWAYS.
Lakshmi start to walk away but rishi carry in his arm and make her sit in his car and drive away.

Ayush see all this and smile.

Ayush pov

So finally bhai realized his love for Lakshmi. How jealous and possessive bhai become for Lakshmi. This great news I will tell to shalu, mamaji, nani. Just a second to shalu,Why I want to share my happiness with shalu. Why I always thought about her? Why I always want to see her happy? Why I can't see her crying? What is happening to me? Did I love her? Ayush what are you thinking?Just go to home.

Ayush leaves.

Rishi, Lakshmi and Ayush come home.

Neelam: Lakshmi, Rishi get ready fast. Pooja will start in an hour.

Lakshmi and Rishi :Ok aunty/mom.

Trio leaves to get ready.

Lakshmi saree



Her look


Lakshmi comes downstairs and become awestruck by seeing Lakshmi, she is looking like a fairy in that saree.

Malishka comes there and become jealous seeing Lakshmi beauty. Rishi sees Malishka and goes behind her to inform her that he loves Lakshmi not her but Lakshmi see him and thought that he is going to spend some alone time with malishka and goes away from there.

Malishka comes to karishma room and start pouring his venom against Lakshmi .

Malishka : Lakshmi is just taking everything away from me. Everyone is just praising Lakshmi too much. Even rishi was staring at Lakshmi with so much love.

Rishi was hearing everything.

Karishma:You have to do something otherwise everything will be out of our hand. You love Rishi so much. Right.

Malishka: Right Aunty but not more than myself. I don't love rishi. I am just with him because he is rich. One of the most successful industrialists .He is the one who love me more than himself.

Karishma and Rishi get shocked.

Malishka: But that Lakshmi He takes away my rishi from me.

Rishi:(coming inside) I am not your Malishka Bedi. I was never your,I will never your. You know what I was feeling guilty that I done wrong with you. I feel that you love me but you are behind my money. But Now I feel blessed that Lakshmi came in my life as angel. I love my Lakshmi.

Malishka and Karishma become shocked.

Malishka: What are you saying Rishi? How can you fall for Lakshmi. You just love me.

Rishi:You are wrong Malishka I love my Lakshmi and I don't think that I need to explain you how did I fall for her ?

Malishka :How can you do this with me Rishi. You know how much I love you that I kept Karwa Chauth fast for you and you said you don't love me at all.

Rishi: Oh fast

Rishi show malishka photo in which she is eating food in restaurant.

Rishi(angrily): Just leave my house otherwise I have to show your real face to media and remember that your business is running because of me if you don't leave from here in 2 mins then I will ruin your business. Remember that .

Karishma tries to interrupt but Rishi stop her

Rishi:Bua please don't take her side otherwise I will inform to Mom and then you know what will mom do.

Karishma become silent and Malishka knows that now her game is finished .

Malishka leaves from there.

Rishi gives Karishma a look and leave.

In hall

Shalu, Bani,Rano ,neha and neha's father come there.
Shalu look


Ayush comes there and get awestruck by seeing Shalu.

Ayush comes near Shalu and tries to talk to her. Shalu is still upset with OBEROI but lakshmi inform her that Ayush support her a lot.So Shalu smile at Ayush .

Ayush:You are looking so beautiful today.

Shalu become shocked as Ayush praise her for the first time.

Shalu:Thank you Ayush for supporting my di .

Ayush: She is my bhabhi too. So don't worry . Can we become friends?

Shalu: (Smiles) Yaa friends.

Rano called Shalu so Shalu left .

After sometime Moon appeared and all ladies including lakshmi and neelam does Pooja.Rishi and virender broke Lakshmi and neelam fast respectively.

Virender gift neelam a kundan necklace

Necklace



Rishi gives lakshmi a diamond necklace.

Lakshmi: (sarcastically)Oh so this is my fast'price.Right Mr.Oberoi.

Rishi:You are misunderstanding me lakshmi. This is just a gift nothing more.

Lakshmi:I am not fool Mr.Oberoi.I understand things very well. You just love Malishka and you feel guilty for me that why you are doing this. I don't trust you any more.

Rishi: I love you damn it. I don't love that Malishka. Please trust me I Love you so much.

Lakshmi:Trust you broke my trust very badly. I will never trust you back and keep your necklace with yourself. When you can't love Malishka, who is with you from many years then how can you be mine haa. It will better if I was married to Balwinder. Atleast he is genuine infront of me even if he is obsessed with me.

Rishi(angrily) broke a nearby vase :Remember one thing Lakshmi always that you are mine and will always mine. I will never let you go. I love you a lot my jaan.

Blood start to come out from his hand.

Thats it for today.

Thank you so much for reading my story.

Suggestions are welcome always .

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Please upload the next part it's very interesting how will lakshmi react so please upload fast please please...........

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Part 12




Hii guys,
Without wasting much time, let's get started.

Lakshmi pov (crying)

Why Rishi Why are you making a joke of my love? Why are you playing with my feelings? I still love you and want to believe you but I am afraid of trusting you again. Today you injured yourself and I can't see you in pain but I can't show my love and care for you. If I will show then you again will betray me and that I can't afford.

Her though was interrupted by door opening voice. She saw Rishi standing there with his bleeding hand.

Lakshmi: Don't you have manners Mr. Oberoi. How can you enter in my room like that? Please treat your hand first.

Rishi:You are forgetting Mrs.Oberoi that I am your husband and I don't need to ask permission to enter in your room.

Lakshmi was about to say something but Rishi stop her

Rishi:I know now you will say that I am not your wife. But let me correct you ,you are my wife legally.And this wound, I will not treat this wound till you don't do my bandage.

Lakshmi:I will not do your bandage and we don't have any connection.

Rishi:We have Lakshmi, we have many connection but biggest one is of heart. We love each other.

Hearing this Lakshmi got really angry

Lakshmi:(angrily) How disgusting person you are Mr. Oberoi. You want to play with two girls at a same time. I used to thought that you are such a nice person but you are just disgusting. Firstly you used to say me that you love me, you want to marry me then I got to know that you love Malishka, and now you are saying you love me. Did you know even the meaning of love?

Rishi: No Sweetheart I am not playing with two girls at a same time. I love you only. I know I have an affair with Malishka but I break up with her today. I only love you. I got to know the meaning of love after meeting you my sweetheart. I know love is selfless, you live for other's happiness, You like what he likes and many more. I really love you. I also know you still love me.

Lakshmi: No Mr. Oberoi I don't love you at all. You know what I used to think I am blessed that I got a husband like you but I am unluckiest to have you in my life, I wish I have gotten a husband like Dev. He respect everyone by heart, he did not pretend like you. He really cares for everyone. He is my best friend and I am blessed to have a friend like him.

Hearing this Rishi got dangerously angry. He comes toward her in anger with red eyes and he held her by waist too closely.

rishi:(dangerously) JUST REMEMBER ONE THING SWEETHEART YOU JUST MINE AND I CAN'T SEE YOU WITH ANYONE AND IF SOMEONE TRIES TO SNATCH YOU AWAY FROM ME THEN I WILL KILL HIM WITH MY OWN HANDS. I LOVE YOU SWEETHEART. AND STAY AWAY FROM THAT DEV BEDI I DON'T LIKE HIM AT ALL.I AM SAYING THIS FOR LAST TIME. ITS MY LAST WARNING. AND YOU ARE COMING BACK TO OUR ROOM TODAY ITSELF. ITS FINAL.

Lakshmi got really scared seeing his red eyes and his anger but still managed to saying angrily.

Lakshmi :No Mr. Oberoi I am not going to listen your non sense and I will not going to return in that room. I will do what I want to do. I will talk to Dev as much as I want. Even I will wear a pink outfit as dev want me to.

Hearing this Rishi anger crossed all his limits and he punch his bleeding hand in Lakshmi dressing mirror and now blood was coming out like hell.

Lakshmi (forgetting her anger) become worried and take his hand in her and tell what is this madness rishi. See how much blood is coming out. Get it treat it fast otherwise it will become septic. Rishi angrily take his hand away and said No I am not going to treat my hand .Why are you caring for me, you don't love me, you don't want to come back in our room. Then why will I listen you when you don't accept my wish.

Lakshmi seeing his bleeding hand said Ok I will come with you in your room but get treat you hand first.

Rishi:Ok but you have to do my bandage.

Lakshmi agreed and does his bandage.

Lakshmi:I am coming back to your room but don't think that I have forgiven you. I will do whatever I want.

Rishi thinking
I make you agreed to come back in our room now I will make you fall in love with me again sweetheart.

Lakshmi shifted in Rishi Room unwillingly. Lakshmi start going to Sofa to sleep.

Rishi:Where are you going Lakshmi?

Lakshmi:Going to sleep Mr. Oberoi.

Rishi: First of all don't call me Mr. Oberoi. Secondly Bed is here then why you are going to sofa.

Lakshmi:For both of your questions there is one answer that I don't regard you as my husband. So When you are not my husband,so how can we share the same bed and when I don't know you then what should I call you. Actually when I don't know someone then I call him bhaiya. Can I call you Bhaiya Mr. Oberoi?

Rishi:(shocked and shouting)NOOOO no need to call me bhaiya, Mr. Oberoi is Ok for me.

Lakshmi goes to sofa just then her phone peep up. Lakshmi see the phone and smile. Rishi saw this and ask her why is she smiling so much.

Lakshmi :It is none of your business Mr. Oberoi .

Then her phone ring, Lakshmi pick up the call.

Dev:Jaan I hope I didn't disturb you.

Lakshmi:No Dev Not at all.

Hearing Dev name Rishi get angry and murmurs he didn't left my wife in night too,he is still disturbing us.

Lakshmi :Yaa I will surely wear a pink outfit.

Lakshmi:Ok bye.

Rishi:Why will you wear pink clothes?

Lakshmi:Because Dev asked me.

Rishi:You will not wear pink you will wear blue.

Lakshmi:Why blue.

Rishi:Because I like you in blue dress.

Lakshmi:Why I will wear you favorite color clothes.

Rishi: Because I am your husband sweetheart.

Lakshmi:But I don't regard you as my husband Mr. Oberoi.

Rishi:(come towards her, held her wrist and pull her towards himself and angrily) Then what is Dev to you and are you wearing his favorite color clothes.

Lakshmi:What are you doing? Just leave me. Its paining me.

Rishi:And when you talk to that dev and praise him, obey to him. It's pain me, here pointing towards his heart. Just tell what is he to you.

Lakshmi:(takes her hand out of his grip and angrily) He is my best friend and I will wear a pink outfit for sure.

Lakshmi goes to sleep. Rishi think something and smiles widely.

Next Morning

Lakshmi opens her wardrobe to take out clothes and found the wardrobe fill with blue color outfit.

Lakshmi become shocked and check his wardrobe again but find blue clothes.


Its for a imagination just imagine traditional clothes.

Rishi comes there and smile. Lakshmi turn and see Rishi there and said:You have done this naa.

Rishi:Yes sweetheart now you have to wear a blue outfit.

Lakshmi:No,Never I will wear a pink dress.

She goes to Ahana and devika room and asked them for a pink dress and they inform her that they have only blue outfit in their wardrobes.

Devika:Don't know who put them in our wardrobe.

Ahana:I asked everyone and all have blue dress only in their wardrobe. Bhabhi it happen with you also naa.
Lakshmi nod and she understand that this is done by Rishi only.

Lakshmi goes back to her room and asked rishi.
Lakshmi:Just to make me wear a blue outfit. You put blue clothes in everyone's wardrobe.

Rishi:Yes sweetheart, You are not listening to me. So I have to do it as I know you will ask ahana, devika or someone else for pink dress thats why. If you want to get late for hotel then you can wait for a pink dress.
He smiles and leave.

Lakshmi thought for some minutes and then pick up blue saree and go to freshen up.

Lakshmi thought
Today you have win Mr. Oberoi but next time I will never let you win.

Lakshmi look and her saree



She comes down stair. Rishi saw her and get mesmerized by her Rishi sign 👌and message her looking very beautiful sweetheart.

Lakshmi send her 😡 .

She comes downstair.

Neelam:Who can put blue clothes in everyone's wardrobe and he or she also shut the CCTV cameras, so that we cannot catch him.

Ahana:If We found then he will gone.

Lakshmi look at him but he just smile like a fool at her.

That's it for today.

Let me know that You guys like today part or not.

Ignore my mistakes and suggestions are welcome always.

Please do comments because comments give me motivation to write more.

Thank you for reading my story.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome update… ❤️❤️❤️

I hope she stops by at a store on her way to work and wears pink outfit …

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Realy awesome what happens next don't know but Rishi's cleverness and lakshmi ' stubbornness really something liked the part awesome 😍🥰😍😍👍👍👍👍👍

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Originally posted by: chandujojo

Realy awesome what happens next don't know but Rishi's cleverness and lakshmi ' stubbornness really something liked the part awesome 😍🥰😍😍👍👍👍👍👍



Thank you for sure 😊

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Hii guys

sorry for the delay but I was busy with some work

So let's continue without wasting your time.

Neelam:Who can do this, Who can put all blue clothes in our wardrobe.

Lakshmi see Rishi smiling like a fool. Seeing his smile she get angry.

Lakshmi:I know Aunty who have done this.

(Rishi still smiles without any worry)

Neelam:Who have done this Lakshmi?

Lakshmi:Mr.Oberoi

Neelam:What ?Why will Rishi do this?

Lakshmi:Aunty I know very well that Mr. Oberoi have done this because I refused to wear a blue outfit. So to make me wear a blue outfit he have done this.

All get shocked.

Karishma:Why will Rishi do this.Now you know that rishi loved Malishka. He don't love you at all. So what you wear doesn't make any difference to rishi. And if I trust you that rishi do this then Why will he replace the clothes of all ladies and girls.

Lakshmi: Because he knew that I will not wear a blue outfit and I will ask ahana and devika for help and take a dress of them. So he replaced all clothes.

Sonia:Why will we trust you?

Lakshmi:(mockingly) the person who cheat other can't trust others.

All get shocked but no one have the courage to say anything.

Lakshmi:But still you can ask Mr. Oberoi?

Rishi:(nodding his head and smiling ) Yes I have replaced all the clothes.

All get highly shocked.

Everyone reaction Neelam is confused, Devika, Ahana, Dadi is happy, Sonia and Karishma like what happened to him.

Lakshmi:Now you all get your answer.

Neelam:Why you did this rishi?

Rishi:Mom Lakshmi was not listening to me. I want her to wear a blue outfit but she stubbornly want to wear a pink outfit.

Dadi:Beta its her choice what she want to wear. Why will she wear a clothes of your choice.

Rishi replied instantly:Because she is my wife. You used to say wives used to follow husbands wishes, order and request.But Lakshmi doesn't follow my any.

Lakshmi:(shouting)Just remember one thing Mr. Oberoi. I am not your wife. I don't consider myself as your wife. Do you get that?

Rishi:(calmly)I think you need a reality check I am your husband. I married you with all the customs and traditions, infront of scared fire, infront of the whole world. Whole World is the witness of our relation, our marriage. You can't deny our relationship sweetheart.

Hearing Sweetheart Everyone get more shocked and sonia & Karishma get mini heart attack.

Lakshmi:(angrily and shouting)Marriage is not a joke Mr. Oberoi for me. It is a pure relation which is based on trust,love,care,friendship but in our relationship there is nothing and trust. Talking about trust to you, its waste of time. (now sarcastically) And what are you talking about our marriage, you married me infront of whole world infront of scared fire but that fire was a witness of your betrayal and whole world doesn't know your intentions. It will be far better if I was married to Balwinder. Atleast he doesn't not pretend like you. Even if he is worst person in this world, but he don't have two face like you.

Rishi feel pain and angry seeing Lakshmi outburst and can't make eye contact with Lakshmi.

Karishma:How can you talk to rishi like that. Don't forget your place.

Hearing your place, rishi get angry like hell.

Rishi:(roaring loudly) BUA YOU CAN'T TALK TO LAKSHMI LIKE THAT.EVEM IF SHE DIDN'T CONSIDER HERSELF AS MY WIFE BUT SHE IS STILL MY WIFE AND YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO INTERFERE IN OUR PERSONAL MATTERS. (Folding his hand) PLEASE STAY OUT OF IT.

Everyone become shocked because for the first time Rishi was talking to Karishma like that.

Neelam: I want to talk to you Rishi. Just come to my room right now.

Rishi:(calming himself a little) Ok

Lakshmi angrily leave for office.

In Neelam and Virender Room

Rishi knock on the door.

Neelam: Come Rishi. What are you doing Rishi. Just because Lakshmi refused to wear your favorite color, you replaced everyone clothes, even you raised voice against karishma. Why Rishi?

Rishi:(calmly)Mom I informed infront of everyone why I replaced all the clothes. I raised my voice infront of bua because she was insulting my wife and I can't bear my wife insult at any cost.

Neelam:(shocked)Your wife.Rishi you used to love Malishka and now you are saying Lakshmi is your wife. Some day before you refused to acknowledge your relation with Lakshmi. Did you have any fight with Malishka.

Rishi:Yes mom I used to love Malishka but now I don't love her anymore. I realized my love for Lakshmi. Lakshmi's innocence, her care, her love, her immense trust, her pure heart, her selfless nature make me fall in love with her. I can't live without her. If I lose her then I will die without her. She complete me. I feel very secured around her.

Rishi break down infront of Neelam for the first time in his life. Neelam realize that Rishi love Lakshmi more than his life. Now Neelam knows that she have to make everything right in his son life. Now she needs Lakshmi not for 1 year but for whole life.

Neelam:(comforting his son) Rishi I will make everything right. I will make Lakshmi agree to go back to you.

Rishi:(looking at neelam) really mom, you will make everything right. Mom now she doesn't look like my Lakshmi, my Lakshmi never have hate for me in her eyes but this Lakshmi have only hate for me. Mom I can't bear Lakshmi hate for me.

He start crying hugging his mom like a baby. Neelam start comforting his son. After some minutes

Neelam:Rishi beta, sometime wounds given by your loved ones take a lot of time to heal and sometimes it never healed. Lakshmi trust is broken by everyone. So it will take some time to heal but you have to make her realize your love by your actions by your words. But She need time and space beta. Try to understand her situation.

But I promise you I will make everything right.

Rishi:(huging his mother) Ok mom. I will do as you say.

Rishi leaves.

Neelam start to thinks now how she will make everything right.

On the other hand

Jahnavi comes to hotel . Priya and Dev see her in blue dress and her angry mood. They go to her.

Dev:Jaan What happened, you yesterday told me that you are going to wear a pink outfit then why you have wore a blue outfit.

Priya:Why are you so much angry?

Jahnavi :Sorry dev, I couldn't able wear a pink outfit because Mr. Oberoi stole my clothes.

Then she narrated whole scene to them.

Priya:(sarcastically) What the great business tycoon steal clothes in his own house.

Dev:(Smiling) But Jaan you look beautiful in every color even this color is looking very beautiful on you.

Jahnavi smile.

That is for today.

Thank you so much for reading my story.

Do comments as your comment give me motivation to write more and big sorry for the delay.

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Perfect now neelam will make them together excited keep writing I am addicted to this fiction of yours very excited keep writing 👍👍👍😍😍😍🥰🥰😘😘😘

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Originally posted by: chandujojo

Perfect now neelam will make them together excited keep writing I am addicted to this fiction of yours very excited keep writing 👍👍👍😍😍😍🥰🥰😘😘😘


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Hii guys, Sorry for the delay. Without wasting our time, let's get started.

Jahnavi smiles.

Dev: oh! I forget to tell you, today is a party at my farmhouse as today is my birthday.

Jahnavi: (smilingly) Happiest Birthday Dev. May God fulfill all your wishes.

Dev: Thank you Jaan😊.

Priya: So now we should complete our work fast, so we get free earlier. Then we can get some time to get ready.

Dev: (mockingly) Yes, you girls take a lot of time to get ready or say to become ghost 😉.

Jahnavi and Priya glares at him and he becomes afraid and leaves from there 😄.

Then Rishi comes and see Lakshmi laughing freely. Seeing her laughing whole heartily, he also become happy.
He comes to his cabin. Just then he hear a knock on the door.

Rishi: (happily) Come in.

Dev enter smilingly. Seeing Dev, Rishi again get angry.

Rishi: (angrily) What happened Mr. Dev.

Dev understand the reason behind his anger.

Dev: (smilingly) Sir, I have come to invite you for my birthday party. I will feel very happy if you will come to my birthday party.

Rishi is already jealous of him. So he don't want to go to his birthday party.

Rishi:(fake smilingly) Happy Birthday Dev

Dev:(seeing rishi fake smile, still smilingly) Thank you Sir

Rishi:But I can't attend your birthday party because I have a meeting today.

Dev: But today there is no meeting in the hotel.

Rishi: Yes, but my meeting is in another hotel.

Dev: Ok sir.

Rishi leaves the hotel remembering her mother words that Lakshmi need time to heal.

Everyone complete their work early.

In evening,

Rishi entered in Oberoi Mansion and bumped into Ayush.

Rishi: ( angrily) Why are you in such a hurry?

Ayush: (hurrily) Sorry Bhai, I am late. I have to pick Shalu, after picking up shalu I have to come back here and then Jahnavi sorry sorry Lakshmi will go with us to Dev Birthday.

Rishi: (questioningly) Just a second why you're going to pick up shalu and why you all are going to dev birthday party.

Ayush: Woh bhai I and shalu are talking in the restaurant area and dev see both of us together, So he invite both of us and Lakshmi is his best friend, so he will invite Lakshmi for sure.

Rishi start to get jealous but to divert his attention.

Rishi: (teasingly) You both are together, but you guys used to fight a lot, now you both are together. Did you love each other?

Ayush get shy and nodded his head and leaves.

Rishi smiles.

Rishi P.O.V

Atleast now I get a good news. They love each other. My brother get his happiness but Will Lakshmi accept their relationship? Will Lakshmi forgive me?

Suddenly He remembers something.

Oh God! Lakshmi is going to Dev"s Birthday Party. No I have to do something.

Just then he see Lakshmi in a blackgown and he get mesmerized.

Lakshmi Outfit



Seeing Rishi, Lakshmi left from there silently.

She comes outside just then ayush car comes there.

Shalu Outfit


Ayush Outfit



Lakshmi: Shalu you are looking so beautiful today.

Shalu:Not more than you di.

Ayush: You both are complimenting each other but no one gives me a compliment.

Lakshmi:You are also looking good.

Shalu: (smilingly) You are looking really handsome.

Shayush get shy.

Lakshmi see both of them and think for a minute and understand that they love each other.

Lakshmi: (FAKE ANGER) YOU BOTH LOVE EACH OTHER 😠

Both get afraid and tried to say something.

LAKSHMI: (STILL WITH FAKE ANGER) ONLY SAY YES OR NO.

shayush: (afraidly) Yes.

Lakshmi smiles.

Lakshmi: Ayush please, promise me you will keep my sister happy and you will not do anything like Mr. Oberoi did with me.

Shalu become emotional, Ayush understand Lakshmi fear.

Ayush: I promise, I will keep Shalu always Happy.

Lakshmi smiles bit it was heard by rishi. He get angry on himself for hurting his love.

Lakshmi:From how many days this is going?

Shalu: (shyly) Yesterday he promised me, today I accepted his proposal and dev saw us together and he invited us.

Trio smile and leave.

Thats it for today.

A BIG SORRY FOR THE SHORT CHAPTER AND DELAY. AS I INFORM EARLIER THAT I WAS BUSY BECAUSE OF FEW WEDDINGS IN MY HOUSE SO I DIDN'T GET TIME TO WRITE THE STORIES. SO PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR THE INCONVENIENCE CAUSED BY ME.

AGAIN A BIG SORRY GUYS.

AS I SAID MANY TIMES, SUGGESTIONS ARE WELCOME ALWAYS. DO COMMENTS. GIVE YOUR OPINIONS.

THANKS FOR READING MY STORY.

BYE GUYS.

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