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Posted: 3 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: chandujojo

It's it superb part mind-blowing extraordinary fantabulous historic hhaaaaaaaahaaaa.................. but really loved the part it was heart touching part I loved this part a lot keep writting your imagination is at another level....................ok bye see you at the comments at the next part 👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️




Thank you so much for your lovely comment ❤❤❤❤❤

And yes another part or say last part is here, I hope you will like it. ❤❤❤❤❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hii guys,

I don't know whether will you like today update or not. So please forgive me for the disappointment.

So continuing the story,

LEAP OF 5 YEARS

It's was a pleasant evening. Rishi returned from a Business Tour.

Rishi: (asking her mom) Mom Where is my Jaan??? I didn't see her from so many days, even didn't hear her voice. You know naa I didn't get peace till I talk to her, hug her.

Neelam: (happily) I know that beta, but she is too stubborn. She is not talking to anyone and (now worried) even didn't eat her food properly.

Rishi: (worriedly) What? Why? Why she didn't eat her food? She will fell ill. Why you didn't feed her?

Sonia: Bhai you know naa her stubbornness, she never listen to anyone except you then why you think that she will listen us.

Karishma: exactly.

Rishi: (impatiently) Where is she now?

Devika: In her room.

Rishi run upstairs. He comes infront of a room and open the door of the room. He found a girl sitting with puffed cheeks.

He entered into the room, the girl see him and turned her head.

Rishi: Oh! My Jaan is angry with me.

Girl: Yes, Dad. I am very angry with you.

Rishi: I am sorry Jaan.

Girl: Don't call me jaan dad, my name is Vanshika Oberoi.

Rishi: But I also know when I call you jaan. Your anger get vanished. I brought your favorite chocolates and doll. If you are angry then

Vanshika interrupting him,

Vanshika:Dad give me my chocolates and doll.

Rishi: But you are angry naa.

Vanshika: No dad, I am not angry with you and hug him and kissed him.

Rishi: I love you too jaan.

Just then Lakshmi and a boy enter.

Boy: Vanshu give me a chocolate too, dad bring it for both of us.

Vanshika: No, I am not going to give it to you Vansh. First call me didi.

(Yes, Rishmi have twins)

Vansh: You know naa you are my younger sister by 45 mins but you are my dear sister too, So for your happiness I will call you Didi Badi didi please give me chocolates too.

Vanshika gives chocolate to Vansh and then they go to downstair to play.

Rishi: Vansh is just like you sweetheart, innocent, and pure.

Lakshmi: Aur Vanshu is just like you stubbornnnn.

Rishi:What you call me stubborn. I will show you my stubbornness and then he start running behind her to catch her.
After 5 mins he catch her and kiss on her forehead.

Rishi: Thank you for everything Lakshmi, you give me everything, I love so much.

Lakshmi was going to say something but Shalu knocks.

Shalu: (happily) Di Jiju see who has come to me both of you.

Rishi: (sadly) I was romancing with your sister, and she was going to say I love you to me but you disturb us.

Shalu: Sorrry jiju. But please come downstair fast.

They come downstair and found Dev and Priya. Rishi mood get upset.

Rishi: Aa gaya mera dushman, pata nahi yaha kyu aata hain

Dev: Hii Jaan, how are you.

Rishi get angry.

Dev: Hii Rishi Sir, how are you.

Rishi: Hii dev, I was good but now after seeing you I am not sure that I am good or not.

All understand.

Priya goes to children and give them Ice cream.

Lakshmi: You are still jealous Rishi. He is my best friend.

Rishi: Ok, sorry.

They all are going to sit, Dev was going to sit near Lakshmi intentionally but rishi sit between them and gives a fake smile then dev sit with priya. They chat for sometime. Then Neelam and all family comes there.

Neelam: Today I am so happy to see you after 6 months. So let take a family pic.

Shalu: Yes mami but I am not going to stand with Ayush, he always make my hair messy.

Ayush: Mami, she is lying.

They start fighting.

Lakshmi : STOPPPPPPP. Just stand with each other without any prank.

(Shayush get married Four year ago)

They all stand and all couple stand with each other.

They clicks some beautiful pictures .

The End.






Sorry guys if this story doesn't meet your expectations but I promise I will come with another story.

Its my request as it was the laat chapter, please do comments.

Thank you so much for all your support guys.

Bye guys.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#63

Loved it Tanukirti it was awesome who told that it doesn't match our expectation of was superb really Vanshika so cute like Rishi and vansh like lakshmi really loved it but the last part was superb and you ended the last part verry well

P.S I am advicing you go become a writer and script writter in serials sorry joking but really loved the part

Waiting for the next story

Till then lots pf love to you bye bye ❤️❤️😍😍😍😘😘🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Roroo

Thank you ❤️❤️❤️


Thank you so much 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: chandujojo

Loved it Tanukirti it was awesome who told that it doesn't match our expectation of was superb really Vanshika so cute like Rishi and vansh like lakshmi really loved it but the last part was superb and you ended the last part verry well

P.S I am advicing you go become a writer and script writter in serials sorry joking but really loved the part

Waiting for the next story

Till then lots pf love to you bye bye ❤️❤️😍😍😍😘😘🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰


Thank you so much for your lovely opinion. I'm so glad that you always like my story, support me. Some of my readers were not happy by the step I have taken to end the story. But I am happy that you still want me to write more stories. I promise I will be back with a new story. 😍



Till then take care 😊


Bye👋

Edited by Tanukirti - 3 years ago

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