AshDeep TS:- Who First? (DELETED)

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violette

@violette

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#161

You write really well...👏I would consider this as fictional story... But the characters were so well written... They were entity.by themselves... Any face would fit into this Ashi and Randeep..

Loved how you took story forward from Randeep's pov... Really the romance was very well written and absolutely mesmerizing the way you described it...

Their love... Well I could nt understand Ashi's reservations or such strong stance justifying her best friends so called love... Could feel for the poor boy here...

But we'll the story premise was just too weak to explain the logical/ emotional glitchesss...

But thecharacters and the way you have written the story made up for every thing missing... And I absolutely loved reading this story..

And needless to say that this last part was my favourite part...😳

You have a gifted talent, please do write more romantic stories...

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bmk28

@bmk28

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Muskan2001

Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you liked it! You had earlier requested something from Randeep's POV on my AshDeep OS...so all the idea credits go to you...hope I served justice to this TS 😃

Muskan 😃

I absolutely loved it, Muskan.. Thank you for considering my request. You did justice fully and not only that you got a positive closure.. Will look forward to read more from your side..

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#163

This was beautiful Muskaan...i loved the Ashi Kristi part especially😃

i enjoyed reading this TS to the core...beautiful conceptualisation...keep up the good work dear😃👏

Thanks for the pm and so sorry for being late😳

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#164

I am here finally to leave a note on the third part too.

Liked how you didn't leave any grey shades at the end, it was all Kristina's plan.

Their moments were lovely, the hurt and the passion mixed was something which was awaited.

Loved it! 😳

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Muskan2001

Have I left you in shock? 😆

What do you think? 😉

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#166

Hello fellow friends and AshDeep lovers!

Due to certain circumstances, I will have to delete this TS from IF.

I would like to thank you all for your constant support and love regarding this Three-Shot. It was a first for me and will forever remain in my heart. However, I won't be able to put this up on India Forums any longer.

Thank you for your cooperation and support,

Muskan

P.S:- I won't stop writing...so I'll fulfill all my AshDeep wishes through SamAIna 😆

😊

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anzum

@Anzum505

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Muskan2001
Hello fellow friends and AshDeep lovers!
Due to certain circumstances, I will have to delete this TS from IF.

I would like to thank you all for your constant support and love regarding this Three-Shot. It was a first for me and will forever remain in my heart. However, I won't be able to put this up on India Forums any longer.

Thank you for your cooperation and support,

Muskan

P.S:- I won't stop writing...so I'll fulfill all my AshDeep wishes through SamAIna 😆

😊

First of all u just shouldn't delete something which is close to ur heart.. And if it's bcz of shipping /no shipping things, dear lots of people are shipping nowadays.. And this is just a story.. U shouldn't delete it .. But if u have decided to do so, of course it's totally up to u.. But i must say this one is my most favourite Ashdeep fan fic ever and it will always be.. Thank u for writing this one.. And i must say that thank God i visited IF today before u deleted .. I've saved it bcz I'll love to read it again..

Lots of love..

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Anzum505

First of all u just shouldn't delete something which is close to ur heart.. And if it's bcz of shipping /no shipping things, dear lots of people are shipping nowadays.. And this is just a story.. U shouldn't delete it .. But if u have decided to do so, of course it's totally up to u.. But i must say this one is my most favourite Ashdeep fan fic ever and it will always be.. Thank u for writing this one.. And i must say that thank God i visited IF today before u deleted .. I've saved it bcz I'll love to read it again..

Lots of love..

Thank you so much for your support, Anzum.

Some things are just beyond our reach and we find ourselves to be helpless. I will post this on my blog eventually and will certainly let you know... 😊

Thank you once again! 😃

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anzum

@Anzum505

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Muskan2001

Thank you so much for your support, Anzum.

Some things are just beyond our reach and we find ourselves to be helpless. I will post this on my blog eventually and will certainly let you know... 😊

Thank you once again! 😃

I'll love to read more about ashdeep.. plz let me know whenever u post on ur blog.. 😊

Love...