AshDeep TS:- Who First? (DELETED) - Page 14

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hi Muskan! My darling 🤗

Minu Diii! Thank you so much for reading! 😃

Irony of my life---Commenting nearly to last in ''Who First''. Sorry darling *Kaan Pakad ke Sameer style*.

Hayeee...aise bholepan pe toh kisi ka bhi dil aa jaye...aapke ironies par main fida ho gayi Di!

I loved the title of the part.Flames and flicker have always been my weaknesses and most used words perhaps.Flames are the only thing who leave effect even after dousing..So is love and so is your update.

True words indeed! Flames have the power to destroy and the power to create...and flickers can either discourage or motivate. Since uncertainties are such a crucial part of life, i thought why not name a chapter on this?😉

Dialogues have been well written as per the diction repartee of characters involved.Flirt to love,the tone sets in.Marvelous work in this department.👏👏

Thank you so much Minu Di...ab kya karein...sangat ka asar hai 😆

Oh God..Why does that K.has to cry at drop of hat.Being hot doesnot entitle to heat someone's heart..

I guess we share similar feelings when it comes to Kristina and her equation with AshDeep 😉😆 I thought why not vent out all my frustration from Ashi's perspective 😆

First person narration is difficult and you did excel.👍🏼

Thank you so much! 😳

The one liners were bang on.👏 I was bowled over.😃

I feel honored! Once again, these one liners ka concept have been inspired by you! 😳

Loved the birthday cake portion.And her confession...Must tell you all the IVs came flowing to mind..Vivid and ringing.

Same here Di! I was visualizing all their IVs and SamAina moments to write down this part 😆 I'm glad to hear you liked it! 😃

The ending was beautiful.That was PERFECT.

To burn with love and keep quiet about it is the greatest punishment one can bring on oneself.

True words once again! Let's see whether Ashi realizes this too...😉 Thank you so much for your words of appreciation Minu Di!

And you addressed it well..

Thanks for the PM and keep coming with more.

With love-

Minu.

Originally posted by: bmk28

Hey Muskan... What a lovely update and how I loved thoughts explained about A by R.. And so wonderfully R expressed his true feelings...Waiting for the next one..

PS - I so hope that your story doesnt remain only work of fiction 😛

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Firstly about the teaser...its so intense...just loved it Muskan😃👏

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Amazing update dear😃

The way you started with him being a bit rude to Kristi followed by the meeting of the two...he admiring her simplicity and the cake cutting followed by the conversation was fab😃👏

Their confrontation after the whatsapp message was a treat to read😃

Loved the last part of the update to the core😃👏

Sorry for being late in commenting dear...thanks a lot for the pm😃

Originally posted by: KhwabonKiRani

Amazing update...well written

Originally posted by: Shippu92

Cnt wait for the update.. This is my most Fav ashdeep story. I love ashdeep bt I am not obsessed abt them bt as per ivs of Ashi n randeep they are looking for qualities in there partners which they themself possess if they ever become ashdeep it is gonna be adorable couple ..update fasst please today only cnt wait