AshDeep TS:- Who First? (DELETED) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Ha, Muskan, I am so late on this that I feel embarrassed.

No worries at all Shreya...tum agar abhi se embarrassed feel lar rahi ho imagine my plight 😕😆

Kristina's clingy attitude towards Randeep was due to her liking for him, well no comments there. Had that thought in my mind, the narration was surely leading it that way!

I'm glad I could write up to your expectations 😊

They seem comfortable physically on a whole new level, is it because of their mutual feeling😉

Maybe...

Her love for him was making her emotionally, the tear drop which is the result. And Randeep not asking the question why the tears felt strange, maybe he already knows the answer.

He probably does...because they don't need words to convey feelings...similarly Ashi too understood his inner feelings without him confessing his love to her.

Wish you were Hmm, was it just flording or a real emotional confession? My heart wishes for it to be the latter one.

Up to the reader...I guess you already know what I wished it to be too... 😉

True about the wasting of food but some people just don't understand, apart from the waste of food, getting it off is a hard task and your face will remain oily which I hate🤔

So true...I personally don't understand the concept of masking your face with cake...itni achhi cheez hai...usko khaane mein lo na 😆 Relatable facial issues, Shreya...I totally get you! 😆

The punishment is what I am eager to read about, explore more about.

Hope the next part matches up to your eagerness... 😃

Ashi seems to be in an emotional mess and I am curious whether any confrontation happened between Ashi and Kristina.

Let's see what the two friends unfold in the next part... 😃

Can't wait for the next and dear, I have unreserved in pg 1 for the part 1! 😃

Can't wait to read that too! 😃

Originally posted by: Mayashika

I usually avoid AshDeep stories but just here for you...will revert back soon...😳

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Aah, Muskan, this chapter was love. Unlike the previous OS you have written, this was based on Randeep's point of view and I am more than happy😃

Rishina's dialogues were spot on, the bubbly personality taken in account and of course, the girlfriend😉😳The mistake raised my heartbeats too and the endearing part is he thought of her that time...

The paragraphs on his feelings that followed was pure bliss, the way you added your imagination to the real life events seemed really convincing and that helped me to connect with what Randeep must be feeling at her absence👏

Her habits that tempted him, his observations on minute details on her way of acting...Amazing dear!

Ayesha and Kristina seemed uneasy at the question of Ashi's whereabouts and indeed there's something! I am curious like Randeep now😆

I really appreciate that little detailing you have added about how Madhushree and Naina are always up for a dance😳

It's really fun to see them dance together...!

What's up with Kristina hugs!?🤔

Oh, this is interesting! Sam is angry on seeing who is at the door...who is the intruder? I can't wait to know although my mind says Ashi😉

I can't wait for Love Kills and A Broken Future Of Togetherness too...I will leave it to you to decide on which to update 😃

Originally posted by: A.Green

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And it's an hattrick!! I am first for the third time here now 😆😛