AshDeep TS:- Who First? (DELETED) - Page 12

Originally posted by: Muskan2001

Thank you so much Aarti! My comments are in blue! 😃

Amezing it was ..

Unressed at Pg 11! 😊

Very nice dear! Read both the parts together.. very well written. It's easy to feel connected to the couple in question ;) all the emotions expressed are spot on!

Originally posted by: dreamyp

Waoohhh rd confessed now it's ashi turn.. I NVR liked kittu n ab ti bilkul b nh hihihi

That was a long n great update dear. Pm me nxt tym if u do..

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Amezing it was ..

You ended it at such a point ..

It's not fair

I was so engrossed in the story

Really looking forward to the next part

Can't wait anymore

Love

Laalchi reader

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Very nice dear! Read both the parts together.. very well written. It's easy to feel connected to the couple in question ;) all the emotions expressed are spot on!

Originally posted by: A.Green

Res!

First again! 😆😉

I have to open another tab to comment on this! I will forget the important parts otherwise na 😳

Aww, thank you so much Aayushi! 😳

I don't have words to tell you how much I adored this update

Bhagwaan jhoot na bulaye, ab main aur kitna sharmau 😳😆

It was beyond flawless for me! Not a single moment where I wasn't intrigued and in a dreamland! When you posted it , I was in my coaching class and instead of hearing the teacher, I was reading this 😆

Thank you so much Aayushi! I'm really pleased to hear you loved the update! Haww, coaching class mein update...hope your teacher didn't catch you daydreaming 😆...puche toh unko bhi bol dena...yeh un dino ki baat hai, Sir. 😆

Coming to the update, contrary to popular belief, the one on the door was Kristina! I knew it , I knew she liked him!!! Ahhh 😛

When she was clinging on to him and he was being cringy, I wished he had slapped her 🤣 (This is purely fictional, I don't want to slap her in reality- disclaimer warning for some people 😆)

Someone had to create conflicts between AshDeep...I bet Randeep really wanted to slap her too, but he respects women a bit too much 😆

Theek hai, Now, I loved how he was dumbstruck seeing Ashi ❤️ Mere cutiess! I seriously thought they were dating, how you described them in the start , flirting and calling her baby and all haan? 😉☺️

But alas! Ye gadhe toh pyaar karte hain but not confessing, and Ashi toh aur badi dumbo hai 😆😛

"Pyar karne wale, kabhi darr te nahi...😆" AshDeep have to take lessons from SamAina on how to confess...Randeep indirectly tried to confess through his constant flirtatious attempts while Ashi did the same through explaining Kristina's feelings for him 😆

Mumbai is her first crush! OMG mine too

Mumbai is definitely love! 😳❤️

---Then you have the Ashi you always wanted, Randeep.

--- I'm not some Naina Agarwal to fall for you."Wish you were. - These lines have my heart ❤️

Aww, thank you so much, Aayushi! Minu Di is the one when it comes to one-liners...I'm so glad to hear you liked them! 😳

I knew she was teasing him saying acha toh main jati hun after he mentioned the after party, they're such cutiess!

The cake cutting and the conversation that followed was love! 😳

She liking Bollywood and he liking EDM reminded me of my boyfriend though he's not as cute as Sameer to change the song for me! 😆😛

Ooohh...you have a Sameer too! Show this to him and be like, "Expectations hai yeh..😆" I'm not much of an EDM person either...Bollywood is bliss!

What was her reaction at that Kristina! He was freaking saying I love you girl And she was going on about Kristina!! :/

I wish next part mein Ashi ko akal aaye 😆

I wish so too! 😃

The last line Punishment ho toh aisi ho, warna na ho! 😉

You liked it! Hayeee...I thought thoda over ho gaya tha...😆 I'm so happy to hear you liked it!

Amazing update Muskan! Update veryyy sooon! 😳😃

Ab aise comments likhoge toh jaldi update karna hi padega 😳😃

Loving this ts...i m an ardent ashdeep shipper and this ts is like sone pe suhaga...loved it

Hi Muskan! My darling 🤗