Rishmi ff part 17updated on page 10 (completed)

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Its start when lakshmi see rishi and maliskha behind the curtain and the same drama occurs as maliskha's imagination but rishi didn't shout or slapped maliskha.

Lakshmi:I didn't knew that you all betraying me and why? What all of you did this to me.

Ayush and virender enter with whole family

Virender hung his head in shame. Ayush, Ahana, Devika,and dadi feels guilty.

Ayush : lakshmi I will tell you the truth. Rishi bhai have a dosh in his kundali and your kundali can save him from his dosh. So.

ayush hung his head and again start to say.

so he married you for one year.

All the family became silent and rishi look at her with guilt.

Lakshmi feels all his world have crushed down in a second.

Lakshmi silently go to the garden.

Shalu and bani became very angry and stare at rishi angrily and leaves from there to lakshmi .

Lakshmi was silently crying and remember his parents.

Lakshmi looking at the sky

Lakshmi: Why papaji why mein toh rishi se pyaar karti thi phir mere saath yeh kyu huya rishi ne mujhe dhoka kyu diya? and cry non stoppily.

shalu and bani comes and tell her to come back to there chacha home.

Lakshmi thinks for sometime and tell them that she can't go back. She can't become selfish.Shalu and bani don't agree with her. So she give them her (lakshmi) kasam to go back.

Shalu and Bani goes from there.

Lakshmi come back to house and rishi look at her guilty. Lakshmi comes to virender and said : bauji I respect you a lot but you broke it but still I regard you as my father. Virender becames emotional and guilty. Ayush also become guilty . Sonia ,Karishma, malishka roll their eyes and neelam stood as always emotionless.

Ahana, Devika, Dadi also feel sad hearing lakshmi' statement .

Lakshmi continued So I have decided I will stay in this house because you (virender) want me to save rishi. But I will stay as rishi'wife for world but this relationship does not exist for me anymore. Rishi feels a sudden pain and look at lakshmi in shock.

whole family looks shocked except karishma, maliskha and sonia.

Lakshmi: So I will stay In a separate room and I want to do a job. So I can afford my expenses.

Rishi and Virender becomes more guilty .and other remain as I above mentioned.

Lakshmi:Its my conditions to live in this house of yours.

Rishi: I am so sorry lakshmi. I know I hurt you so much my sorry can't less your pain and my guilt . But if you can then please forgive me .

Lakshmi: Sorrryy? How easily you said sorry but your sorry can't erase my pain. And for what you are saying sorry. for marrying me? or for betraying me? or for playing with my emotions? or for playing with a pure relation like marriage for what you are saying sorry huh? for what you are saying sorry.

Lakshmi start crying and fall on her knees. Ahana and devika comes to her make her sit on sofa and gives her water to drink.

Rishi feels very angry on himself seeing lakshmi condition .

After seeing so much Virender said Ok lakshmi. if you want to do job you can.

Rishi and Neelam look at him questionlying .

You can do job in my hotel in which a receptionist post is vacant.

lakshmi: but I don't want to work under rishi.

Virender :That hotel is managed by ayush. Rishi comes there only two or three days in a week and that too for 3-4 hours.

Lakshmi :But I want a job on my qualifications not on any favors.

Virender: I am not doing any favour on you lakshmi. You are very suitable for the job.

Rishi and family stood silently. Rishi feels a pain because now lakshmi dont want to stay with rishi anymore. It hurts him to the core unknowingly.

Lakshmi :Ok I will do the job in your hotel.

Precap: jealous rishi

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Lakshmi: I will do the job.

Karishma: But bhai what will people say when Oberoi'bahu will do a receptionist job.

Neelam:Yes Karishma is right.

Virender: I don't care what anyone says. My children happiness is more important to me.

Neelam: But what people say is important for me 😡

Lakshmi: As I said I consider bauji as my father. So I will not do anything that leads to bauji insult. So I have decided I will do job by changing my name. As no one in that hotel knows that I am rishi's wife. (looking at rishi with hate). My new name will be Jahnavi Arora. Bauji, Ayush do you have any problem with it?

Ayush and Virender nod their head negatively.

Lakshmi: Does Neelam Aunty or Karishma mam do you have any problem?

Neelam And Karishma unwilling agree to Lakshmi words.

Rishi feels too guilty and unknown pain but he doesn't know the reason behind his feelings.

Malishka is more than happy that now onwards they don't have to do drama.

Malishka: I think your (lakshmi) drama for today is enough. I am very tired so I am going to my house.

Lakshmi stare at her angrily and said I think everything are drama for you. Because the person insults a relation like marriage. What can be expected from that person.

Maliksha :Youuuuu

And came towards Lakshmi in anger but rishi shout at malishka Stop ittt malishka I think you should leave.

Malishka :Rishi how can you talk to me like that too for a girl like lakshmi.

Rishi: I said leave for now I will talk to you tomorrow. Please.

Malishka stare at lakshmi angrily and leaves.

Now every one start to leave after a big confrontation but sleep is far awy from everyone eyes.

Neelam and Virender Room

Neelam: How can you offer a job to lakshmi without consulting with me?? What about our reputation??

Virender: Neelam its not about always business, reputation, profit etc. Sometimes Relation is more important than all of this sorts. Please see lakshmi big heart, after this big betrayal she is still ready to protect our son. That son who betrayed her, broke her heart in uncountable pieces.You know she have a option she can leave the home, can do police complaint against us, she can demand huge money from us. But what she asked for just a job . How can we become so selfish ? Can't we do this much for lakshmi.

Neelam didn't said anything but in mind she also agree with virender.

Virender and Neelam sleeps

Scene shift to Garden

Where ayush ahana, devika are talking

Devika: whatever happened with lakshmi bhabhi is not good. She is too good, I feel to bad seeing her condition. We did wrong with her.

Ahana: I agree with you. I feel too bad for bhabhi.

Ayush is silent and lost somewhere.

Ahana: Ayush where are you lost?

Ayush didn't hear

Devika and ahana shakes ayush and ayush comes back to reality.

Ayush: What happened?

Ahana: I am also asking you the same thing.

Ayush: I am thinking about Lakshmi.Whatever we did to lakshmi is too wrong. I am feeling too guilty.Today whatever her condition is we all are responsible for it. Today I am feeling like a criminal. I am feeling like I have committed a crime.

Ahana and Devika nods their head in agreement.

After their talk they go to their respective rooms to sleep.

Scene shift to karishma room

Where sonia is also present and they are talking to Malishka on call.

Sonia: Thank god that gawar lakshmi got to know all the truth. I don't regard her as my bhabhi.

Malishka: cool down sonia today I have to celebrate our victory.Now that lakshmi got to know her place. But I am 😡 with Rishi. He shout at me infront of everyone.

Karishma: Chill malishka. I know tomorrow he will apologize to you for this.

Malishka: I know but I will not forgive him this easily.

Karishma: Ok Baba. Do whatever you want. We are going to sleep.

Sonia: Bye

Malishka: Bye

Scene shift to terrace

Lakshmi is looking at the moon and looking really sad. She closed her eyes and a lone tear comes out from her eyes. She remembers her moments with Rishi and feel betrayed. She start to hate herself for loving a person like Rishi who have played with her emotions.

Suddenly a cool breeze touch her face and she remembers her father words"That after every dark night a pleasant morning comes No problem is permanent just you have to deal with it and its depend on that person how he deals with it ".

After remembering her father words Lakshmi felt a little relieved and very confident on herself.

She left to take her things ftom rishi'room so she can shift to her new room.

Scene shift to Rishi's room

He is feeling so many emotions at same time. Guilt, anger, restlessness, and a unknown pain.

He remembers lakshmi saying that she she don't believe in this relationship anymore. He feels a sudden pain.

He remembers his all moments with lakshmi. Their meeting, their marriage,how lakshmi save rishi from crocodile and shahana.

Rishi: You are so pure Lakshmi. You always help other without caring about yourself. You love me aimlessly.and what I did to you. Just betrayed you. I am feeling ashamed of myself. I don't deserve you at all. Every punishment of this world is less for my crime.My every sorry can't erase your pain.

Then Rishi hears a knock on the door

Lakshmi: Can I come in Mr. Oberoi?

After hearing Mr. Oberoi from lakshmi's mouth he feels lile someone stabbed his heart with knife.

Lakshmi repeat her question.

Rishi comes out of his thought

and nod his head.

Lakshmi take out a suitcase and start to pack her belongings.

Rishi stare at her.

Rishi after a deep thought

Rishi:I am sorry lakshmi. I know I did not do a mistake but committed a big crime by cheating you. I deserve every punishment of yours. But Please don't be silent. Take out your anger on me. Because it will hurt you more.

Lakshmi : Why are you pretending that you care for me? Now I know everything. So you don't need to act like a person which you are not. I know you didn't not care about me. You are with me because I can save you from your kundali dosh. But You know what if you had told me once before our marriage that I can save you from your kundali dosh. I will happily agreed to help you. But you didn't talk to me once just broke my trust and heart into pieces. You know what after today I will not be able to smile, to trust on anybody, Just because of you Rishi.

And tears come to her eyes.

After hearing Lakshmi confession tears comes to Rishi 'eyes also.

Lakshmi: I start to love you with all my heart. but after your betrayal my heart died.Now I don't trust marriages anymore.

After saying that lakshmi pack her things quickly.

Lakshmi took out her mangalsutra from her neck and gave to rishi and said this mangalsutra belongs to malishka and left the room painfully.

Rishi look at the mangalsutra and a lone tear comes to his eye unknowingly. and fist his hand to control his pain.

Both can't sleep in their respective rooms and remember their moments with each other.

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Next Morning

On Dining table

Everyone is present except Lakshmi and Rishi. Everyone is gloomy and tensed except Karishma and sonia. No one want to eat breakfast.

Lakshmi comes there in a white anarkali without sindoor or mangalsutra and saw everyone is sad and no one want to eat breakfast.

Lakshmi pov

What ever happened with me is wrong but here some people really care for me. Bauji always support me and treats me like a daughter and ayush when everyone was angry on me for shanaya case only ayush took my side and fought with everyone for me. Ayush and Devika always treat me like a sister just like shalu and bani. Dadi always shower her love on me. They all did for rishi because they love him a lot. I know some people don't like me but because of them I can't forget about all others. I am not going to be weak but I can't see them in pain.

Lakshmi: Aap sab log khana kyu nhi kha rahe hain? Bauji and Dadi aapko medicine bhi toh leni hain. Aap log please breakfast kar lijiye. Ayush, Ahana, Devika,Neelam Aunty, Karishma mam sonia aap log bhi breakfast kijiye kyu khane ka apmaan nhi karte hain. Haina Dadi!

Dadi:haa beta

Lakshmi start serving food to everyone.Just then Rishi comes and look at Lakshmi. Lakshmi also look at him with hate and ignore him.

Everyone look at Rishi. Rishi is looking very pale like he didn't sleep whole night.

Rishi sit on his chair.
Lakshmi after serving to everyone except rishi called sanjay ji

Lakshmi: Sanjay ji Please serve food to Mr. Oberoi. I am going to get ready for hotel. I don't want to be late at my first day.

Sanjay serve food to Rishi.

Lakshmi without looking at rishi leave from there.

Karishma: She is showing so much of attitude to us.

Dadi: Chup chap apna khana kha samjhi.

Karishma:Momm

Dadi: Agar tu apna khana shaanti se nhi khayegi toh ek mahine tak khana nhi milega aur naa koi money. Samjhi.

Karishma after hearing this silently eat her food.

Rishi after seeing Lakshmi behavior toward himself feels bad and go from their without having his food.

Neelam looks on.

After Sometime Rishi,Ayush,Virender are leaving for their work respectively.

Lakshmi shout Ayushhhh

Trio turns back and see lakshmi in royal blue patiala suit.

This look and this suit.



Rishi is mesmerized by her look.

Lakshmi ignore Rishi. Rishi feel bad.
Lakshmi comes toward Ayush.

Lakshmi: Ayush are you going to hotel?

Ayush : Yes, Lakshmi I am going to hotel.

Lakshmi : Can you do me favour?

Ayush: yes Lakshmi tell me what I have to do?

Lakshmi: Woh actually Today I am late. Can you drop me to office. And You have to explain me my work also. Can you please drop me ro office.

Ayush: Of course lakshmi. I have no problem. Infact you can go to hotel with me daily.

Lakshmi : No ayush . I don't want to be dependent on anybody. Today I was very late so just ask for your help. From tomorrow onwards I will go myself.

Ayush: ok Lakshmi

Lakshmi goes to virender and takes hia blessings and goes with ayush.

Rishi pov

Yesterday night I can't sleep because I was thinking about Lakshmi and today I look at her she looks beautiful but without sindoor and mangalsutra she looks incomplete. I feels like some precious think is lost by me and when she come in blue dress. I can't take my eyes off from her but she ignores me again and I again feel bad. Her words are just like a arrow on my heart. But I don't know why I am feeling like this? Why I am feeling like something precious is going away from me. WHY?

After hearing Virender call he comes to reality and goes to office with Virender.

At Rishi's Office
Rishi is thinking about Lakshmi when Malishka enters in his cabin.

Malishka: I am angry with you rishi. Yesterday You shouted on me for that gawar lakshmi. It was a big insult to me.

Rishi with lots of anger: How can you call Lakshmi a gawar. You know naa how pure soul she is. Hiw big her heart is. We are no one infront of her goodness.

Malishka: Don't you think you are praising lakshmi too much. Did she hiprotized you?

Rishi: She didn't do anything. I am just saying the truth.

Malishka: Truth! my foot.

Rishi:I am not in a mood to fight with you. So just go away. I am already having a headache.

Malishka comes and start pressing his head and says I am here to make your headache go away.

Rishi with damn anger : I said just go away and push her a little.

Malishka get very angry and leaves from there.

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