I usually avoid AshDeep stories but just here for you...will revert back soon...😳
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Aah, Muskan, this chapter was love. Unlike the previous OS you have written, this was based on Randeep's point of view and I am more than happy😃
Rishina's dialogues were spot on, the bubbly personality taken in account and of course, the girlfriend😉😳The mistake raised my heartbeats too and the endearing part is he thought of her that time...
The paragraphs on his feelings that followed was pure bliss, the way you added your imagination to the real life events seemed really convincing and that helped me to connect with what Randeep must be feeling at her absence👏
Her habits that tempted him, his observations on minute details on her way of acting...Amazing dear!
Ayesha and Kristina seemed uneasy at the question of Ashi's whereabouts and indeed there's something! I am curious like Randeep now😆
I really appreciate that little detailing you have added about how Madhushree and Naina are always up for a dance😳
It's really fun to see them dance together...!
What's up with Kristina hugs!?🤔
Oh, this is interesting! Sam is angry on seeing who is at the door...who is the intruder? I can't wait to know although my mind says Ashi😉
I can't wait for Love Kills and A Broken Future Of Togetherness too...I will leave it to you to decide on which to update 😃
Edited by Mayashika - 5 years ago
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