AshDeep TS:- Who First? (DELETED) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Unres

Muskaaan, this was splendid👏

Kristina played cupid.. Aww😳 Bechari ko sabne galat samjha

Main to dar rhi thi ki Randeep Kristina k sath dance kr rha tha to use wo kuch aur na samajh le

Their moment in the room was☺️

Originally posted by: Radkam

U had me quaking with fear when he let her go! I thot, oh no... no happy ending! 😔

I was abt to cry when I saw that u hadn't finished the update, but there was little more left... I m a sucker for happy endings so thanx a ton! 🤗

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Perfect it was ...

All's well that ends well .

Oh my God thankyou for not making krituu evil ..

Loved it

I so wish these babies fall in love together

Originally posted by: Prizi

and its end here
I'm going to miss this one badly

btw such an amazing ts dear

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Loved it! Beta...asar pad raha hai sangat hai,...tumhari masoomiyat gayi...Main details likhne baithi to pura update hi chaap dungi...Randeep drinking by the bar, eyeing Ashi...reminded me of EU ka inebriated Sameer, eyeing Naina..bas transparent pinki sari ki jagah Ashi ka attire..😆

A commendable job in taking the story forward from jealousy to intimacy...you've written it really well dear! I was engrossed in their romance...then Kristina butting in...and then the whole facade blown off! You were slower than Sameer and Naina so we had to become Swati n Munna! Too good!

Chalo finally...do premi mil gaye n they kissed too! Faster than Sameer n Naina thankfully!

Keep writing dear!

Love

Sur