IshRa TS: I see you, I see you not. (Final Pt 3 - Pg 10 - 10/05)

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Anuhyaa
This is so so beautiful, that I had to login to comment...

What have you done here is so amazing...
Raman & Ishita getting all their hurt & feelings out open is pretty much everyone's dream right now...& you have done such a fabulous job of it ..
with out siding with anyone & without neglecting any words ...
What they do afterwards is a story for another day.

Thank You...
& Iam so glad that I stumbled on to this..

@bold - That's a wonderful compliment, thank you so much 😳 😳

These are beautiful characters, that unfortunately live at the mercy of CVs. Though I doubt we'd get to see a confrontation on the show, but hope never dies 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: gargpoo
Omg i m speechless...
Wat a masterpiece...hats off to u...
Their face off ..opened up to each other...their eyes did the talking too ..
Loved it

Thanks a lot 😳 I'm glad you liked it so 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi
This is so beautiful
loved it
would love to see this type of confrontation btw Ishra.

Would love the same Thank you so much 😳

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Jaanu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

awesome update dr.👏👏
thanks 4 pm.

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Dmug

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Beautiful update..i liked the fact that u kept it open ended because they need to reconcile a lot before they get back together it cant happen overnight it will be a gradual development..the hurt and pain they have gone through cant be healed merely by saying i missed u and crying rivers and hugging each other; they need to win back each others trust and love to finally reunite..and kudos to your thought..though its not an end its a begining for the blissful end..

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: KPDT.DIVAN
Completely speechless.. I hv no words...

Thank you 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: -K.13-
Yet another lovely piece of writing & I enjoyed the open-ended nature of the TS...
On screen the CVs have dug themselves into a grave of a messy "relationship" that will be fixed, undoubtedly with stupidity as if any ounce of realisim was added to this - IshRa would be no more

Hope you continued you inspired writing streak! :)

Krishyben 🤗

I don't know what are these CVs upto, definitely not upto something good 😆 😆 But ultimately they'll patch them back and soon, otherwise how would you and I be able to watch 😆

I'm glad you liked it though 😃 😳

On the contrary, I hope this streak goes away because it's now taking too much time 😆

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Noteworthy
That was absolutely wonderful! I really loved the concept of this story. Great job!

Thank you so much 😳 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Zoyamalik2005
I loved it. Loved it. Thank you for making it so realistic. I really hope their forgiveness on the show doesn't happen at bullet speed. This was sheer magic and now I have to go away and lower my expectations...again 😆

Thanks a lot Zoya 😃 I'm glad you loved it so much 😳

As I started writing, I realized that the mess they are in is not an easy one to clear. They cannot just kiss and make up. So many years have passed since they saw each other, so many hurtful words and actions have taken place, it is not at all to just let go and embrace the other person no matter how much you love him / her. Too much water under the bridge, will take a lot of time to build the dam.

@bold - Isn't that the case with all of us? 😆