AshDeep TS:- Who First? (DELETED)

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Edited by Muskan2001 - 7 years ago

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

Res! 😳

Unres!

Wow is the intruder Ashi? 😆 sadly my mind is one track here! :P

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I loved reading ittt! 😳

So he has admitted to himself at least, about his love for her, that's so cute! 😃

Upon being teased, where's your girlfriend, he thought of her damnnn! Feelsss ☺️

Ayesha and his confrontation was nicely written, so something's up!

Is this gonna lead to a love triangle reading Kristina hugging him again and again?😆😛 I seriously think so!

I can't wait for next! When are you giving the next part? 😊

Loved how you wrote how he wanted to feed her first and he wanted her presence. It was utterly cuteee! ❤️

Update super soon!

Much love

Aayushi ⭐️

Edited by A.Green - 7 years ago

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

I usually avoid AshDeep stories but just here for you...will revert back soon...😳

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Aah, Muskan, this chapter was love. Unlike the previous OS you have written, this was based on Randeep's point of view and I am more than happy😃

Rishina's dialogues were spot on, the bubbly personality taken in account and of course, the girlfriend😉😳The mistake raised my heartbeats too and the endearing part is he thought of her that time...

The paragraphs on his feelings that followed was pure bliss, the way you added your imagination to the real life events seemed really convincing and that helped me to connect with what Randeep must be feeling at her absence👏

Her habits that tempted him, his observations on minute details on her way of acting...Amazing dear!

Ayesha and Kristina seemed uneasy at the question of Ashi's whereabouts and indeed there's something! I am curious like Randeep now😆

I really appreciate that little detailing you have added about how Madhushree and Naina are always up for a dance😳

It's really fun to see them dance together...!

What's up with Kristina hugs!?🤔

Oh, this is interesting! Sam is angry on seeing who is at the door...who is the intruder? I can't wait to know although my mind says Ashi😉

I can't wait for Love Kills and A Broken Future Of Togetherness too...I will leave it to you to decide on which to update 😃

Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago

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Prerana167099

@Prerana167099

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

Hey very nice please update

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_shweta98

@_shweta98

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

Oh my god.. this is loveee!! When will you update next?! I'm waiting eagerly already !!!!

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

Unressed above!

And oh to answer your title for the TS, I'm first 😆😉

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S****A ;)

@Sujz

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

Dont make us wait! Please update soon... please pretty please!😲😃

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bmk28

@bmk28

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Haila.. What was that!! Is it how it happened in real!? Please update the next part soon.. The hype of those 2 days had left many people wondering as to what actually transpired.. So you better unfold the story for all of us soon :)

The build up was interesting and so was turmoil of emotions!!

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Radkam

@Radkam

Navigator

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Posted: 7 years ago

Feels all over the place... m sure to dream about them now!!! Plz update soon!

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

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Tumne to kasam hi kha li hai Muskan ki mujhe shipper bana ke hi chodogi! 🤣 Ab main pakka B'day videos dekhne wali hun Randeep ke! Everything was perfect! I loved the flow, loved the doubts, loved the emotions at play here. You've melded the offscreen chatter into this story with perfection! Is the silent intruder Ashi? 😉 Ab I'm desperate for more!

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