IshRa TS: I see you, I see you not. (Final Pt 3 - Pg 10 - 10/05) - Page 10

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Fantastic

Thanks 4 The PM

Originally posted by: JDTKP

awesome update dr.👏👏
thanks 4 pm.

Originally posted by: Dmug

Beautiful update..i liked the fact that u kept it open ended because they need to reconcile a lot before they get back together it cant happen overnight it will be a gradual development..the hurt and pain they have gone through cant be healed merely by saying i missed u and crying rivers and hugging each other; they need to win back each others trust and love to finally reunite..and kudos to your thought..though its not an end its a begining for the blissful end..

Originally posted by: Anum_says

Beyond perfect..

AWESOME piece of work..

Brilliant

Originally posted by: Tuc_Mob

Nice story!!!!

Originally posted by: kaa1202

It was so beautiful Nidoo...

Raman & Ishita are complex characters...

Raman has no control over his words..

Ishita has no control over her actions..

They r flawed but unique in their own way..

The Open talk is what needed in the show...

But what you wrote is pure bliss..

I m confident that CVs won't give as half as u gave it in here..

Lower my expectations on CVs after reading this final beautiful piece..

Originally posted by: -Anku-

Nids 😳 I told you this before, and I am telling you today. This story of yours, and especially this part is one of your best work ever. The last part being a masterstroke. Putting forth what you think in one part, a conversation that could run deep and be endless into something so crisp, concise and so perfectly takes a lot of talent, and you have that in abundance.

Anku, I can't hear it enough from you 🤗 🤗

I can't point just one line or one instance or one moment I liked in this part. The whole of it was genius.

Thank you ☺️

But some of the best, ones that stay back once I've shut the screen..

To Param, outside the court.

To Subbu's mother, in Iyers' old house.

To Shagun, inside their house and everywhere else.

To his father, that led to the family feud.

Claiming her, as his own.

In a bus, asking for a kiss.

In a restaurant, asking for a hug.

In their bedroom, asking for the special night.

Everywhere he could remind her that she belonged to him

👏👏 That was so effective. Even Ishita couldn't stop him. And these scenes just flashed past. What's most commendable in your work is that through the flow of your parts, there's always a high point that makes you stay back and think, this is one of them.

I had this scene in mind for a very long time to be honest. Because every time Raman utters "Biwi ho tum meri" I get goosebumps. I think it is the strongest form of speech that delivers to her, and claims her as his own in the absolute sense. It signifies love, possession, authority, belongingness, care, all in one. It indicates that she only belongs to him, mind, body and soul. It is something she never received from anyone else, which is why these 4 words shut her up every single time she hears them.

Another masterstroke that he took her to the cliff...something I'd tag as poetic justice...not that I mean that its what Ishita should face. But it got them full circle.

That was the plan 😳

Their inner battle, like it's been on since the last two parts is a way to highlight just how well they know each other, that they read each others eyes, expressions and know what the other is going to say or is thinking even without having them say it.

They're soul-mates for a reason 😳 ❤️

"Ruhi... See, who has come to meet you? Remember, two days ago we were talking about her... how I told you that she joined you in the after world, leaving me alone... So obviously she loved you more than me, more than anyone else in the world... that she always cared for you more than her own self... that she would do everything in the world except hurt you... She lied, beta! She lied to you, and to me! She did not join you in the after world, neither did she stay back with me... But see... she's alive! She's alive, Rooh! Your Ishima's alive! And she didn't tell anyone!" he laughed maniacally, till his breath hitched and tears flew out of his eyes.

Those words said so much. That Raman came there more often, facing the worst day of his life... talking to his seemingly dead daughter, and talking to her about Ishita. His words admitting she could never hurt her own child, washing away the accusations he made earlier.

I'd like to believe he does so. No one can survive without venting out the pain for seven long years, and he's in a position where he can't share that with anyone else. So he comes back to this place where he lost it all, bares his heart to the two angels that knew him inside out. Talks, cries, laughs, just bares his soul.

Their confrontation, him questioning why she played dead, why she let him believe he killed her, drove her to her death, of how she would feel if he would die and she would have to exist in that same world without him?

She fights back, but not telling him that he had wrongly accused her, but letting him know how much his trust, his love, his belief meant to her that she believed each word he said. She lived with the accusations of being a bad omen, bad mother and a bad wife and didn't come back for his happiness.

And they truly are at an impasse. They can't be having a solution here, not right away.

Yup. As I mentioned in the post note as well, all that has passed between them is too much to get dissolved in a moment. They'll both need to work their way through this, to build their trust back up. Love alone, is just not enough, when you have so much water under the bridge.

Every word, every emotion, every damn thing in this part has left me speechless and amazed, but if there's something that stole the show... it's their inner thoughts, their acceptance of the mistakes made, of the others feelings ...those inner thoughts summed up their relation, whatever they were and are...what they will be was best left unknown. LOVED LOVED how you ended this. Couldn't have done it better.

👏👏👏 BRILLIANT Stuff Nids. So proud 🤗