Rishmi ff part 17updated on page 10 (completed) - Page 4

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Next Morning , Dadi called Everyone.

Everyone comes there,

As you all know tomorrow is Karwa Chauth. So, Neelam & Lakshmi have to kept Fast& Virender and Rishi tomorrow you both will not go to office. It's my order.

All agrees.

Rishi becomes happy that Lakshmi will keep fast for him.

Lakshmi: Dadi What is the need of mine to keep Fast. I mean Malishka will keep fast for Rishi.

Neelam: You are Rishi wife. So its your duty to keep fast.

Lakshmi: Aunty fast are keep by trust and heart but my heart and trust are broken (Rishi feel angry on himself for hurting her so badly) because our relation is fake and I know Mr Oberoi also don't want me to keep fast for him.

Everyone looks at Rishi

Rishi: I have no problem if Lakshmi keep fast for me.

Lakshmi looked at him with shock.

Dadi: Now will you kept fast for him.

Neelam: Why we have to ask mummy ji She will have to.

Virender:Lakshmi beta you regard me as your father so please for my sake please keep the fast.

Lakshmi Nod.

Rishi become happy.

Now every one seated for breakfast. Everyone have their breakfast silently.

Karishma pov

I have to do something. Today I saw when Lakshmi refused to keep fast for rishi he become upset and when she said yes he becomes happy. Everyone are slowly accepting Lakshmi which is not good Malishka.
Karishma pov ended

Karishma call Malishka and tell her to keep the fast and explain her what happened today.

Karishma: If now you don't take it seriously then it will be too late.

Malishka: Ok aunty I will keep the fast for Rishi.
Karishma: Thats good beta.

They end the call



Lakshmi looks

Today I am not posting hotel scene as today Rishi is not in hotel.

At jewelry store.

Rishi make a customized necklace for Lakshmi of diamond as a karwa Chauth gift.
After a two hour explanation he ordered the necklace



He paid the money

Shopkeeper : Sir your necklace will we ready till tomorrow 4pm

Rishi: Ok I will pick up the necklace.

Rishi get Malishka call , Rishi get irritated and pick up the call

Malishka: Baby I am keeping fast for you.

Rishi: Why? I mean you don't trust in customs right.

Malishka:But I love you baby. So I Will keep fast for your long age amd you have to be with me whole day.

Rishi: But Tomorrow is a function in home too. So I can't be with you.

Malishka: can't you do this for me amd start her drama.

Rishi:Ok

After that malishka cut the call.

Rishi leaves

At Oberoi Mansion

All are set preparing for Karva Chauth. After preparation everyone goes to dinning table and sat on respective seats

Neelam: Sargi comes from maayka. So Lakshmi your sargi will come tomorrow at 5 O clock🕒

Lakshmi:Ok Aunty

Neelam: After dinner come to hall Ok.

Lakshmi : Ok aunty.

After dinner Lakshmi goes to hall.

Neelam: Your shagun and remember you will not drink or eat anything after sargi.

Lakshmi:Ji Aunty

Dadi gives shagun to Neelam.

After that all goes to their respective rooms.

Lakshmi pov

What a tragedy is happening with me. I am keeping fast for that man who neither don't love me at all nor regard me as his wife. Why everyone use me for his grants. Why don't any think that I also have a heart, I also have feelings, I also feel pain, I am also a human not a doll that everyone will use me according to their wish.

I love Rishi with all my heart bit he always lied. His love, care, affection, helping nature everything was just a lie.
After a little break down she sleeps.

Rishi pov

I know surely that I am attracted to Lakshmi very badly. Her innocence, her care, her selfless nature, her love her everything make me crazy. I can't see her with anyone. But Is it love? I ordered A necklace for her I hope she like it.
With this thought she sleeps.

Next Morning at 4 O clock everyone wakes up and get ready in red dress
Lakshmi saree



Lakshmi sargi was sent by shalu and bani and everyone have their sargi.

After that Lakshmi leaves for hotel by a car as ordered by neelam.

At hotel.

All are doing their work. Dev comes amd offer sweets to priya and Jahnavi . Priya take the sweet and ask for the reason of distribution of sweets and Dev said just like that as my mom prepared So I thought to share it with everyone. Jahnavi refused the sweets by some excuses. Priya feel something fishy. After sometime its lunch time
Everyone are doing lunch together but this also Jahnavi refused that she is not feeling hungry. So Priya offered a glass of water but jahnavi refused for this too.

Priya: Jahnavi Do you have Karwa Chauth fast?

Lakshmi become shock and said (stammering) Noo I don't ----have. fast--- fast today? Why Why Will I have a fast and for whom.

Priya and dev know that she is lying and Take her to a hotel room and said If you think that we are your friend do please telle the truth. Tumhe humari dosti ki kasam.

Jahnavi: (crying) Yes I have a Karwa Chauth fast today. I am married .

Dev and priya get shocked.

Priya: To whom and you said you are unmarried in your records Jahnavi

Jahnavi : That is wrong. I am married and my real name is Jahnavi Arora.

They again get shocked

Dev: Then what is your real name?

Lakshmi : Lakshmi Rishi Oberoi.

Dev and Lakshmi get too shock .

both: What????????

Priya: You are Rishi Sir wife .

Lakshmi:yes

Thats it for today.

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lakshmi: yes , I am Rishi's wife .

Dev: Why did you hide your identity from us?

Priya: Why are you doing a job of receptionist. Being a OBEROI BAHU you can get any big post.

Lakshmi: for the answer of all your question you need to know my past.

Lakshmi start narrating her meeting with rishi, how she saved his life , how their marriage fixed, how rishi faked his love, how she get to know about his betrayal ,what is the motive behind the marriage. She told everything to them.

dev and priya get shocked.

Priya: how can Rishi Sir do this? How can he play with someones feeling like this. He has no right to do this with anyone. He make a joke of marriage.

Dev: I can't believe Rishi Sir can do this?

lakshmi: I also thought Rishi can't do this with me but he had done.He played with my feeling .

Priya: then Why did you keep fast for him. Did you still love Rishi Sir?

Lakshmi : I keep fast for him because Bauji(virender) told me to keep the fast for him and yes ,I still love him because I love him truely ,with my all heart .I want to hate him but my heart still can't hate him. For me love and marriage are not a joke. I loved him and I will always love him.

Dev: After a year what will you do?

Lakshmi: I will leave Mumbai with my sisters.

Priya:The One who did wrong will live happily and the one who is victim will leave? I will not leave Rishi Sir. How can he do this with you.

Lakshmi: No you will not say anything to him.

Priya: I will.

Lakshmi :You have my swear you will not say anything.

Priya: Why you love him so unconditional. He did not deserve it.

Lakshmi : I know but please.

Priya:Ok

Someone listen there talk and guess who is he

He is non other than Ayush. Ayush come inside and tell dev he need to talk to him.

Dev and Ayush leaves.

Ayush Cabin,

Ayush: I know that you know everything about Rishi Bhai and Lakshmi.

Dev: I know Sir but can I ask you something?

Ayush: Yes Sure

Dev: How can you let this happen with Jaan. I know you, you can never do wrong with someone then how you let this happen with Jaan.

Ayush :I know we did wrong with Lakshmi but now I want to make everything right.

Dev : But how sir.

Ayush: Dev actually Rishi Bhai loves Lakshmi but he didn't knew it himself. He is jealous of you.

Dev : What sir Rishi Sir is jealous of me but why?

Ayush: Because you call laakshmi jaan and you are her close friend too. So he can't tolerate your closeness with Lakshmi.

So I have a plan if you are Lakshmi friend then please help me to make everything right.

Dev: But how Sir

Ayush: Please Stay close to Lakshmi infront of Rishi Bhai then he will be jealous and will accept his feelings.

Dev: But Sir I love Priya.

Ayush :I know

Dev :But how you know sir.

Ayush : Everyone knows your eyes always show love for priya. Even today I have prepared everything. so you can propose to priya.But please help me.

Dev: Ok sir.

then Dev propse priya and priya accepted him whole heartily. Dev tell his how plan to her. She agree for the plan for her best friend sake.

I don't want to drag their parts so I didn't post it.

On the other hand

Rishi pick up the necklace and was going home when he see malishka car infront of Restaurant. He goes inside the restaurant and find malishka eating a vegetable sandwich. He clicked her pics and asked her.

Rishi: Where are you?

Malishka: I am in house. Doing rest as today is my first fast for you.

Rishi: Aaw How much you love me. You know what Today I thought to go with you Blue Orchid Restaurant with you to have a sandwich there because there's sandwich is so yum.

Malishka chokes

Malishka: You know naa baby today I have fast so how can we go there. We will go some other day.

Rishi: Yaa Sure.

Then Rishi goes to Roseland Hotel .

Priya and Dev sees him and get really angry but for Lakshmi sakes they remain silent.

Dev:JAAN you look so beautiful in PINK. you must wore somethink pink tomorrow.

Jahnavi :(smiling) Thank you Amd I will surely wear a pink outfit for sure.

Hearing this Rishi blood start boiling and he thought She is my wife then why will she wear a dress of his choice. She will wear a dress of my choice.

Rishi:(angrily looking at dev) Miss Jahnavi come to My cabin right now.

Rishi leaves and Jahnavi goes to his room.

Jahnavi knocks on the door.

Rishi :come inside

Jahnavi comes inside and said(rudely) What work do you have with me Mr. Oberoi.

Rishi :You always talk with everyone sweetly then Why you always talk with me rudely. I am your husband, someone talk with husbamd rudely.

Jahnavi :You are not my husband.

Rishi: I am your husband and I have many proofs.

Lakshmi : Its a lie you marry me for my horoscope. Its a namesake marriage which will end after a year.

Rishi: Husband is always Husband. Our marriage will never end. I will never allow you to go away from me.

Lakshmi: Why you want to stay with me your kundali dosh will end after a year. So why you want to stay with me because I know for sure that you don't love me.

Rishi: I love you a lot. I will not allow you to go away and a thing also. You looks like a angel in blue dress. So tomorrow you will wear a blue outfit.

Lakshmi :How cheap person you are. Firstly you played with my emotions by faking that you love me now you are doing the same thing with malishka. And I will wear a pink outfit because dev said it look good on me.

So I Will definitely wear a pink outfit for sure.

Rishi get angry and pinned Lakshmi to wall and stand too closely to her said.

"Whatever I feel for Malishka os just a attraction but for You I really fall. I really love you. I am telling you genuinely that I can't see you with anyone. You are just mine only mine. Do you get that .

And Yaa you should wear clothes which your husband likes not your brother.

Lakshmi : It's my wish What I wear you are no one to interrupt and which brother.

Rishi :I have every right on you and don't force me to show it and your brother is DEV

Lakshmi :You have no right on me and dev is not my brother he is my best and close friend.

Rishi get angreand hit his hand near Lakshmi and said remember one thing You are mine and only mine. I have the only person who can close to you.Do you get it? If you repeat this again then it wouldn't be good for dev. For you I can do anything .You have seen balwinder obsession for you. But my obsession for you is that much that I can put all the earth for you on fire.

Remember always that you are mine Mrs. Lakshmi Rishi Oberoi and kiss on her forehead and leaves.

Lakshmi become afraid but didn't show it and start to think something.

Thats it for today

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Awesome story keep writting it's awesome can smell the burning jealousy of RISHI 😜😜😜😜keep writting loving it

Originally posted by: chandujojo

Awesome story keep writting it's awesome can smell the burning jealousy of RISHI 😜😜😜😜keep writting loving it

Thank you so much 😊

Loved the update.. waiting to see more of this jealous possessive Rishi 😍

Originally posted by: Roroo

Loved the update.. waiting to see more of this jealous possessive Rishi 😍

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